Rebirth and Conquer the Starry Sky

The settings at the beginning are confusing, and the reality of death in the classic game is unclear. It depends on the reader's imagination Before entering the game, there is a chapter of Didi Didi prompts The brothers and sisters in the previous life were digitized and brought back to the game and became the xx system The game also reminds that if the xxx system is not used within 10 years, the system will be destroyed The classic is full of sorrow and deep conspiracy

How should I put it? It felt good in the early stage, but later on there were more and more humorous dialogues (Mo is humorous, just use this word if you don't know how to say it). Later, I felt more and more strange while reading the book. The author may simply want to make the book feel relaxed and humorous, but I felt that too much made me feel tired. Maybe it's because I don't like it personally.

Can you please reduce Xiang Xixi's words? There are two ninth-rate professional players in one chapter, and one Dong Chu every day. I'm not opposed to chatter, but we are readers. I know it's not easy for you to write a book with the number of words, and I also know that you want to make the characters vivid. Okay, you don't need to write these two sentences. Everyone knows it. Can you change a word? (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻

Forehead! It's okay because one or two girlfriends are resurrected and worried about it! There are so many brothers and sisters! It's so uncomfortable 😖

I just can't figure out what the point of being reborn just to play games is

The first chapter is sensational, a bit too early, and most readers are left confused. Because the novel's background, character relationships, character traits, protagonist image, etc. Are all blank, the sensationalism will be more abrupt.

After reading more than ten or twenty chapters, I just can't stand it anymore! A bunch of nonsense and not a few serious words! A few sentences can be repeated dozens of times! According to the author's gaming time, one sentence is repeated dozens of times an hour and it happens every day! ! Damn it! When I read it, it felt like I was writing essays in elementary school with all kinds of water characters.

I just want to ask a question, otherwise I really can't stand it. Since Pigfoot was reborn ten years ago and went back in time from the timeline, his comrades should actually exist now. There is no need to talk about resurrection. The author also wrote that his comrades followed the system and were reborn. Doesn't this create a time and space paradox? Two identical people, one present and one future, exist simultaneously. Is this gross? ? ? ?

Can you please arrange for Xiang Xixi? He is just a waste of life.

Games are just games, and reality is reality. Without game-reality interoperability, there is no such thing as a game if the game directly kills the awesome reality.

After rebirth at the beginning, all the brothers are dead and all the other enemies are alive, right? Why is it that when the protagonist is reborn, he is sure that they are all dead? Go back ten years and the protagonist brothers are all people who never existed from the beginning? Or is this the price of rebirth? Why not describe it more clearly? It has developed to the interstellar level and doesn't even have a phone to communicate? Then I went to the comment area to see other people with the same question. Author, you said Chapter 1011. I read it from beginning to end. The protagonist just asked someone if he knew him. The handsome man said he didn't know him and then disappeared? 😨

Well, let's just hope that the whole world is not a rebirth! What are the reborn ones all over the world! That is, no matter how fast you rise, there will always be a bunch of people chasing you, including future bosses and so on! It's as if people all over the world understand this game! Isn't it just the beginning for newbies to explore? My teeth hurt when I read other novels, and people all over the world know how to play so well and understand the game so well! Just like when we play online games, the rookies can compare with the veterans in the old area to upgrade, and it makes my teeth hurt.

Some time ago, I entered the dungeon three times in a row to obtain a large amount of development resources. Next, I will develop the Seven Demon Stars at a fast pace and use up all the resources obtained.

After reading a few chapters, since you are reborn and your brothers and sisters are here, why are you always crying for them?

Is it like that when I die in the first game? It's like I'm about to die, and then the ultimate skill comes out, and I scream to wake up. It's so melodramatic, bro.

Why does every character have to say "Ouch, I'll go", "Holy shit", "Holy shit" and the like before speaking. Doesn't it look weird? Forcefully persuade you to quit

Don't understand? The previous 6 people are no longer in real life? The character in the game in the previous life died, but also in real life? You can always say you want to resurrect 6 people with pig's feet or something?

