The End That Only I Know

Is Xiaoka Lin Que? Lin Que ten years later

A good book just disappears from this world, just like your student card ten years ago. Seeing you give up it also disappears in the world. It is a kind of suffering called letting go. I think the author is also in pain. It will probably be a long time next time I see your book. I don't want to see a life that fails while growing...

The author is very courageous. As a newcomer, he dares to write two books, and he dares to write about the senior year of high school. Many people will instinctively have headaches when they think about the senior year of high school. Even if I have graduated from college for many years, I can't change it 😅 The above is a joke Advantages: 1 The story is creative, 2 The story is good, it is a novel that tells a good story, 3 The description of the family is full 4 The single chapter is large Disadvantages: 1 The character list The description of emotion is too simple, full of words such as laughter, sorrow, etc. There are many types of laughter, such as evil smiles, silly smiles, grins, 2 The description of scenery is a bit rough 3 When the author narrates this story, readers cannot feel the emotional fluctuations of the characters, or in other words, the author is telling a story, but the narrative is too straightforward and makes the readers feel like writing a diary without any emotional fluctuations, just recording everything Suggestions: 1. Description of expressions, scenery Work hard on character description and emotional rendering. Expression description can express emotions more vividly. Scenery description is the most direct way to render the environment and improve the quality of the novel. Emotional rendering can make the novel get rid of the running story 2. Focus on the fighting scene. Even if the protagonist does not have any magical fighting skills, the fighting scene cannot kill the opponent with dozens of near-deaths. The writing can also make readers silly and happy, either the writing is very good and makes them feel immersed in the scene, or it is full of passion, people block murderers and ghosts block monsters, and they are just like cheating, the fighting scenes are very well written, or there are all kinds of pretentiousness and flying, etc. Wait, you have to give the reader something that makes him happy. Finally, it is not recommended to double-player. It is originally a normal mode. Why do you have to adjust it to a difficult mode yourself? 😏😏 PS: What exactly is a bamboo rat✔

If you click in, I hope you can read at least one or two chapters. It doesn't matter if you quit if you don't like it. I just want an opportunity to appear in front of everyone - so says the little book

First of all, I must affirm that it is indeed not easy for a newcomer to write a new book like this, but it is also very good. Before this book, I looked for about seven or eight books, but none of them were read. This is the book that I think I can read. But I have a few suggestions: 1. Use more adjectives to heighten the atmosphere, exaggerate emotions, give people a sense of picture, and make people feel like they are involved. 2. The daily writing is not good enough, giving people the feeling of running water. You can write about daily life in a total score structure, some in detail and some in abbreviation. Write a little more in detail to highlight the character's daily life, and to put it bluntly, it will sell the character. 3. I feel that the author is not very good at writing battle scenes. He was close to death a few times and then it was over. There was no process. You can't pretend to be cool and make readers climax in daily life. You have to touch the reader's G-spot during battle.

The content of the book is still very good, and the ideas are very novel (at least this is the first time I have seen this), but it may need more detailed descriptions, more descriptions of other characters, scenes, and scenery, and some of the protagonist's own ideas and skills in the fighting, so that it doesn't basically just lock the blood. Vote for recommendation and subscribe in a few days to gain some weight. 😁 Come on, author (I personally recommend the author to read Lord of Mysteries, which has good descriptions of other characters and scene layouts)

It has only been 5 years since the advent of Reiki, and the environment is all on the same starting line. Those experts and professors, all in their seventies and eighties, can practice Qi and God, but the young and middle-aged can't even practice Qi. Is the setting of this book that the older you are, the better your talent is? And with such a good talent, is it still necessary to become various NPCs? Everyone is forming gangs to fight for fame and fortune, but still have time to be a mentor to you little kids? And the protagonist has already been a senior who has passed the college entrance examination several times before. Does this mean that Reiki has had a mature and stable social structure in a year or two? A stable social structure requires the accumulation of time. The arrival of spiritual energy must be fifty, sixty or even hundreds of years in advance. This does not conflict with the protagonist's ability to travel through doomsday. I hope the author can modify it. Upgrading works are not easy to complete. For example, the demon king of the monster race is equal to the monk in the god-refining stage. Human beings have been refining gods in five years. The human race is simply invincible, right?

