The Last Planeswalker

In fact, I was quite optimistic about this book. The previous story rhythm and DND4 were very attractive to me, but the author fell away after taking the postgraduate entrance examination. Actually, I think this book is a good negative teaching material. Many new writers who have the ability to write stories (note, I refer to stories) are ambitious to devote themselves to their writing career, and then quit the literary world in despair after writing more than 100,000 words. In fact, to put it bluntly, imagination is a very cheap and common ability. If you want to become a writer who makes a living by writing, what you really need is world-building ability and perseverance. Many new writers look down on Zhongyuan Wubai, thinking that their writing skills are not as good as their own, but you cannot deny that they are successful and make a lot of money, they have the perseverance to update every day for 3k365 days, and they have the structural ability to create a new world. Qidian has never lacked new people with imagination, but people with perseverance.

I personally feel that your book is actually well written and has an amazing beginning. The result is not good. I think it may be that the wasteland fanatic immediately turns into the sweet bodyguard of the little sister after the game starts. The twist is a bit big, and many readers who were attracted by the beginning may feel uncomfortable. The next few plots are not set up to have a climax, which is a bit disappointing, especially the only fierce battle scene after the beginning. The main perspective is the vampire sister. The protagonist just fights, and the feeling is not enough. I think the early stage of the novel should focus on the description of the protagonist. Finally, after the game between the Nine Swords Masters ended, the plot suddenly turned to a financial fraud plot. On the one hand, it was a bit inconsistent with the protagonist's personality, and on the other hand, it was uninteresting. The protagonist had been crazy in the wasteland for so long and killed one person in the shelter. It would be easier to kill people and buy goods. The background of the protagonist is not just the story. The background determines the character of the protagonist. This character should be consistent from the beginning to the end, or slowly deepened and changed. It should not be too inconsistent. The above are all personal opinions. I hope that the author will go well in his postgraduate entrance examination and that he will reach a higher level in the future whether he continues writing or starting a new book. PS: It's never too late to start writing a book, and you must take the postgraduate entrance examination as early as possible! I speak from experience, and I have lots of hair to prove it, take the exam well. . . .

Dragon Vein Warlock is a very interesting profession (pure melee profession), so newbies, please remember that Planeswalker is not a legal profession, it is just an identity or ability. Don't be confused by the name (just like Demigod Lich is not a Demigod)

It's not that your book is not in line with the mainstream, it's that you have to make deals with other authors. How can there be enough readers without enough exposure?

The introduction finally reminded me of the opening of Hearthstone Hunters, The Hunt Begins. 🤓

You are a mage! What the hell is this?

Do you want to find other books and py them? Both new books, or fantasy masters. Actually, you can also look for Huangcao Poison Milk. The book about that guy's milk is either cool or popular.

I have always longed for novels set by planeswalkers, but it's a pity that I just read them

You have gone astray, the sword of the sage is matched with the shadow hand style! The sword of the military is matched with the soul of steel, the iron heart is the king!

There are too few planeswalker novels, come on

The recommendation votes for this book are very personal, 404, awesome.

It's a pity. I just found this book today. It's really well written. My personal feeling can be compared to Lord of the Abyss of Pagoda. The main reason is that you are a newcomer and not famous. It would be great if you could do more business with other authors so that more readers can see it.

It's a good book. I'll recommend it for you when I update it tonight 🤓. Although it's not very useful, I hope the author will keep writing!

Etc. Why do I feel like this is a female video? ? ?

I accidentally clicked in and was so cute by the little vampire.

That sword master should be a jade chicken. The perception is so high that it's no problem to stop, but the body can actually keep up with it. This is so weird How high is this attribute?

Good looking! I really like the setting too! And it's been a long time since I've seen a new book that writes about fighting so fluently. The author keeps it up. I'll definitely subscribe to QWQ when it's on the shelves.

This book is really well written. Come on, come on.

All I know is that planeswalkers are super powerful with sparks, but they have to return most of their abilities to the universe. What if they don't just run away?

Martial arts is 3r, right? Why did it become 4e

This book is probably the biggest surprise I have found in the past month when I was looking for books. I first saw the recommendation in Longkong. I didn't have high hopes after I found out that it was still a seedling. But after reading it, I found that this book is amazingly suitable for my appetite. Elements such as Wasteland, Magic: The Gathering, DND, Soul series, etc., As well as the various hidden plots in it, have been well integrated into the author's own style. The writing is smooth, and the fighting scenes are written with great feeling. I hope the author will continue to work hard, and the results will definitely not be bad!