King of Words and Spirits

I haven't posted a comment for a long time, so here it is, this book is really eye-catching. As an old bookworm who has been immersed in Internet articles for many years, I can definitely say that from what has been shown so far, the author definitely has the potential to become a great master Due to limited space, I will not talk about the advantages of the work here (or I will talk about it later). Today I will be a bully and shamelessly help the author find shortcomings. After all, seeing an author with such potential, I feel itchy not to give him a hand. First, the issue of character design. I'm not saying that the author's character design is not well-shaped, but that the character design is too labelled. The author must have been greatly influenced by Japanese light novels and animations. The heroines here all have strong cute attributes, such as eldest lady, childhood sweetheart, and sister-in-law. There is nothing wrong with having these attributes, but the key is that these attributes are too deliberate and thin. , For example, the younger sister is deliberately unrealistic and artificial. In fact, the author does not need to be like this at all. People are inherently complicated. For example, when portraying the younger sister, there is no need to pin the younger sister's attributes to the brother. You can show more aspects of the younger sister, such as the troubles of youth, wonderful experiences, etc., To make the image of the younger sister more three-dimensional Second, plot, plot, plot! This TM is simply a drag on the whole book, and it made me bleed after reading it. I don't mean the main plot (to be honest, I think the main plot is also very ***, from young to old, a typical starting point of the novel routine,), but refers to the small plot. I understand that the author wants to express a cool comedy effect of pretending to slap in the face, but the problem is that you are writing a light novel, light novel, light novel! If it's not Aotian Xiaobailiu, what does a light novel want? Relaxing and cute rhythm! But look at what you wrote, from the beginning to the third volume, there are a lot of arrogant and evil supporting characters (such as Huang Gongzi, sports committee member) who can't understand the protagonist. Let's not talk about the authenticity issue. Is it necessary to **** it? Is it necessary? Is it necessary? Damn it, the protagonist takes a girl to eat hot pot and is inexplicably made difficult by a group of waiters with low IQs (the reason is also ridiculous, which shows that the author is deeply influenced by Xiaobai's novels). Damn you, my heart is really bleeding when I see this. What's the use of writing this other than to disgust the readers and make the protagonist pretend to be cool? What's the use? What's the use? Ah? To put it bluntly, the author, your plot is too naive and seriously inconsistent with the tone of the entire book and your excellent writing skills. There are many other things I want to complain about. Let's stop here first. It doesn't matter if you say I am a brainless troll or some other nonsense. I am just giving my opinion as a reader. After all, there are not many authors who can write this kind of light novel. Jiang Zi

Not pretty. Don't subscribe! Hey~, it smells so good. You gave me back too much pocket money, so you are not a good book. Identification completed.

Originally, I thought the title of the book was in a cold and domineering style, but I never expected that it was in a silly and funny style.

Interesting stories are bound to shine. I dug up this book of fairy grass when I was scanning books. I grabbed it first because I wanted the author to write it down. Let's talk about the key words first: no routine, plot flow, relaxed and joyful, visual sense, story with soul Each volume of this book is a story with a theme, with its own excitement and laughter, but there are connections and progressions between the volumes. After reading the third volume, I was amazed. It's simply unimaginable. This book includes ordinary youth daily life, climbing towers and fighting BOSS, and the third volume even begins commercial farming and mecha battles. The author previews the newly opened fourth volume. The protagonist seems to be entering a fantasy game world similar to Sword Art Online. The daily part is cute, sweet and heart-warming, hilarious and funny, making me laugh so hard that I can't stop crying, and the battle part is very exciting! Furthermore, the author is very good at writing scene-switching group dramas. I really like the story of Yuko and Sally! It is strongly not recommended to read this book at a glance and ten lines at a time. You will miss 99% of the excitement and joy, including the pits and jokes the author dug between the lines. For many battle plots, the author uses animation-like interpretation techniques, which is very graphic. Some daily plots are so delicate that even if you can't understand some ACG jokes, it won't affect your reading. The protagonist has a good outlook on life and is not a stallion, and the supporting character has an above-average IQ. It's both funny and tearful, and it makes reading both enjoyable and stress-relieving. If you are short of books, you can try reading it and receive it with your eyes. In short, it is a good book with a two-dimensional style and elements of urban cool writing! I hope the author can stick to it and never give up on QAQ.

[Pure love, not a harem, welcome to stock trading] This novel is in the form of a unit drama divided into volumes, and each volume has a relatively independent story. So you don't need to have millions of words, and you don't have to wait patiently for the plot to explode. Each volume has its own explosive point, and you can kill one volume after completing it~ Of course, it is recommended to follow the latest chapters every day, because there are also major main lines and major growth lines. Current progress: The first volume of "The Falling Girl" has been completed and is ready for slaughter. The second volume of "Two Rabbits Walking Along the Ground" has been completed and is ready for slaughter. The third volume of "The Real Tears of the Virtual Diva" has been completed and is ready to be sold. The fourth volume of "The Light Blooming Only for You" is being serialized. Welcome to follow up.

Seriously, this book suits my taste perfectly It's a semi-invincible novel, with all kinds of daily life and passionate battles (zhuang) and battles (bi). The protagonist has normal outlook on life, everyone has an online IQ, and is relaxed and humorous. . . In short, support the author! (What to do if you don't know how to praise others)

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Bankruptcy suppresses Ilya stock!

It's beautiful, I can't stop laughing in some parts, haha!

It looks good, it looks good, it's important to say it three times, why isn't it popular? ! Breaking money on Ilya stocks! ! ! ! !

The first time I saw the word Yan Ling was in Dragon Clan

It feels like everything fits well except that it's not the cat's tail.

Dark Flame Master

The author writes so beautifully! ! ! ! Not enough

Spend 100 million of my pocket money on Ilya

Come on, author I'm betting on Leiya shares 🙏

I don't want to say anything... Come and visit the grave

... The author should update it soon... Actually, this article has some merits besides being a sandbox, but... It was completely ignored when I read the article... However, I still hope that this article can be adapted into a comic book, it is so funny hahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Snort! Is the author still alive? QWQ looks forward to new stories

All booked, is there a group~~😊

... I finished it in one go, and then started raising books. As a result, I found that what I read was the penultimate chapter... Forget it (=_=), it's good to have a good book to read, so you can't be too picky (´∀｀*).

! ! ! ! ! ! ! Finished raising? ? ? ? ? ? Ahem... Are there any new books?

I would like to ask if there is a group 😥😥

Breaking the update... It took several weeks to read and there are only a dozen chapters... →_→

I've read two volumes and let me know what I think The first volume feels a bit like Sakamoto (mainly due to the exaggerated pretentiousness) The fighting in the second volume feels okay PS (you must pay attention to the power system, the power system cannot collapse) and the style is okay, author, come on💪 The following is my humble opinion 1. The protagonist's behavior and personality shaping, and psychological changes can be written slowly and not in a hurry. The main characteristics of the protagonist, pursuit is a focus. Values ​​must be correct. See Luo Qing's books. You can refer to Luo Qing's (all-round) and (straight to death) 2. It's okay if there is an outline for the plot advancement. Just follow the rhythm and add a little imagination 3. Let's talk about it later and observe again😃😃 Finally, I wish the author Jun Yue better writing😁😁

Thank you all for your full order and reward for this book. The author's new book has been uploaded. Everyone is welcome to appreciate and invest. 🤭🤭🤭

Boss, are you still alive? Looking forward to your new book QWQ

1000. Great! Come on! Effort!

There is no need to put it back in the ending

Great author! Don't let this book get in the way... QWQ