Harry Potter and Shafiq

The following are just my personal thoughts First, the author's paragraphs. There is too much content in one paragraph and there are many punctuation errors. Secondly, the words written by the author are so confusing that it is completely unclear who said it. Finally, if the language sounds good, it is too plain and simple, if it sounds bad, it is dry, the characters are not good, and the plot is a bit embarrassing and nonsensical. The plot of each character is not rich enough, poorly distributed, and seriously OOC. That's all for now, please don't complain, thank you.

I hope the protagonist knows how to make wands, and combines Eastern wood with Western animals such as cherry blossom wood and a unicorn, which is twelve and one inch long. It represents innocence and kindness and is a wand for healing and spells 🤓

Yesterday, a friend asked me: Harry Potter fan fiction has been written all over the street, and no one has read it at all. Me: Go and read the four kings of "Drinking Black Tea Calmly at Hogwarts", "Hogwarts on the Bite of the Tongue", "Harry Potter: I Am a Legend" and "Harry Potter: The Invincible Scholar". There are indeed Harry Potter fans all over the street, but there are very few who write about Harry Potter's pro-era and grandson's era, and there are very few who write about the ancestral era (the era of the Four Giants/Gellert and Dumbledore) There are even very few novels about other magic schools. There is actually a lot of room for deeper exploration into Harry Potter fan fiction.

Let's think of some magic spells that would allow the author to prepare for the war. The magic spells I designed for the author: 1. (Black magic) Thunder, lightning and fire spell: Spell: three consecutive dials. Function: It emits thunder, lightning and fierce fire. The three super large and powerful magic tornado flames are fully combined after overlapping and colliding with each other to produce hurricane suction. It can be used as a magic protective shield wall and can also attack people. 2. Cold spell: Spell: North wind blows, storm, frost, snow and cold ground. Function: The land freezes after a blizzard. 3. Swamp Curse: Spell: The mire is deep. Use: Create a swamp to trap or bury enemies alive. 4. Killing curse: Spell: Killing. Effect: Instantly severing the carotid artery and trachea in the neck will cause severe pain, coma, and death due to blood loss. 5. Sealing spell/Boundary unlocking spell/Boundary blocking spell/Torture spell hurting the soul and healing spell/Purification spell: Spell: Sanctuary Coiling Dragon. Function: The dragon that emits light can seal and open items sealed by the curse, open the protective barrier, close the protective barrier and treat people who have been tortured by torture spells, their minds have been severely damaged and collapsed, leading to madness; for example: Neville's parents and the dragon that emits light in the play purify and destroy the dementors (dementors). 6. Truth Mantra: Mantra: Tell the truth and don't lie. Function: Make people tell the truth involuntarily (it can only work on torture of dark wizards or officials in the Ministry of Magic who have malicious intentions towards underage wizards and send dementors to attack underage wizards, but it will not work if the person being tortured is not a dark wizard or officials who have no ill intentions and send dementors to attack underage wizards to violate the law that underage wizards are not allowed to use magic after leaving school). 7. Paralysis Curse: Mantra: Soft and soft. Effect: It makes people's limbs and whole body become limp and unable to move like cotton. 8. Slip spell: Spell: If everything is smooth, it will slip. Use: Make the ground 500 kilometers in front of and to the left and right of the Zhou Shi as smooth as an ice rink, making it easy for people to slip. 9. Building Restoration Spell: Spell to restore the building as new and never be dirty. Function: Restore the building to its newly built appearance and the building will never be contaminated with a trace of dust and dirt. It also gives the building the ability to clean itself and the things in the building to maintain themselves. 10. Item tracking spell: Spell: Where is the object? Function: An image of where the item you are looking for can appear. 11. Holy Judgment Spell: Spell: Doomsday Apocalypse ⚫ Holy Light Judgment. Usage: The giant sword of dragon-marked light emits a huge force to kill all evil creatures and people who mobilize the power of black magic within 1500 kilometers around the caster. 12. (Black Magic) Undead Curse: Spell: Listen to the call of the shepherd. Function: Arouse the souls of innocent people killed by black wizards using black magic and harass the souls of the black wizards who killed them, so that the black wizard is blocked by the magic he casts and cannot use powerful magic. 13. Soul Explosion Spell: Spell: Magic surges and soul blasts. Function: The magic power of the caster increases so much that his soul and body cannot bear the increase in magic power at the same time, causing the soul to vibrate and the soul to explode. 14. True Name Binding Spell: Spell: True Name ⚫ Binding. Function: Silently recite the name of the person being cursed and then shout out loudly: True Name ⚫ Binding can bind the magic power of the person whose name is recited silently for 5 days, so that the male wizard or wizard whose name is recited silently cannot cast any magic within 5 days; for example, for example: Tom Marvel, the real name of the devil, Lord Buddha, True Name ⚫ Binding can bind the magic power of the person whose name is recited silently for 5 days, making him unable to use any magic for 5 days. Everyone is welcome to provide some wands of your own design for the author's reference (can be used as a backup). My thought is that these wands below were brought to Hogwarts by the Eagle as a meeting gift for Harry Potter. The wands I designed for the author: 1. Cherry blossom wood with Unicorn King feathers, three-elevenths of an inch long, light and supple, suitable for performing medical magic, defense against the dark arts, and transfiguration. (The flower language of the cherry blossom tree is innocence, and I personally think it is suitable for Neville.) 2. The snake cypress matches the dragon's heart tendons and blood vessels, which are 13 inches long and hard, suitable for performing black magic. 3. The optic nerve of dragon cypress and snake demon is nine and three-quarters of an inch long, strong and strong, suitable for performing defense against black magic. 4. Dragon Subduing Wood with Phoenix Heartstring Nerve is 13 inches long and strong, suitable for medical treatment, black magic and defense against black magic. 5. The feathers of Sophora japonica wood and Thestral horse (Knight falling ghost horse) are one-tenth of an inch long and soft, suitable for performing black magic.

