
Heartbeat Entertainment
心跳娱乐
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 98k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Rules Horror
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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41Chapters
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As in the title, it is officially certified as a complete building. Two characters are the best, three characters are barely enough, and four characters... Emmmm~ No way... I type four characters, I am afraid that people will say that I am poor in word count 😓
After reading some, I'm a little confused... The sentence conversion is not smooth. You can also add some words when speaking to enrich it, such as "..." So-and-so is speechless for a moment, etc... There are many things that are not explained clearly. How did the demon come? How did it come to the protagonist? Why can the protagonist see ghosts? Where was the demon when the protagonist was talking to him earlier? Floating around or in the body? The plot feels very stiff, the plot is still okay, but other aspects need to be improved. You have to think about the problem from another angle. As the author, of course you know a lot of things. If you look at it from the reader's perspective, you won't be able to tell what the author is expressing. Sorry, these words may be a little helpful or a little frustrating to you. If you don't like it, you can delete it after reading it. Well... I won't add it to the book list for now. I will see if there is any improvement next time. The above...