I've only read about 20 chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I personally feel that the protagonist is a bit of a hero. Can the end of the world be changed by just improving my strength? Shouldn't we plan our journey carefully? It feels like the protagonist's attitude towards the people around him is that you are all brats. I feel the most awesome.

The introduction is okay, but I haven't read the book yet.

It looks like he is a eunuch. Let me write down my thoughts. I have read this book very early. I feel that the author's ideas are very novel and more interesting than many formulaic articles. However, novelty also means that script writing is difficult and there is little experience to draw on. Writing is nothing but practice. In fact, many early works by great masters and even the first few hundred chapters of thousand-chapter novels are very good. Writing a small novel It is said to be a hard job. Writing day after day, I don't know when I will become popular, and the number of clicks cannot be discounted. The pressure from all aspects can easily make people jump, including "Fake Fairy" and "Liaoxiu", which I like very much now. According to the author, in the early stage, I wrote the jokes with tears in my eyes. Of course, it is better now, so ha, if you are not really in a hurry to eat, there is really no need to update without even saving the manuscript. After all, eunuchs are considered a serious breach of trust for newcomers. Even if they do it a few times, there will be no readers. However, it is not a good thing for the fattening party to increase. For example, if I catch up on thousands of chapters in one breath, it is easy to read them on pirated websites and then go to the genuine websites to catch up on updates. I have been reading novels for more than ten years. My experience is that in bad novels, no matter how clichéd the plot is, as long as the update time is long enough, there will always be A large number of readers, after all, there are not many masterpieces, and short classics do not quench their thirst. They still have to rely on a large number of works to satisfy them. As long as they are not bad, people and gods will be angry. No matter how many people criticize the novels, they will still be read. As long as they can resist for such a long time, the key to a writer's survival is to be able to support his own work or savings, without the pressure of getting married for the time being, and to save enough manuscripts to make him feel at ease.

It feels good, let's keep it first and make it fatter.

Author, are you writing another story in the next chapter? Wow.

After reading it for a while, I didn't like the main character's character a bit. Being jumping around for a while, doing this and that, isn't that the right adjective? Even in the third year of high school, there are a few people who can be so childish. Besides, the protagonist clearly knows that the apocalypse will happen in the future, but I don't feel any sense of urgency from your description. This is very funny. We all know that it is the end of the world. Even if you are not in a hurry to die, at least you should work hard. It makes me anxious for the protagonist. After reading novels for so many years, I have already had enough of the childish and brain-dead protagonists, and it becomes very annoying when I encounter them again. Can the author make the protagonist more stable in the future?

Good! There is no such thing as a beautiful woman as soon as she comes out! Now I feel disgusted that a woman is beautiful!

Well, what can I say, I actually really like this story, and I was planning to gain some weight before reading it, but when I looked back, I had already abandoned it? Well, authors who abandon updates as soon as they sign a contract, or who have just opened a new book without dozens of chapters or chapters are quite powerful. Of course, the book is yours, and you are free to write it or not. But I can only say that an author's credibility is actually quite important. It is not a good habit to be an eunuch. At least when your next book is less than two million words, this group of readers will definitely not dare to jump in first. The writing is not good, and the writing Just write it, there are not many readers, and readers who don't have to go through a process of accumulation. In fact, don't complain too much about the environment and the difficulty. From the perspective of itself, the content of dozens of chapters in the main text collapsed from the time I applied for college. Many novels will collapse, but they will collapse in the first few dozen chapters, and then give up and pass the blame after the collapse. Forget it, whatever, it is a story that I like very much, it is easy to get together and break up.

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What should I say about this book? ? ? I felt that the first part of the story was pretty good, but when I entered college, everything changed. I felt like everything had changed. The characters had changed, the writing style had changed, and even the tone had changed later on. The protagonist suddenly couldn't stand it anymore. It feels like a global high-level martial artist, uncomfortable.

The first investment failed.

The release was sudden! Without giving us a heads up a few chapters in advance! I didn't even open it yesterday and didn't know it was on the shelves, so I missed the first order. That's what I mean! A fool saw my comment and asked me if I was short of two cents. What a fool 😂, if you can't understand what others are saying, don't talk nonsense, I'm so disgusted, emmmmm