Traveled Through Time and Became a Martial Saint

The writing is very good, skipping the stage of showing off and being weak at the beginning. Some authors don't know how to write the beginning, so they write it by force. This stage of writing is very awkward. But this one goes directly to the theme, the pace is fast, the plot reaches the climax, and it looks very exciting.

The plot is very good and the content is more innovative Tell me about your experience The title of the book is a bit funny. Thanks to the word "Martial Saint", I clicked to go The road to immortality is a bit circuitous. But it is really necessary. Without this foreshadowing, there would be no new world view, and the reading would not be exciting. After reading about ten chapters, I suddenly realized that it was a masterpiece. I couldn't help but go back and read the sentences I had not paid attention to before, and also reread the prologue and the first chapter. Then... I finished chasing it in one go, and my thoughts are: A gluttonous feast, it's not in vain Recommended book title Start with the Martial Saint, steady the immortal road for nine days (just think about it) (Time travel is really in decline, these days, the popular start is Boss, coupled with a steady style, and it is obviously the flavor of the book) Recommendations from book friends Firstly, book lovers who have the right appetite will not lose out Secondly, I said quietly that I have to recruit people to join the group. With this problem, the author has entered the palace, what should I do? Oh, worry

Science and technology system: Orthodox science and technology climbing: Mechanical science and technology civilization (representatives of modern China and others) Biotechnology civilization (under deep space (Green Star Civilization)) Microscopic civilization （）              （）              （）                    （）                                                                                   （ ）              ：      （，，，）             System flow: I think the system is more hand-crafted than the technological system. The system of cultivating immortals does not have that much imagination. The world view is different, but the system creator in the fantasy system should mention two books,                                                                                                                                                               . Martial arts system:                                                                                                Xinghe Martial Way          . Human Immortal Martial Arts (Yangshen)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             （，）                （，）               （，）                （）                （）               Bloodline Martial Arts (swallowing the bloodline of foreign races, gaining its abilities to strengthen myself, I am too strong to be immortal)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Bloodline Martial Arts. Cultivation system of immortality:                                                                                                                                                                   . Gang Sha Qi Training (Dao Dao Zhengfeng)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       . Scientific Cultivation of Immortality (Into Cultivation, 40,000 Years of Cultivation)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          The way to control beasts (monsters will die when they are killed, control the beasts in the heavens, this road is quite interesting, you can go and see it)           Weird cultivation of immortality (Tomorrow's Tribulation, Immortal Ruins)                                                                                                                                                                                                . Ghost and Immortal System (Yang Shen) Magic System:         Mage School (Traditional Elemental Mage)         Arcane School (Arcane God Throne, I have a floating city)     Wizard School (Wizard Journey, Wizard World) Magician School (Shape Moon) Sequence School (Lord of Mysteries) Card School (Many excellent ones, but none are particularly representative) Rune school (those who have read League of Legends fans should know it) Druid school (urban transformation druid) Alchemist school (everyone should know the more famous Philosopher's Stone, mentioned in many novels) Psionics system: Psionics school (more traditional school) Psionics school (Warcraft) Jedi School (Jedi Knight) Shinto System:                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         . （）                （）                （）               The Way of Sacrifice (borrowing power to grow from communicating and communicating with heaven and earth, gods or spiritual creatures, I am actually not sure whether it belongs to the Shinto or Immortal system, I feel it is more of a Shinto system) Emperor's Dragon Qi, the way of national destiny (exclusively for the emperor)            Taoist schools        Military system (there are quite a few masterpieces, just talk about an Immortal Qin multi-dimensional empire,)                                                                                                                                                            The Taoist school. Fighting spirit system (old classic, no need to introduce more)                                                           Soul ring system (       , no need to introduce)              Demon system (devouring, killing evolution, abyss demon of all worlds)       Crusu System (no need to explain, always give me some sugar)                                                                                                                                                                                                       Crusu                               . Shadow system (a system with more assassins) Summoning system (no need to explain) Path of legend (Soul of Burning Steel, Miracle is great!) Superpower system (the man at the top of the food chain, Emperor Anping is awesome!) Ninja system (Naruto, various ninja novels) Onmyoji system (a friend of mine cried and complained that Onmyoji's shipments are low? Is it low? I haven't played it, so I don't know) Confucianism and Taoism system (no good novels)                                                                                                                                                                                           to       to               -

