The Remaining Days

1. The main and supporting roles cannot be distinguished. I read three chapters intermittently, but I'm not sure who the protagonist is. Is it a boy or a general? (Actually, I don't even remember the names of those people, I just remember that the little girl was called "Chou'er") 2. The positioning of the work is not clear. The background is like the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and the three generals are like the "Liu, Guan, and Zhang" of the Three Kingdoms. The author must have gone to the wrong partition. 😅 If you write fantasy like this, it will be difficult to become popular. Writing history is probably better. 3. The beginning is not very good. The world is too grand, the background is too complex, and it's too cliched. I don't know how the author feels about it, but I remember a lot of kings after reading the first chapter. In fact, the background can be explained bit by bit when the plot is over, or it can be explained in detail in a chapter after ten or twenty chapters. If it really doesn't work, just write it in the background introduction of the work, and really don't write it in the first chapter. 😵 4. It is suggested that the author should read more other people's works. Learn from other people's "Three Golden Chapters".