Tiger and Dragon Flying

The author writes well, I am optimistic about you 🤭

After reading your novel, frankly speaking, I have the same problem as when I first wrote it. There is nothing wrong with the story itself, it is well written, and it can be seen that the content is relatively sophisticated, but one thing that has been overlooked is that reading habits have changed. It's not about fast food or other issues, but the way readers accept narratives has changed. For example, in the first three chapters, or even in the first chapter, the identity, background, and short-term goals of the characters should be highlighted. The ingredients of palace rebellion are explained in half a chapter, which is enough to bury the clues. Too many will dissuade many people. Writing online articles is actually difficult, especially if you want to write an online article that has connotation and reduces the difficulty of reading. Your writing is at least better than 80% of people, but if you want more people to read it, you really need to rethink it. This is the advice of a boring guy who has written 1.4 Million words for free 😁 PS, as a mobile phone reading habit, it is best not to exceed five sentences in a paragraph, otherwise it will be painful to read.