Seek the name of the state, the name of the sect, and the inheritance of the sect's dharma lineage. The name of a third-level immortal, his path to immortality, treasures, etc. For example, Qingzhou Immortal Ape Sect has seven Dharma veins of Seven Color Ape, Red Ape Dharma vein, Red Ape Immortal, and Earth Immortal Dao Fruit. Or Youzhou, Xuanyin Sect, has nine dharma veins of Jiuyou, Tongyou dharma vein, Tongyou Immortal, Six Tribulations Ghost Immortal Dao Fruit, Skeleton Dharma Body, Ghost Immortal Divine Weapon, and God-Slaying Sword. Not only the forty-nine states of the human race, but also all kinds of monsters, ghosts, and heresies.

The writing is good, and the descriptions of fighting techniques and the use of Dharma are much more advanced than those of The Peak of Green Lotus. It is recommended that the author's description of fighting skills be biased towards the description of the Flying Sword and Magical Treasure of Shushan Swordsman of Huanzhu Louzhu. This way, the description of fighting skills is worlds higher than the description of fighting skills described by 90% of the authors who write novels about cultivating immortals nowadays.

Cut it early, both steps were wrong. Being exiled, it is obvious that Shanhaijie cannot continue to write. If you squeeze so many people who have great supernatural powers in other books and can be the top boss in the world into one world, it is already broken. Raising the status of Shanhaijie and making Shanhaijie the source of the universe and the center of all worlds can only make up for part of it. It is impossible to complete it under the eyes of so many people who can flip the chessboard at any time. Then I had no choice but to change the map, but I made the mistake of clearing out points and restarting. After writing a few chapters, I realized that my grades dropped drastically and I forced myself to switch to Ancient Times. However, I had already finished the game badly and no one read it.

Let me tell the author this, I am more concerned about this book than you are, because in my opinion, this is a very promising work. Of course, it is slightly lacking in the realm of explanation, but the flaws are not concealed, and the future is promising! Come on!

Cultivation is too complicated! I looked confused! After becoming an immortal, I feel like I am playing tricks on others, just like we read pig's feet in a book! It is also said that when a first-level true immortal reaches perfection, he can jump out of time and space and live forever. Later, Heavenly Dao reminds him that the number of first-level immortals has reached a certain calamity. How can the first person to become a first-level immortal allow the following people to come up!

The whole book is about cultivation and nothing else. Are the readers reading a novel or "listening to a lecture"?

Looking at the first part, there are too many various settings, and reading the novel feels like taking a class. Trouble.

I still don't understand, what's the meaning of the Tao and Fruit of Heaven, Earth, Man, God, Ghost and Immortal? The main character, the Human Immortal, has a high limit on how powerful he can become in the future, so why don't you cultivate simpler human immortals and ghost immortals? First get the Dao Fruit and your lifespan will increase, and then you can become stronger step by step? The Dao Fruit, which is only available when cultivating Dao and becomes an immortal, looks very funny in this book. The author might as well change the Dao Fruit into Golden Elixir, divided into five levels. It's not that you can't make detailed settings. It's just that these settings cannot be integrated into the novel and look very erratic.

The writing about Realm is too messy and complicated, and it makes me very tired to read it.

The chaotic realm, why don't we explain it clearly at the beginning The chaotic human immortal way, the protagonist travels through time to become an adult immortal Taoist master, but he is just a martial saint. In Chapter 22, several human immortals appear in the human immortal way. What are you talking about?

It's all clouds and fog, the realm is too chaotic

Nothing exciting, just mediocre

Why does that stick have to be made thick at one end and thin at the other? It should be like a baseball bat. You can only hit people with the thin side. But from your description, it is used the same as a golden cudgel. I don't understand?

What a bullshit real spirit bead, it smells like ten years ago! How lousy! ! ! It's not as straightforward as the system

It's a bit confusing. I ordered it all and looked at the back. I felt that this book will collapse.

