Take the Interstellar to the End of the World

All I can say is that you are now on my list of risky books to pursue. . I don't make any big claims. Everyone needs to eat. . But your new book. . IMHO. . I wouldn't have read it until there were 1 million words. . After raising it for so many days. I also specially set up automatic subscription, and imagined what would happen next. . The result turned out to be this ←_←Forget it. .

Ha! Sure enough, reading Uncle Ling's novels is the most comfortable, especially since Uncle Ling repeatedly emphasized that his novels do not need the judgment of brainless readers who shout "poisonous" and "Holy Mother" every day. To be honest, I hate people who use these words every day to "instruct" others on how to write novels. . So much so that now I usually don't mess around with Qidian. Now I stay at Qidian just because I want to pursue two books, one is Sword of Dawn with Big Eyes, and the other is this one. . As for those on the ranking list? Haha. . What is that? Forget about the original version, I don't even bother to read the pirated version! Come on, Uncle Ling! Write your story! Just like the previous book, I will chase it to the end!

Zerg unit population limit: 1. . . Dogmeat: I am the swarm!!! Nothing wrong at all ←_←The Queen of Blades cried and fainted in the toilet.

By the way! Uncle Zero, do you know the "Wasteland Narrator" of Fallout fans? He is the protagonist and narrator of the "Radiation Lecture" series of videos. . . He wears physical armor every day without showing his face. He was born a member of the Brotherhood of Steel but likes to travel everywhere. He has rich knowledge of wasteland human geography and always likes to talk about his experiences and knowledge to familiar and unfamiliar passers-by, so many people can't stand his long speeches. . But I have to say that what he said was very useful. I think you can definitely add this into the novel. . Can be a very interesting sidekick. .

My feelings after reading the free chapter Although I have never played StarCraft, the detailed introduction can help those who have never played StarCraft quickly understand the strength of those equipment. The main storyline is also a nostalgic experience for those who have played New Vegas. I personally like Zang Feng better, because in the wasteland he may be the only good person in the world who is willing to take in a crippled little girl who has no connection with him. When I get my confiscated mobile phone back, I will continue to pursue this novel.

Mom sells small batches. . Can't even vote. For A, I can only reward you. . The large number I have used for many years cannot be retrieved because it is not bound to my current mobile phone number. . This broken trumpet doesn't have enough experience to give votes. . . ⊙⊙

Not to mention too much, I finished chasing it because I spent nearly 4 hours looking for Stardom fans all afternoon. You told me to give up, but I still have to look for another 4 hours. . . I don't care what other people think about the author's books, I will continue to follow them, but it seems that the description of armor has been simplified. . . I don't want to go back to the campaign to see that look. . . So helpless╮（╯＿╰）╭

It's very interesting that the author actually used Tang Yan, the soul-piercing suffering master of his previous work Tang Fang, as the protagonist!. . This is really interesting. . . However, this really restored his dull character mentioned in the previous game! He is taciturn and can't hold back a fart for a long time←_←. . It doesn't have any attributes to complain about! Both are veterans, Aros from the previous game is better at complaining than him!

The author's writing style is first-rate, and the plot setting is logically complete. "Four heads banknote", I have almost never seen it since 2008. The content is a little bloody, and a lot of plot text is uncomfortable.

I came from the portable interstellar book. I want to give the author some advice. Don't always write about institutional politics, freedom and revolution. I always feel that it is reflecting something. But in fact, I just want to read a cool article about interstellar troops defeating a different world. 😁 Personal opinion. Anyway, cheers for the author.

