Immortal Qin

I just read the title of the book and was interested in it. Now I'm reading the introduction and I think it's okay. When I first read a few chapters, the writing style was wrong. After reading a few chapters, I became quite addicted. The author used the history of the Qin Dynasty, but he did not have the corresponding writing power to describe the feeling of the Qin Dynasty and the weight of history. Maybe my expectations for this book were too high, but I was too disappointed when I came in to read it. The author is a newcomer after all,,,

The author's setting, protagonist's character, and plot are all good, but the writing is a bit poor.

A new author writes an idle article, and a bunch of people in the comments keep beeping! ! The writing style is not very good, but the idea is good, and it can be seen that it has been put into practice! ! ＾0＾~Come on author, I support you

After reading dozens of chapters, I thought I was a serious practitioner, but I didn't expect it to be so naive, but I like it. Just be happy and that's it ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I just read Chapter 5, and a system suddenly appeared. It feels like a drama. Why can't martial arts be separated from the system now? It feels like you would be more comfortable meeting an old man with a white beard than the system.

I also gave it as a gift for you to take a look at first akq

It feels very good, a must-see if you like Qin Dynasty

I recommend it, it's well written.

The capital of Qin Dynasty is in Xianyang, please respect history

For ten years, I have been hesitant in writing, not thinking, only being rigid, collecting things in three or five, and having no place to talk about desolation. Recommended with high expectations, but no one watched it, just waiting for it to cool down. Even if you insist on rushing to the shelves and getting perfect attendance, there is no hope. After thinking about it, only the eunuch was happy. It is expected that I will buy a book every year, starting from Qidian. Com and the Great God List.

The true words of an old bookworm who has been reading books for ten years. Although martial arts is in decline nowadays, there are still a group of people who are persisting. Although the author said that there were some problems dealt with in the past, he will make progress little by little until it gets better and better. It's rare to see such conscientious articles. Friends who click on it, don't worry, take a look first, I will definitely not let you down. We are not disappointed, and neither is the author. This kind of thing is really excellent.

After skipping a few chapters and booking a few chapters, I discovered a very serious problem. Qin Shihuang wanted to live forever and wanted to kill ministers and take their souls. Not just one minister, but one after another, or did he kill them openly? Those ministers really wouldn't resist? The arrangement of this main plot is very illogical.

The first few hundred pictures in Gaowu World have always been about conspiracy and poison! Qin Shihuang played hundreds of cards and then failed at the last few. Did he become obsessed with practicing martial arts? Poison! The next step is to fight Liu Bang and Xiang Yu. It is obvious that killing them in the early stage is easy but he doesn't care. Poison, he is a time traveler and a golden finger. He keeps emphasizing that pig's feet are against the destiny, so he has always been Hu Hai's dog. The world of Gaowu is both time-traveling and cheating. If you don't rebel, you are useless!

Chapter 69 persuades people to retreat, and other miscellaneous settings such as Chang'an and Lu Bu can be tolerated. Only after seeing her sworn sworn brother to Xiang Yu, Yu Ji used the protagonist as a shield, then broke up with Xiang Yu, took off her pants and farted, is this unnecessary?

Sorry, after reading two chapters, I felt that the writing style was a bit silly. Although I really wanted to read on, I still fell to the fourth chapter.

The author is very helpless. He won't write about the Qin Dynasty anymore, because he is afraid that you will not have a sense of involvement, and the history of the Qin Dynasty is already legendary. I wrote it and asked for it to be like a historical novel. They all mentioned the Qin Dynasty in another world. It can't be the same as history. And they all talk about martial arts novels. Why don't you criticize Jin Yong for changing so much history? I have changed the Great Qin Dynasty and changed the celebrities. If I were to write purely about a dynasty, there would be too many characters and it would be difficult to introduce and it would be confusing to read. If I were to write it based on the history of the Great Qin Dynasty and then change it to Gao Wu, it would be difficult to change it, and it would be said that the author had no new ideas and copied history. What can I say? What I wrote was a martial arts novel, not history. But what should I say? It feels a bit unreasonable to use the Qin Dynasty framework and not round it out properly, and it is inevitable that I will feel a little entangled or disgusted. But which martial arts novel doesn't change history? Isn't Jin Yong's gangster Hei Han's family good? I was still young at that time, but now when I look at history, I was led astray a lot by Lao Jin.

