I Refuse to Enter the Imperial Palace

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It took me one night to read it. Generally speaking, what left a deep impression on me was the writing. Hahaha Jiang's writing is really good. It has a delicate and profound feeling of peeling off cocoons. When I first saw it, it was eye-catching. This is relatively rare in both male and female channels. Is this really Hahajiang's first novel? Of course, I think there are still some shortcomings in the plot, that is, there is not enough momentum. Perhaps this is the case for most women's videos. When I read the article, I felt like watching a costume film and television drama. Although the performance is good, there are inevitably many clichés that everyone has defaulted to. How this plot should continue and how it should develop next is like being engraved on film, lacking any unexpected twists. Emperors, court ladies, brothels, especially brothels, the male protagonist has to go. If something doesn't happen with the female protagonist in the brothel, he won't be involved in the play? There is also the setting of "disguise and make yourself invincible". Maybe men and women in ancient times were blind. Of course these are harmless, just complaints. But I want to emphasize that although it is a romance, there are some details about the male protagonist Li Hua being gay, which is really a bit dramatic. Of course, this is due to my insensitivity to BL. Is Li Hua too merciful to the female protagonist who wears men's clothing? For example, the scene at the Lu family execution ground was a bit intense. As the male protagonist, Li Hua lacks masculinity and looks a bit like a fictional boy who is loved by women. I can't tell whether such a character is lovable or not, but I would rather Haha Jiang portray a mature, responsible, and charming male protagonist. Overall, this article is quite well written. Of course, the development and background of the story give people a very profound script element in it. The background, stage, and behavior of the characters (especially the section where the emperor can leave the palace at will) are quite different from the dull and serious impression of real history. Although it reads more humorously and has expectations for development, for those who study the party, this is a bit "out of touch with reality." This is roughly the difference between soft science fiction and hard science fiction. If it can be seen by some discerning people, it would be quite good to turn it into a film and television work. Also, let's complain about the part about "asking oneself to join the army". Why does the heroine ask oneself to join the army? What's the motivation? The drama element may be a bit heavy.

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Notification from the author: Tomorrow, that is, 2018.11.30, This book will be on the shelves! Wall for first order!

I like Lu Wanwan very much and feel sorry for her. It would be great if her father did not die! I really hope she can meet her true destiny soon! I am more in favor of Wanji CP!

The author writes too slowly. I would like to ask, if I give a reward, how much would it take to add more updates?

Keep writing, one book will make you a god, you are the best, I love you❤️❤️❤️

Excellent work, worth pursuing! Very nice! 😰😰Is my avatar handsome? Do you know who I am?

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