After reading this book, the immortals in this book are really pitiful. I don't envy them at all. At least I can only work so hard for less than 100 years. Unlike these immortal cultivators who are chosen to work as workers and kneel down to beg for food, it would be ridiculous if I had just drank two more sips of wine that day. . . . The time wasted may have no future! Is this cultivating immortality? What a bunch of wrongdoers.

The world view is huge and full of details, but after the second-grade pig's trotters, the description of the third-grade enemy is too limited. Some are not too reasonable, but overall the book is good

The power system and training system are too complicated, and they are introduced in crackling chapters in several chapters.

What kind of dog bar stuff? 170 Was fine before and suddenly something went wrong. It's rubbish.

Farewell message to the author I saw it from the first moment the author published it. At that time, I felt that the structure was grand, the writing style was steady, and it was promising to be a high-quality product, so I posted to help, and many people said that I had received money! Along the way, the author has written well, but there are two disadvantages. The first is asking for too much leave, and the second is cleaning up and reopening. This is a taboo in online writing. I have seen many people who change maps, but none of them can become popular after changing their accounts. I don't like this style either, so I can only say goodbye to the world. I hope the author will subscribe to this book and see you in your next book!

What did you write? It's a mess, and it's all wrong. . Block the author and I will no longer rely on you for novels. . .

The first-level Immortal Five Steps is very good. Why did he suddenly do this style of prehistoric style? I don't want to watch it.