When I saw Chapter 69, I was suddenly force-fed poison... In other words, you were suddenly pulled by a woman to use as a shield, and the person you blocked was the person you just pulled over. And the protagonist is actually willing to help her! Just because she is a beauty? IQ suddenly becomes negative, which is particularly disgusting. Earlier, Li Xin and Zhang Han were blamed for being brainless, but in the blink of an eye, the protagonist is also brainless? A newly sworn sworn Xiang Yu and a scheming bitch (I personally think the author made Yu Ji a scheming bitch). Moreover, the protagonist willingly blocked the arrow without much interaction with this scheming bitch. I was also drunk. Can't tell which one is more important? Or can't we find other solutions? Do you have to play with the reader's IQ? I don't know what the author wants to express in this regard? It is estimated that few people would be able to endure this situation in a real-life scenario. I haven't watched the subsequent plot, but I can imagine that the protagonist's behavior will definitely bring out an enemy for no reason. We could have been friends, maybe even subordinates. As a result, he became an enemy? ? Author, what do you want to do? Is the protagonist's IQ still a college student? Isn't it better than a primary school student? If this person hadn't been the protagonist, even a passerby wouldn't have survived three chapters. There are those who have golden fingers who can't survive more than three chapters. The acting style is too childish, the layout is too small, which makes people speechless, and there is nothing impressive about what he does. If it's a pure martial arts, fairy, fantasy, fantasy, etc., It's fine. The problem is that the protagonist's IQ goes out to play politics. I really don't know what the author thinks. Building combat power and cultivation along the way are more reliable than the protagonist playing politics. To be honest, the protagonist's IQ and EQ are really not as good as those of a primary school student. The cultivation system set up in the article shows that it is very difficult for warriors to break through in cultivation. Even Fusu, who lives in the royal family, is only at level 4. No one can compete with him for this resource, but even so. Fusu, who was sixteen or seventeen years old, was only at the fourth level of cultivation. When the protagonist was tested for his qualifications, he was judged to have average qualifications, and he had just started to come into contact with martial arts. When the qualifications and resources are not equal, how can the protagonist reach the third level of cultivation in a short period of time? You said that if your cheats could be improved like those in other novels by adding points and so on, it would still be acceptable. (Mainly because of the protagonist's age... How many years old child has a third-level cultivation... Isn't it the reincarnation of a god?) The result is a gadget that is not very useful. With the help of this function, the protagonist can far surpass others' efforts of more than ten years in less than two years. Haha, Qin Shihuang is a fool. Not to mention slice research, it is absolutely certain that you are hiding a treasure. A casual investigation can reveal the protagonist's problems, and will it also give the protagonist time to develop honestly? (Not to mention that the protagonist is not honest at all, haha!!) Of course, apart from all this, the book is actually okay (after all, there are not many people who write this kind of book, and the short ones are taller) The main reason is that the IQ and EQ of the protagonist are really speechless. I admit that my personal emotional intelligence is not very high, but no matter how low it is, I will never be like this with the protagonist If I meet such a woman in reality, a backhand slap will not be enough, but I will definitely end the relationship with her immediately. Don't talk about outsiders, even if your own relatives plot against you, you will be alienated later, let alone outsiders. What's more, under certain circumstances, this outsider can be considered his subordinate (it is not mentioned in the article, but with Hu Hai's temperament, he must be the most important protagonist among those people.) Think about it, the subordinate he had just taken over for a long time had plotted against him, and he and his newly sworn friend suddenly became enemies. What would you do? (I have nothing to say personally. The relationship between the two parties will be reconciled on the spot. If it doesn't work, you will be responsible for the benefits. If it doesn't succeed afterwards and the protagonist behaves like this, the subordinate will definitely be liquidated after the incident. A subordinate plotted against me and caused this kind of loss to himself. He also turned his friend into an enemy for no reason. I am afraid that I almost want to kill her. Not to mention she is Yu Ji, even one of the four beauties like Diao Chan and Xi Shi cannot have an easy time. The most important thing in life is not only to have emotional intelligence, but also to figure out whether you can bear the consequences of doing certain things. This kind of person will definitely not survive three episodes. (If you have discussed it in advance and got the consent, it will be a big mouthful of shit!!) I think everyone in our country should understand this principle, right? )

I just watched the previous part and it was okay. The one on 69 who couldn't get over the poison was pushed away directly. He became sworn sworn brother to Xiang Yu, and then broke up with Yu Ji as a shield. It was a wave of forced intelligence. If you want to watch it, you should think about it carefully.

Starting point is a common problem, the author is just an ordinary person, he has to describe the upper echelons of officialdom and shopping malls, and the result is that the emperor uses gold hoes, and the emperor can eat two Wowotou every meal. . . . .

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This book is actually quite good, but it is not suitable for old bookworms. It feels a bit like children playing house.

I wish the author would read less white text, the writing style is too low. You write articles based entirely on routines, instead of considering the character's origin, upbringing, temperament, current mood, and the person you are facing. This is totally true of you, the routine is here, even Tathagata Buddha has to call the protagonist a waste. Can a Taoist priest recite Amitabha? I can still read books, but my mentality of reading has changed.

I watched them all in one go and gave away all the monthly tickets, haha

When you were five years old, you wrote something stupid. In Zaohui, you couldn't write like this even in time travel.

After all, he is the one emperor for the ages, unifying the world, counting all the world, if he could have lived a few more years in history, the current dynasty may be even more powerful, it is understandable to pursue immortality, but Emperor Qin obviously saw further, It is a pity that when manpower is limited after all, he lost to the will of heaven in history, in this book, he is still not considered a heavenly man, what a pity~

The end of this month is the time for double monthly passes, so after discussion with this new author, I decided to create a monthly pass plus update event. From today on, for every 50 more monthly tickets, you can add an additional chapter, which will be redeemed starting from National Day! This requirement is not high. You must know that it is the time for double monthly votes, which means that as long as you cast 25 votes, you can add one update. If you have a monthly vote that you have not yet voted for, you should vote quickly, because it will be invalid in two days! PS: The calculation of monthly tickets starts from the time when a single chapter is issued, which was 1010 at that time. As of the time I post now, there are 1221 monthly tickets for this book, which means that the author has owed 4 chapters. Please work harder, this is the first time this book has so many monthly tickets, and it is also the first time this book can be ranked second in the category monthly ticket list. We don't ask for anything, we just want to keep this position, and at the same time, we can drink the author dry!

The setting is good, but the writing is terrible.

I really can't stand it, the subject matter is good but the writing is childish and the logic is confusing, so I can only say keep going.

The co-writing is that the protagonist uses all kinds of pretense and slaps in the face to support the mentally retarded Hu Hai to ascend to the throne? Forget about everything else, it at least gave Hu Hai some political thinking! Even though he was a child, couldn't he have matured earlier because he was born into the royal family?

After looking at the catalog, I didn't want to read it. Did the Qin Dynasty have Chang'an? It was the Han Dynasty that changed Xianyang's name to Chang'an, and I didn't check the information.