Cultivation in This World Is Not Normal

I've seen it before and had a good impression. I think it's quite good-looking. No one is watching?

This book is quite good, but the ending is a bit rushed

Is there an emotional line between the male and female protagonists in this novel?

Himalaya came to listen to the book, and burst out laughing when he heard the whole sect flying into the sky 😁😁😁

It feels like the male protagonist is traveling. It just feels like the male protagonist is superfluous. It completely fails to reflect the superiority of nine-year compulsory education. It basically has nothing to do with whether you can travel through time or not. Catching any ancient person to time travel will have the same effect. The foundation of modern time travel is nine years of compulsory education, otherwise there would be no point in time travel.

The setting is very interesting, I like it very much, but there are too many complaints, which is not bad. Then, the turning point is a bit abrupt, but it is not a big problem. It is very imaginative and I like it very much!

Why is there no one watching the single female protagonist?

I went in and took a look and found that it was really beautiful.

I think what you write, the author, is clearly a modern novel disguised as a cultivator. Will anyone really do five thousand years of cultivation and three thousand years of simulation? The world of cultivating immortals is based on practice and supplemented by theory. Besides, practicing takes up a lot of time. You are sure that this set of test papers will not be beaten to death by people in the world of immortality. Revenge for blocking the road must not be ignored.

The author comes out! Fellow Taoist, come out! Let's play games together! Solitaire game! Don't come out! Be careful! Erha demolished the house! ! ! ! I'll go first, "in the prime of life"

There is a saying that I only wanted to read it because of the single heroine. I didn't even click on the harem story 😁

Fellow Taoists, why don't you come out

This book is really interesting to read. Come on, author.

The beginning smelled like a female video, I almost thought Yun Feiyang was going to be with Lu Yunxiao

When I saw the introduction, I burst into tears.

This mortal dungeon is too boring. There are so many side plots that keep appearing for so long. There could have been more at the beginning, but it's boring.

Oh, now is it time to give Luo Shengge and Yun Feiyang a chance to be alone and create a small spark of love.

Come out and play together with fellow Taoists

Here's another one, I feel like this one is more in line with my temperament.

I still want to find something more suitable...

I should probably stock up on some more pictures.

How should I put it, the body shape is still relatively new, and it has a bit of a revisionist feel, but the characterization is not deep enough, and each character does not have outstanding personality characteristics, including some physical characteristics that are not written carefully enough, and it feels a bit like one person. Also, the characters appear and exit very abruptly, which makes people feel that the plot is not compact enough and it is a bit confusing to watch. There's also the matter of naming. Since it's a humorous style, don't use names that seem lofty or have uncommon words that may make readers uncomfortable. Names, including nicknames, are the best reflection of a character's personality and are also the reader's first impression of the character. If it takes the reader three to five readings to sort out the relationship between the characters, then the creation of this character cannot be said to be successful.

I've been a little wet lately

Yun Feiyang seems to be the pig's trotter in a Feng Shui novel, also named Yun Feiyang!

Not bad. Can we recommend each other? My literary talent is not as good as yours, I want to get some credit

I think it's good to be a good-for-nothing prince. You can eat well and have fun every day. No one dares to mess with you anyway, so why do you have to cultivate immortality? As long as you are not interested in the position of emperor, there is still no danger