The Heavenly Dao Saw It All Coming

Is the white jade from the same origin the new way of heaven? In this case, shouldn't he and Nan Zhi have a mutually devouring relationship? How did he become the male protagonist😶 Even if I'm on CP, it's clear that he and the little fool have a doting, stupid and cute style. Every detail makes me choose this couple.

Well, the author, I think... Although the heroine is set to be the Dao of Heaven, she feels more like a person with advanced cultivation, because in my mind, the Dao of Heaven is more like the kind that treats all living beings like ants with disdain. In your article, Da Da, I feel that the heroine's emotions are very rich (and extremely bad taste). In addition, I don't know what the cultivation system in your article is like. If the cultivation of immortality is only about strength, then I will say nothing after what I said. But if the cultivation of immortality in your article also includes the tempering of the state of mind, then I think the immortality cultivators in your article are a bit too violent. In order to build momentum, a passer-by Nascent Soul randomly used spiritual pressure to suppress passers-by until they vomited blood or even died. This made me feel like a mortal who has gained powerful power but only dominates. There is no image or state of mind that a cultivator should have. There is another problem. When the heroine accepted Dan Lexin, she robbed her, but when she wanted to accept Song An, she just asked. It is as if Dan Lexin, the fire spirit root, has better qualifications than Song An, the tenth-generation Buddhist disciple. It feels like it is a bit too much to push the plot. Since I have only read the first few chapters, these are my thoughts for the time being. If the following chapters will overturn what I said above, then I apologize in advance. In addition, I still hope that the author will work harder and pay attention to the foreshadowing and detailed description of the plot. Thank you for watching.

Xiaoba is on the verge of success, 666

After reading two pages, I feel that the protagonist does not seem to be like Tiandao. Is this a sweet story? But it seems inappropriate to write a sweet story involving Tiandao. Not to mention that Tiandao has no emotions and even if he has emotions, it is impossible to show them. For example, the ruthless emperor, the Wushi Emperor, and the Huangtian Emperor. Alas, I don't know if what I said is right. Anyway, I refuse sweet stories in this book. Tiandao, sweet pet stories are really inappropriate.

After looking at the character profiles of several male characters, I'm curious if anyone has complained about them? Height 180cm and weight 110cm, maybe he's a loser? This is too thin! ? Height 175 and weight 100-105 pounds? ? Skinny? Not only am I skinny but not muscular, I feel that this impression will be lost if the wind blows. If you wear clothes to look thin and take off your clothes, your body must be at least 140 pounds. If you are stronger, it is possible to be 160. Is this the author's personal preference?

Let's talk about the writing style first. The writing style is beautiful, the writing style is really good, and the literary style is easy to understand. Secondly, the plot is particularly interesting. As the strongest person in the world, Tiandao discovers that there is another Tiandao above Tiandao, and there are even stronger people. In order to go to the upper world, she had to find someone to take her place, so the heroine came down to look for a disciple. This article is an article about a strong woman. Regardless of whether there is CP or not, it is very enjoyable to read. It is a good and enjoyable article. Completely different from those Mary Sue heroines who are silly and sweet. The heroine in this story turns her hands into clouds and rain. She is extremely arrogant but just right. I say just right because the heroine has a fairly positive outlook on life and will not do anything that other heroines do. This article is probably about the heroine leading her apprentices to cause trouble. Everyone was angry but still couldn't stand it and could only bite the handkerchief behind their backs. Each of the heroine's apprentices is quite interesting, each with his or her own arrogant personality. Among them, Xiaobai (Bai Puyu) may be her favorite apprentice. The slight feeling of doting between the two of them is fishy no matter how you look at it. I don't care if I choose them first, you can do whatever you want with the rest. Needless to say, the character of the heroine in the article is casual, decisive and straightforward in killing. Xiaobai is soft, a little silly, and quite cute. Poor little Dan Lexin is the target of being bullied by everyone, but only the heroine dares to bully her... In fact, what makes me more curious about this article is what kind of emotional entanglements the decisive heroine will have in the end. The author who is keen on spoilers said that Xiaobai will have another personality, and I guess it will be arrogant and unruly. In the early stage, Xiaobai was a little cutie and was protected by the heroine. What would it be like in the later stage if he was stronger than the heroine and suppressed the heroine? Hehehe, I am really looking forward to it. I hope I will work hard to update it. The article is very long. You will not suffer any loss if you follow the article~

If you find a finished book, doesn't the author plan to start a new book?

As a Tiandao, Bai Puyu should be ejected from the ten-foot distance. After reading a few chapters, I just want to say, as a Tiandao, is it really okay for Bai Nanzhi to be so useless?

Can't I use a clone?😅

There are still people who read it. Good luck to the author.