Science and technology system: Orthodox science and technology climbing: Mechanical science and technology civilization (representatives of modern China and others) Biotechnology civilization (under deep space (Green Star Civilization)) Microscopic civilization (Rebirth of the Super Battleship)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              (Magical race crossing, silent killing should also be counted,)                        Intelligent mechanical civilization (everyone knows about the omnic crisis, it is simply AI civilization) (      ) (The brackets represent the novel, the novel involves this system, but it is not necessarily the mainstream system in the novel.)                                                                )           Quantum immortality: (​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ 1. System flow, I think the system is more like a technological system. There is not so much imagination in the system of cultivating immortals. The world view is different, but the system creator in the fantasy system mentions two books.     2. Digimon. 3，，（，，）                                                             :                       ()                （）                （）               The King of Fighters Martial Arts (King of Fighters fics, Hong Kong comic fics, electromagnetic martial arts are also in this category, the key words are supernatural powers, physical pain, emotional stimulation, and can push the mountains and rivers ninety thousand miles) (The Lord of the World, the Ancestor of Ten Thousand Monsters is also somewhat similar, a similar version of the Daluo Road)                                                                                       out of the Devouring Martial Arts ( Devouring the Starry Sky, the accurate name should be       Path of the Starry Sky Warrior) <                 Gene Locked Martial Arts ( infinite terror, One-Punch Man)           The Light System of the Soul (Infinite Terror, the Emperor of the Galaxy)           The Secret Martial Arts (Mysterious Journey, I Can Go Back to the Mysterious Era)            The Qi and Blood Martial Arts (The Great Dao Discipline)     Bloodline Martial Arts (Swallowing the blood of foreign races, gaining its abilities to strengthen myself, I am too strong to be immortal)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Bloodline Martial Arts. Cultivation system:                                                                                     Daodao Jindan (the correct name should be called the traditional qi-building foundation pill Yuanying Xiuxianliu, Mortal Cultivation of Immortals) （）                       （）                 （，）                 （）                Witchcraft and Poison Cultivation (Gu Zhenren, Controlling the Heavens of Beasts)               The way to control the beasts (Controlling the Heavens of Beasts, this path is very interesting, you can go and see it)       The way of change (imitation of the Tao, fetal transformation, the thirty-six changes of Tiangang, and the seventy-two changes of earth evil are all in this category, representative novels: monsters will die when they are killed) Earth Immortal Blessed Land System (Became a Martial Saint through time travel)              Ghost Immortal System (Yang Shen)           Buddhist cultivation (became a golden body, awakened to wisdom, became a Buddha and became an ancestor, named the Great Enlightened One)         Magic system: Mage school (traditional elemental mage) Arcane school (arcane throne, I have a floating city) Wizard School (Wizard Journey, Wizard World) Magician School (Shape Moon) Sequence School (Lord of Mysteries) Card genre (to reiterate, it's not Yu-Gi-Oh, but Planeswalker, Amber Sword)          Rune genre (those who have read League of Legends fans should know)          Druid genre (urban transformation Druid)        The Alchemist School (everyone should know the famous Philosopher's Stone, mentioned in many novels) The Summoning School (the earliest Western magic school, Summon the Nightmare, and the Girl's Great Summoning) The Celestial System (an older school, mentioned in many novels) Spell position school (one of the ancient schools, common in Faerun plane novels, mage novels with the existence of magic network. Representative novel: Doctor Green Dragon) Psychic system: （，：，？）                 （）                 （）                 （） ：                （）（）                （）                （）                （）               The Way of Sacrifice (borrowing power to grow through communication and exchange with heaven and earth, gods or spiritual beings. Actually, I am not sure whether it belongs to the Shinto or Immortal system. I feel that it is more of a Shinto system) ： The path of the God of Destiny (weaving destiny, manipulating the common people) The Yun Dynasty School (the Immortal Qin Empire is this) The Taoist School (the supplement of the Yun Dynasty School, represented by the work Destiny is Burning.) The military system (there are many representative works, gathering and commanding the evil spirits of subordinates to fight against the strong ones, barely included in the luck system, it can be regarded as a supplement to the luck system) Fortune teller (can also be called a fortune teller, a fable master, the method of cultivating fortune divination)          Feng Shui master (check Feng Shui, suppress a place, covered in the sky.) Other systems (few schools):   The system of practicing the false to become the real (the cultivation mode of returning illusion to reality to enhance the dimension, which represents the path of the master god and the birth of the drama queen)                                                         1 Elemental practice (the combination of technology system and energy system, making people elemental, dark, and light, the representative is Ultraman)                                                                                                                                      but Crusu system (no need to explain, always give me some sugar)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Crusu God System) Holy Light System (no need to explain) Shadow System (a system with more assassins) The Legendary Road (Soul of Burning Steel, Miracle is Great!)                          Superpower system (the man at the top of the food chain, Emperor Anping is awesome!)           Ninja system (Naruto, various ninja novels)                                      Onmyoji system (a friend of mine cried out that Onmyoji's shipments are low? Is it low? I've never played it, so I don't know)            Confucianism and Taoism system (there are no good novels)    Three chakras and seven chakras system (Indian mythology system) I will add them one by one in the future. If there is any system that I have missed, I will post this post in the comment area of all the novels quoted here to pay tribute to these excellent novels that bring me happiness.            12.1，，，            12.2，，，，             13.1，，，，，           1.4，——，          System genre version 5.0, Major changes, modified the Yunchao system into a genre under the Qiyun system. Integrated into the Qiyun system. The top ten recognized true infinite-level existences in the infinite infinite multiverse of the starting point can serve as the ceiling background in any world, giving birth to the kind of existence that is not out of place at the Daluo-level conceptual level or high-dimensional level. (Kick me if you missed anything, I will add it.)                                                                                                      . ，              ，              ，              ，              ，             Seven, the original · bottomless abyss     8. The original · supreme prehistoric     9. The original · river of death       10, the boundless star realm     This month's novel recommendation: Novel currently being read: Golden Dragon: Six Thousand Years of Empire Doctor Green Dragon Am I invincible in the future?

Why did I see this latest updated chapter? The first thought that came to my mind was that this book was going to be a mess! ! ! ! !

In fact, you can let the protagonist build a universe and plunder other universes to speed up the progress of the protagonist's cultivation. The two universes collide together and then rely on cultivating subordinates. You can also absorb the Qi of Hongmeng to practice the Qi of Chaos. The attributes are too complex and it is difficult to absorb the Qi of Hongmeng. It is as difficult to encounter as a lottery ticket.

It looks good to me. It's not recommended yet. It must be less recommended. The update should be more powerful.

There are too many cultivation processes. When one reaches a higher level, sometimes fighting can last for a long time. It's all about tension and pressure.