The solution to last night's riddle. Everyone relaxes when they are tired from reading. Test everyone a riddle to brainstorm, Riddle: Ivy vine, with yellow flowers, The flowers on the ground do not bear fruit, The underground fruit does not bloom.

Sir, could you please be nice to my little Draco? He has too few scenes

The last one is coming soon, so get ready!

I am currently following the Dajia Zhenlan Palace in Dajia District, Taichung City to perform incense at the Dajia Mazu Temple in Xingang, Chiayi, south of Chiayi for nine days and eight nights. I hope that all the authors and book friends at the starting point and their families can be healthy and safe, and that their studies can go well.

I suggest that Grindelwald be allowed to teach wizard dueling at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry under a pseudonym.

In the author's introduction, the protagonist is so cunning, can he be second only to Harry Potter? Isn't this a complete crushing

I designed a magic communication prop for the Wizards Alliance and would like to give it to the author He Yangzi for your reference. Name of the magic prop: Guardian's Heart Introduction to the magic prop: The Guardian's Heart is a magic necklace made of high-grade, high-purity ancient magic mithril and rare metals that can be used as an ornament. The Guardian is modeled after the emblems of the four houses of Hogwarts, including the golden "Golden Lion" representing Gryffindor, the blue "Dragon Eagle" representing Ravenclaw, the silver "Sea Otter" representing Hevopuff, and the green "Silver Snake" representing Shirezhelin. The Guardian's heart has five magical functions. Introduction to the five functions of Guardian Heart: The first function: comprehensive personal position tracking in the wizarding world. The second function: stores all magic learning materials and course content explained by teachers to facilitate students to review their homework. The third function: Personal identity magic identification lock. Unless the person agrees from the bottom of his heart, no matter who uses it, he will not be able to see or hear the contents inside, and will be shocked to the point of coma. The fourth function: summoning club members and instantly specifying an escape location. The fifth type of omnidirectional video and audio recording allows the wearer to choose whether it needs to be played simultaneously to all magical families in the magical world.

Is there a group 😏

When will the contract be signed? I can't help but want to give you rewards and monthly tickets!

Let's relax after reading. Test everyone a riddle to brainstorm, Riddle: Ivy vine, with yellow flowers, The flowers on the ground do not bear fruit, The underground fruit does not bloom.                                 ()~~

I came to Jianlou to sign in to see how many supporters of this book there are, and to encourage the author to give the author some motivation. Building sign-in:

I just contacted the author. He is preparing a second novel. I hope you can continue to support me. Thank you.

Another book that tries to steal someone else's protagonist's halo! ! ! !

I came here at this moment today and left my footprints card❕hereby sign in❕⚫.

No one commented, I have no motivation

Recruiting supporting roles It is best to use Western surnames as the main surnames. It is also good to add a few Eastern surnames. The college, age and hobbies can be customized. Welcome readers to contribute

A new book is out, Marvel's Mutant Alliance

I don't understand why you can still marry a Ravenclaw in 198?