I hope it won't be deliberately dark for the sake of darkness to appear vulgar, nor will it appear hideous and terrifying. It describes the complexity and changeability of human nature. One thought can lead to Buddhahood and the other can turn into a devil. You can become a devil at any time because of greed and evil thoughts, or you can defeat evil thoughts with reason. Good and evil can happen in just one thought. You are not absolutely good or bad. No one can resist all kinds of temptations, and a very small number of people who have gone through vicissitudes of life and understand the nature of the world have a little bit of restraint. The protagonist is also human, but it is covered up by rationality and cold-bloodedness. Ordinary people are just food for the protagonist. The protagonist will also meet people who recognize extraordinary people, and train and help them to become younger thugs, sex slaves, mothers and daughters, etc. The protagonist also needs to raise a group of obedient, talented and capable people to fight against, rather than a poor lunatic who was defeated by the cruel reality. It is true that the size of a living body will not expand infinitely and needs to be supported by physical strength. The larger the living body, the weaker the life characteristics. For example, the starry sky insect beast only has some biological instincts and the larger Zerg space mother ship fortress (Zerg mother nest) cannot even be counted as a living body, because it only has some simple and extremely weak life instinct characteristics. It is no different from dead things. It can only produce and hatch Zerg and travel the universe based on its instinct. The size of the mechanical battleship object is also limited by the strength of the material and cannot be exaggerated without thinking. Such exaggerated and vulgar tricks as blowing up the planet and sucking the stars dry. I hope the author can describe the billions of civilizations in the universe and the billions of environments in the universe, and write about the colorful, majestic, mysterious, fantastic and beautiful universe of the universe. In the struggle for hegemony between intelligent civilizations, the most powerful one in the end is the eternal cosmic hegemony between the Zerg and intelligent mechanical civilization (intelligent life has developed to the highest level, got rid of the constraints of the weak body, and parasitized into mechanical and biological skeletons, and both mechanical and genetic technology have developed to the extreme, with both mechanical legions and powerful genetic biological legions). Zerg are not only biological flesh and blood, but also consume various ores to increase and strengthen the body strength of Zerg creatures. Mechanical civilization develops mechanical steel and genetic organisms separately, while Zerg develops through integration. Don't write it as StarCraft Zerg, that's too cliché. Instead, innovate some Zerg, such as star bug bioenergy cannons, ground burrowing bugs, transport bugs, supply bugs, information link bugs, detection bugs, and space carrier bugs. They are troop transports and production centers. They are the Zerg mother nest. The Zerg have devoured countless race genes and optimized them to be able to directly absorb solar energy as body energy. This is just a supplement, but it also requires food. The Zerg will also evolve super plants that can absorb and convert solar energy with more efficient photosynthesis, as well as some animals that can photosynthesize (the conversion rate is very low). Intelligent mechanical civilization is a combination of mechanical technology and genetic life technology, and Zerg civilization is a combination of genetic life technology and intelligent mechanical civilization technology. In the end, different paths lead to the same goal.

The seven brothers start the game, and the plot is quite awkward.

All of them are just to make up the word count. Damn it, holy shit (｀Δ´)! (｀Δ´)! (｀Δ´)! One or two sentences is enough, four or five times in each chapter, to persuade you to quit.

I'm sorry to be persuaded to quit by Xiang Xixi

I just read two chapters and I feel a bit conflicted! Since the protagonist has become a god in the game in his previous life, does the introduction also say that he wants to climb to a higher peak in the game? Doing game planning? Game company boss?

This introduction seems to be called Mai. . . . Do you want to add another sentence about killing the snow-winged eagle in anger?

Let's, oh, I'll go, can I get rid of it? Has your author been killed by Ouchi? Are you annoyed? Doesn't it sound embarrassing? I'm convinced. I'm so annoyed.

The idea is good, but the writing is a bit stretchy. The first male co-writing is even disgusting. The narrative is confusing and the rhythm is poor. The plot is driven entirely by dialogue, and the characterization is not enough.

Seriously, can the insect nest be recycled? It must be valuable

The action descriptions of people and language are good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, But your article lacks rich descriptions of the characters' appearance and expressions, and is a bit monotonous. I also suggest that you describe more and more detailed scenes when writing (as for psychological description, you can control it yourself), So, come on, brother!!! (Also, I'm looking forward to the orthopedic drama. The protagonist will have a sister, even if she's not a relative,,,, so that's it, emmmm,)

To be honest, Xiang Xixi is really uncomfortable and talks carelessly. Can the author change it a little? It's really too weird. I've only known the protagonist for a few days, and I was nagging at him there.

The character of Xiang Xixi is rather annoying.

To be honest, I have read dozens of them, and I have to say that the subject matter is very good, even if the writing is lacking, there are long paragraphs of dialogue, the storyline is almost entirely driven by dialogue, and it is extremely readable.