Regarding Tang Yan, the character designed by the author, there are some generally recognized facts: This character is the former protagonist in the author's last completed novel "With the Star" who traveled through time, and the attached system is similar to the protagonist system in the previous novel. From the previous book, we can get the following points: 1. Tang Yan lived in the space colonial era before time traveling, 2. Tang Yan has more than 18 years of life experience, 3. Tang Yan is a soldier at the bottom of the army in a feudal society, 4. The reason for joining the army should be the livelihood of the family, 5. Tang Yan has brothers and sisters, 6. Tang Yan was plotted by others before time traveling. Then speculate that in this context, Tang Yan should have some experience in life in the space age, have relatively mature thinking, have certain military literacy as a soldier (and it is for the future), and have been instilled by the national army's thinking concepts (it does not rule out that the character does not trust the national concept and does not agree with it) ), has a certain sense of responsibility (working for his family's livelihood), has spiritual sustenance (because he has relatives of the same generation), and has a strong distrust of strangers (being betrayed by his military colleagues). However, because the death of his parents is related to the government to a certain extent, Tang Yan's trust in the government should also be low. Judging from the above points, Tang Yan should be an idealist who has low trust in things in unfamiliar environments and high trust in relatives. In terms of ability, he should have military literacy and a strong sense of responsibility. He is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, and a cautious idealist. The above is an analysis from the background, from the perspective of this article: From the beginning to before arriving at the Pandaren Legion, Tang Yan is a rational, cold-blooded, logically capable, distrustful of strange things, and confused due to lack of purpose due to amnesia. From arriving at the Pandaren Legion to before taking control of the Pandaren Legion, Tang Yan is not extroverted but not exclusive. He does not have a strong sense of distrust of strange things. He has a certain degree of sensibility and logical ability. Strong jet lag (of course, this can be regarded as a flaw in the plot rather than a problem in character design. After all, no one is perfect in plot design and it is impossible for one person to take care of all aspects). A relatively rational and non-cold-blooded character. After taking control of the Pandaren Legion, Tang Yan is a warm and extroverted character, more emotional, with strong logical ability (of course the logic ability designed by the author is extremely strong), weak distrust of strange things, and even sentimental at certain times. In terms of ability, there is more systematic help in the novel than in the background. So combined with background and novel analysis, Tang Yan's character has changed greatly from the background to the current chapter, but from the perspective of plot advancement, it seems to match such a huge change in personality, giving people a sense of huge tearing in the character's personality. Although the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing for the personality changes to strengthen the plot. The unity with character development, such as contact with the naughty and vivid system adjutant, the first murder, photo memories, understanding and talking to Zang Feng, getting along with friends such as Reina, etc. However, these details are obviously not enough to cause a huge change in the protagonist's personality, so in this design, I think the author has not considered it properly. This is my first opinion. If there is any improper analysis or better additions, please point it out and reply.

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The way the protagonist's interstellar system obtains reward points can increase a large number of reward points due to the trust and hatred of others, "Using human target emotional feedback as reward points, divided into three levels of satisfaction, gratitude, and trust, corresponding to reward points 1, 10, and 100. Taking human target emotional feedback as reward points, divided into three levels of disgust, fear, and hatred, corresponding to reward points 1, 4, and 20. Since this is this model, if you master the human heart, you will master the power. The way to quickly control people's hearts is to establish a church and push the stars out to become gods. There are roughly three ways to tell others the truth in the wasteland: one is to use fists like Tyson and violence, the other is to have the eloquence of an outstanding leader, and the third is to use eyeball robots to promote your ideas. Only with a three-pronged approach can you tell others the truth, but one If you are not the protagonist of Mary Suven, you simply cannot have the fists of Tyson and the eloquence of the Führer at the same time, but the protoss can do these, such as Zeratul. For example, Artanis, and look at the appearance of the protoss in the Legacy of the Void CG in front of the ancients and the people who have lost hope in the wasteland. And the fanatical believers who believe in the protoss will give the protagonist a steady stream. I believe that one hundred reward points will be provided by the guys who are new to the church, and those one to ten reward points As a normal protoss, the protoss cannot stand the wasteland humans' attitude of abandoning spirituality for the sake of living. Some protoss have bad personal ethics, such as Alarak, but they are not like the wasteland humans Compared to guys whose average morals are full of chivalry, the protoss certainly cannot stand the dirty behavior of the wastelanders devouring their own kind and mutilating young females, because the protoss have also experienced eons of catastrophe and know the pain. They only need to stand to provide a moral deterrent to the protagonist's settlement Talking about the acquisition of hatred value. , That's even simpler. When the protagonist promotes the Church of the Protoss, as long as the higher-ups with normal IQ and a little logic in other settlements know that the protagonist colludes with aliens, the hatred value will appear and rise endlessly. The protagonist can win a steady stream of reward points without running errands, and his reputation will even spread to the United States and arouse the vigilance of the American Enclave. However, What's the point of fear when you get interstellar equipment? The ultimate goal of the Protoss Church is to use the pre-war moral principles and axioms of the Eight Classics as doctrine and customary law to promote the recovery of human morality and establish a normal community. Of course, before that, we must solve the problem of water purification and soil purification and restore agriculture. After all, the wasteland is a water-based economy, as evidenced by the bottle cap currency. Understand this. Note: When establishing a church, you must be careful not to let the protoss die in front of the wastelanders, otherwise they will betray the gang At the end: My suggestion is just for everyone to laugh at, you can watch it or ignore it, ^ω^

