The Rich and Talented Man in Red Mansion

Who is the heroine? I hope it's Daiyu?

HopeJia Baoyu will have a tragic ending.

I really liked the author's trip to Jiangnan. The interaction with Daiyu was well written. I saw a sharp-tongued and kind-hearted Sister Lin, which opened her heart and made it more interesting to get along with her. Come on

After all, traveling through time once, isn't it: Marry Baochai, play with Daiyu, and sleep with you. . . ? Isn't it to destroy Jia Zhen, seize the title, achieve glory and wealth, and be promoted and make a fortune? Having a dream is not easy, so don't make the hero and all the readers miserable. After watching so many Dreams of Red Mansions, I either traveled through time and became the wretched Jia Huan or Jia Cong. The vision determines the character of the work. Xifu has no future. Author, if you travel to Dongfu, you have a high level of vision! I hope to marry Baochai and Daiyu as soon as possible.

The author's writing style is quite good, but the story is not rigorous.

Unknowingly, I had 300 collections, and it was recommended again, this time for a new history book. Thank you again for your collection, recommendation votes, comments, and tips. For a new writer, every collection, every recommendation ticket, every comment, and every reward is a great encouragement to me. I hope everyone can continue to support me. 🥺

I would like to give some suggestions. Some plots transition too quickly and many details are not explained, which makes reading difficult. It often takes a long time to recall and think before you can understand. Since it is a time-travel novel and not a suspenseful mystery novel, there are not so many hidden plots that will make reading unsatisfactory! I hope it can be improved, with more detailed descriptions, more fleshed-out character descriptions, and more pen and ink, which would be even better!

This episode makes my liver hurt. Can I speed up and skip it

The update of "Dream into the Red Mansion" is too slow. I will read this when I am short of books. But I don't know what you want to express in the recent chapters. Maybe I read too roughly and just don't know what you want to write. Can you tell us what the main and secondary aspects of your book are? Or do you want to write a power struggle in the context of the Red Mansion, or do you want to write a story using the background of the Red Mansion? I don't see you writing about Red Mansion. The Jia family is not as miserable as you wrote. I want to give you a few recommendation votes every day, but... . . Forget it, no matter what, it's not easy for you to write it. I vote for you.

Come on, author, keep writing, it will definitely become popular

Recommended votes every day, the author works hard to update ~

What is the relationship between your relatives and your relatives?

Many characters speak mysteriously and I don't know what they're doing. I'm here to read historical Red Mansions fan fiction, but what you write is a mystery-solving text? Just talking about solving the case, there must be a main line and a branch line. What is this mess about? Why don't you overdo the scene switching? Is it a novel or a screenplay?

Personally, I think it's good. Why doesn't the author continue to update it?

I'll give you my daily recommendation votes. Please update me better.

The protagonist and Baoyu have been out for five servers, and basically have nothing to do with each other. In ancient times, the protagonist was from a patrilineal clan and basically had nothing to do with Jia Mu.