Qingmeixiandao

I don't know why, I'm almost perfect, and a love scene suddenly comes up. It's very sudden, and I can't understand it. I'll just put it aside for the time being. The author's previous writing is quite good, but this paragraph here is blinding, and it's too rigid. Well, I think I'll put this book aside for now. I'll see if the author can write this paragraph when there are more chapters.

What can I say about this book? It's really average. It can be seen that the author wanted to write a good book, but his writing style was not good. There are many typos and inappropriate words in many places. The most important thing is that the logic is confusing and the protagonist's character is too awkward. In short, not worth watching

It's very interesting, that is to say, I like it better, for the following reasons: 1. There is no heroine, and it focuses on plot 2. It is not similar to ordinary fairy novels, and there are few plots such as treasure hunting and upgrading 3. There is a fairy spirit, fairy tales and fairy tales, focusing on one fairy, instead of writing martial arts in the name of fairy 4. The characters can withstand scrutiny, and there is basically no special way of writing 5. The punctuation is very comfortable But overall, there are still some flaws. For example, the upgrade process is too smooth. It is understandable that the protagonist wants to achieve great achievements within the lifetime of his parents. However, in the case of an average of 10,000 years of enlightenment (approximately), the protagonist has already reached the top at a few hundred years old. Is it a bit...? The plot in the later stages is a bit messy, and skipping the entire section does not affect the viewing experience. The family line also ends abruptly, and the ending is a bit rushed, but the final chapter has a lingering feeling. The author obviously has good writing skills, but he is a little weak in the tightness and control of the plot. The above is purely a personal opinion. Ignoring the above, overall, Qingmei Xiandao is still a novel worth reading.

What a good book, a rare good book. This book is the most sincere and best-written book on cultivating immortality that I have read in the past few years. When it comes to cultivating immortals, killing people to seize treasures, and killing love and despair are common routines. Protagonists such as Han Li and Master Gu have always been popular. The experiences of these protagonists allow readers to see the dangers and ruthlessness of the world of Xianxia, ​​and also let readers know how difficult the road to seeking the truth is. It's just that I have read too many, and there are only a few classics. Readers urgently need different stories, different excitement. I couldn't put it down this novel. In the book, you can not only see the beauty and danger of the world of immortals, but also the hardships and hardships of the sages of the human race. The world is so big that it is not easy for human beings to live in it. The novel so far has two main lines. One is centered on the protagonist and tells the story of the protagonist's growth experience. What's impressive is that the protagonist's journey along the way, the love of parents, the relationship between master and apprentice, and the friendship between friends are very vividly depicted, which is also one of the reasons why I like this book. There is also a line about the turmoil in the court and the fight between humans, monsters and dragons. I am looking forward to the follow-up development of this book. Come on, author.

This brother really treats him as a nanny

Although there is nothing poisonous about this book, there is nothing interesting about it either. The early stage is okay, but the middle and later stages are basically a series of training and upgrading. The overall plot is relatively bland, with no ups and downs. You can guess what will happen next without even looking at it. I hope the author can write a better plot in the next book😅

Author, does this book have a female protagonist?

The talent is so strong that I completely lose the idea of ​​watching.

On the first day of 2019, come on, author! Give away 100 points!

Fully booked. Monthly tickets are given. I think this book is much better than the previous two books. Your last two books made me so depressed. Especially that novel about a businessman cultivating immortality, which was so cruel that it was almost life-or-death. This novel is different, it's very good. Study more novels like The Supreme Being. Appear holy in front of people. Be sure to grasp the cool points. You are making rapid progress in writing novels.

The current situation of the Human Emperor: 1. The child next door lost the fight, and the parents were shameless to take action. The Human Emperor is going to die. 2. There are no parents in his family, only the clan leader, but the clan leader feels that the Human Emperor is not from their faction, and wants the Human Emperor to bow his head and join the clan leader's faction. 3. The Human Emperor does not want to beg for help, so he will die.

It's pretty good, but I don't like the ending.

There are a lot of typos. I hope the author remembers to check them after finishing writing.

The most rubbish thing to write about your family

This book is comfortable to read and more satisfying than the popular routine. I will order it all. Come on, the author, and update it soon...

Come on, you haven't lost your love and sex just because you are practicing Taoism, and you haven't neglected your family. This is what a human being is. I like it very much.

In the ending, the protagonist dies and helps others, which is very holy.

There is a difference between immortals and mortals. Once you embark on the road of cultivating immortals, you will be in two different worlds from your family. Cultivation as an immortal is cruel and you expose your vital points in front of the enemy. How can you go far? The enemy threatens your family, can you protect them? A person who cultivates immortality can live for hundreds or even thousands of years, while a mortal can only live for a few decades. What kind of identity should have what kind of mentality, otherwise it is the way to death.

Nowadays, you can't read comments when reading books. They are basically just comments. Looking at the comment area, a bunch of people think that cultivating immortals should be ruthless and not consider their parents. You have read too many dark novels and your hearts are darkened. If you feel that you can't accept it, just read Shashasha novels. I don't force you to read them. It makes you feel like you have cultivated immortality. It is a fantasy in the first place. Every one of you is like losing money.