I hope I can keep writing this time

Personally, I feel that it is a pity that the StarCraft, Red Alert, Empire, and Cavalry-Blade series do not follow the Explosive Soldiers style. More importantly, the author is so good in writing that he does not write about the Explosive Soldiers style~ Negative review

I think the author is very suitable to be a writer, not an online writer. Your careful writing style determines that you are slow to write, and as you said yourself, it is very tiring for readers to follow. At the same time, the writing style is also very good. In summary, I think you, the author, can try to turn it into a physical book, and then find a publisher to publish it. Maybe this path will be more suitable for you {"NickName":"Hyperion God","UserId":187188946}

Warhammer 40k_river-level layout, StarCraft_sector-level layout, to the author has become a village chief fighting, which is also a virtue, I am not telling you, since the layout of writing a book is so small, don't borrow such a grand background. It looks awkward.

The swarm destroyed our home My noble people became refugees

It's like, taking the Blast Empire era system, but always being a small bandit group.

What is your interstellar without violent troops?

To be honest, I was really disgusted when I saw the chapter review for the next chapter. In the first book, Uncle Mio mainly writes about some thoughts about human nature and some ideological and spiritual things. He mainly praises the glorious human nature and those who truly dare to contribute. Then someone came online and said something about praising the Japanese. This type is an obvious gangster. In "Carrying StarCraft with You", I don't know that it praises one person, but a type of people, and then there are gangsters who insist on catching the Japanese. This is not a gangster. I have to say what Japan is like. Oh! During the Anti-Japanese War, many Japanese anti-war people came to China to help the Kuomintang and Communist armies, and some joined the Red Cross to provide medical assistance to the Kuomintang and Communist armies and the anti-Japanese armed forces. Why didn't I see you saying that you are a traitor by exaggerating national hatred here?

I think it would be fun if the protagonist finds himself in the Stellaris universe after walking out of the earth. That magical P Club game can make up for the shortcomings of the previous interstellar book. There are hundreds of schools of thought contending, and countless ideologies are enough for the author to write about. In the Stellaris universe, humans, insects, protoss, Hunyuan, and Xel'naga must stick together tightly to avoid being wiped out by the extermination regime. Or it may be discovered that the entire universe discriminates against the guys who came to heaven from the wasteland planet. This would take ten million words.

Why is StarCraft being harmonized when I carry it with me 😭😭

It's cold, everyone, hey! There is no more interstellar literature to read. There are no books to read anymore╮(╯▽╰)╭

As for the doomsday novel, I still feel a bit like a virgin. Sometimes I am a bit indecisive. I wait for trouble to come and then settle it. At least it does not fit in with the wasteland character in my mind.

I want to ask the author why I couldn't find the novel "Carrying StarCraft with You" you wrote

The writing of this book is still very good, whether it is the outline of the characters or the setting of the system. However, this book seems very tiring, with one conspiracy within another endlessly. Every time I do something, it is always interrupted by another conspiracy before it is completed, which makes it less enjoyable. And with so many conspiracies, the reading experience is very poor. I don't like to watch suspense. Even if I watch suspense, I can't watch it endlessly.

Although the author no longer writes, I still hope that the author will continue to write in the future. Even if one chapter is updated every month, I will still read it. Now I will keep the book in my collection. Maybe the author will really update it in the future, but maybe never.

There is a dialogue with the system AI. The AI ​​talks too much and is extremely poisonous. The book friend sincerely advises everyone to stop reading. The first chapter is extremely poisonous.

So what, isn't the powered armor a mobile prison￣￣)σ