Eternal Night - Black Rain and East Wind

Oh my God, I live in a huge conspiracy—eternal night! 😰😰😰😰

After some hard work, I finally reached 500 experience points at the starting point, and I can post here 🤭 I will pay attention to the discussion area every day. Everyone is welcome to chat and discuss here. If you have any ideas about plot characters, you can share them here YY, maybe they will come true 😁

Hello author, I have read the book. I personally feel that you can omit some of the worldview introduction in the first chapter and start directly from the main body of the story. There are many Western classical steampunk elements that can be borrowed. In fact, it would be good to start directly from the protagonist to the grandfather. In a novel, the most important thing is the story, not the large setting. There is no reading without interest. The development of the story is what matters. If there is anything wrong, I still hope Haihan

Hello author, I have read some of your books and the atmosphere at the beginning is very good. It's just that the paragraphs are too compact and it hurts my eyes to read. I wish I could divide them into paragraphs every 2 to 3 sentences. It's so tiring to have a dense paragraph~ After expressing a small plot, you can divide it into the next paragraph. There is no need to lump them together~😅😰😅🥵

I always thought that Mo Lian was the heroine, but then she turned into the Nine Demons. I was a little disappointed 😞 But! The further you go, the more you fall in love with Jiu Yao. Mo Lian can't even hate him~ Hey. A character like Grandpa You, although a bit too much for Gu Han, has a weird personality but is manly enough. His own woman is quite handsome [ fn=10] Also, Elder Feng, I can't hate him It's over. Think about it, it's nothing. I hate the people I hate. I can't hate it at all. I just wait for the big boss. I feel it's not that simple 🤫

There aren't many points left, so don't mind, I'll shamelessly read your first book for free.

After today's update, I finally saw them together! ! ! ! ! 🤭🤭😚🤭🤭🤭

So excited to finally be together! ! Jiu Yao is the proper heroine 🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫

Haha, I really like to read the settings, maybe because I like Warhammer and DND.