The way of heaven regards all living beings as equal, without any preference. To cultivate immortality is to gradually get closer to the Tao, so you forget your feelings when talking too much. To cultivate immortality, you must be pure and inactive. The protagonist can help his relatives, but it will involve a lot. His parents have relatives and friends, brothers and sisters, seven aunts and eight aunts, and parents. After crossing, they also want to cross. My relatives and friends also said that I still have friends. Can I pass by? Friends of friends, friends of friends, relatives of relatives, relatives, okay, if you don't help, they will say that you have forgotten your roots. There are many people who help, so you have to control the level.

I've finished reading the pirated version, so I'm here to replenish my order. 🙂

Recently, I suddenly don't like watching this kind of movies without heroines. I am alone and have no sense of substitution at all...

If I say that Wen Ruo is a bitch, no one will criticize me.

This book is mediocre and I have no motivation to read it.

I don't like the protagonist. The storage bag I got on the battlefield contains human bones, which the demon collected as a reserve food. The protagonist calls the demon an evil beast. Why don't you think that you will also skin and bones the demon, prepare to use the demon's skin to make clothes, and eat a lot of demon meat. From a human perspective, killing demons and eating demons is okay, but only allowing humans to eat demons and not allowing demons to eat humans is too double standards.

I just saw the paid chapter, and I really like the style of this book. It has worldly feelings, warmth and warmth, the logic of the characters is self-consistent, and the setting of the storyline is relatively reasonable. It is worth reading. Shortcomings. There are many places where the syntax is lengthy. For example, a certain meaning can be expressed in five words, but the actual behavior takes more than ten words. The fighting scenes are also hard to describe, and the idea of ​​​​reciting moves is indeed a bit outdated. The balance of plot density is somewhat imbalanced. For example, the role of the male protagonist in the early stage is simple and his presence in the main plot is low. In order to balance this simplicity, other interesting elements such as weapon refining, elixirs, and delicacies are usually used to neutralize it. However, at least in the early stages I have read, the author is relatively weak in setting. Looking at these, the author may not have low reading in other areas, but he has not started writing novels for a long time. This work should be a practice work and needs time to polish. I also wish the author will have better works in the future

Change the name to Green Tea Fairy Way 😰

This book is well written and gives me a unique feeling. Just like when I first read "Tai Hao", I have always liked the early stage of "Tai Hao", which is bland, fairy-like and fresh. Starting from the first chapter, I found "Green Plum Fairy Way" very interesting. It is very plain and detailed. Until I read the realm of Yin Shen, I felt it was a bit messy. In my opinion, the author almost went wrong at that stage and went against the will of the book. But I still re-wrote the book later, which is very good. Many people are just struggling with two problems. First, this book is too bland. I think that friends who read the two hundred chapters carefully will not have this problem. Therefore, those who are struggling with this problem either flip through it casually, or the concentration of the book is too intense and cannot be accepted in a slow manner. The second is the issue of parents' immortality. I think the author should have seriously considered this issue. First of all, only the two parents got two small gods in the later stage, and the appearance rate is very low. Then the author did not give up on the parents. This should be the setting of parents to break through some realms. And the most important point is because of this setting. Until the finale, I felt that the "human" side of the protagonist clearly and naturally exists. This is the original intention of this book, that is: Immortal, first of all, human. The author writes very well. This is a complete book. The original intention of the book has been pointed out from the beginning. Please read the title. The setting of the green plum tree is completely necessary. It is the direction of the protagonist to seek Tao and immortality; and the simple parents stay, which means that the human side of the protagonist has not disappeared because of the pursuit of immortality. Of course there are other things that I won't go into here one by one. In the end, the author used part of a poem by Su Shi to give the book a very artistic ending. Don't listen to the sound of beating leaves in the forest, why not scream and walk slowly. Bamboo sticks and mango shoes are easier than horses, who is afraid? A coop of mist and rain will last a lifetime. The steep spring breeze blows away the drunkenness, it is slightly cold, but the mountain tops are shining slantingly. Looking back at the desolate place where I came from, there was neither wind, rain nor sunshine.

Doesn't anyone think Shinto is too easy? Not to mention the second-grade god who is equivalent to the Golden Immortal, but is it so easy to become the third-grade god of the Xuanxian level? There is a high probability of canonizing a third-grade god named Dingyaohou. How much transportation is not required? ! So what do immortals who have worked hard to cultivate for thousands of years want? The dynasty can canonize many beings of this level at will. I really don't understand the meaning of cultivation? And don't you think it's too illusory to just rely on the power of transportation? Is it completely external force? And it is so easy to achieve. In tens of thousands of years, the third-grade level will be worth tens of thousands? Is Shinto so powerful? ? ? Don't understand at all

Everything about the setting is fine, and I quite like the characters, but the logic is terrible. Two higher realms are not instant kills. They are equivalent to Golden elixir versus Qi training, or Nascent Soul versus foundation building. If you can't kill instantly, can you still beat each other with one or two moves? ? ? The golden elixir required by the leader of one sect cannot be obtained in the sect, because the items are in the hands of another lineage, and this lineage is only for Qi training. The key is that this thing itself is inherited from the sect! ! ! For the sake of conflicts, completely made up reasons