This Is Not a Group at All

I just want to ask if anyone is actually reading this book. . . (´இVanஇ｀)

I have read Chapter 31 so far, and there are things I have written that really make me unhappy. I speak frankly, so if there is anything unpleasant, please don't take it personally. First of all, like the author, I have read Sanzha's Horror Park, and I have also read a lot of online game novels with similar themes, such as Brave Secondly, what I said above is not to show off or sell my qualifications, but simply to express my certain understanding and practice in writing scripts and converting them into written form. Then there are the problems I discovered when reading this novel. The first is that the main mission of the script is a little vague or has too little sense of existence. Just like the two scripts of Forest and Airport, when the characters mentioned the main mission, my first reaction was "Huh?" Main line? When did you say that? Then I went back to look for it, and then I found out that I read the book quite carefully. Although I can't read it word by word, I will make sure that I understand the meaning of each paragraph before reading the next paragraph. Moreover, I still ignore the main line when I read the book like this. This is a big problem, because readers don't know what the main task is and often cannot understand the purpose of the character's actions. Personally, I suggest that you can use more obvious symbols to mark the main line like a thriller. Secondly, each script ended very hastily, which always gave me the feeling that "the author didn't know how to write it halfway through, so he just randomly gave an ending to fool it through." This feeling was especially obvious in the script at the airport. After reading this script, I was confused, why did it end? Why were these people arrested? Is catching these people the main line? The third issue is the details. The specific manifestation is still the airport script. This script is divided into two teams, but the whole process only has the perspective of the protagonist's group. What exactly did the other team encounter? What did you do again? Even after the protagonist is dragged away without tentacles, only the perspective of the protagonist is left. How did the other people meet, and how did they catch the NPCs with bombs? Not sure. If the blank space here is to pave the way for the subsequent plot, it is understandable. If not, then this confusing script will undoubtedly become a big deduction item. I hope the author will pay attention.

As title. . . Let's see if there are any cuties who can sign in and be active. (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Sad wind. . . Let's just call it that Bane, , , , , , , , , , , , Okay. . So cute, I want to take it away 😜

Hmm~~ After reading a few chapters, I would like to ask: Are the target readers the general public, or pure game fans? I am an ordinary member of the public, but my head hurt when I watched it. There were too many technical terms, and the plot moved a little too fast and was a bit confusing. If you are a game fan, it is probably better. Everyone has studied the professional terminology. If the target is the general public, then all languages ​​must be converted into languages ​​acceptable to the public. No reader said that they went out of their way to look up information about this book in order to understand it. Readers who read online articles will not put so many shackles on themselves. After reading the first few chapters, they can't understand and give up. If it is for game fans, then this book must be a niche reading. If you want to capture the hearts of these people, you must understand the psychology of game fans. I play games mainly out of curiosity. Curious about the game plot, NPC abilities, upgrade props, adventures, gameplay, etc. But the focus of the novel is not this. The biggest focus of the game novel is how to survive in this game. The plot, abilities, props, and gameplay are all the background. The real highlight is to survive in this diverse background. So, resourcefulness, fighting, cooperation, and all kinds of intrigues are essential. How to write this part beautifully is the skill. It is very important to find out the positioning of novel readers. Once you have the positioning, you can then change your articles.

The male protagonist Pompeiro and the female protagonist Chen Tian have been identified So when will they be officially announced_(:з∠)_

I hope more people can see this little bookish girl like me! Although my writing is not very good now, I will try my best! It would be great if you can give some valuable suggestions! If you have any suggestions, you can put them forward here! Thank you everyone!

It's already late at night after reading the first few chapters, so I quickly wrote a review. +The writing style cannot speak for itself. After all, the author has no skills to show off. The vocabulary is very simple, but it is very comfortable to read. I have read online articles for ten years, and I think this is the most suitable writing style for game novels. +The protagonist's character is so awesome, I'm blown away. +The language is very real and not stiff. The protagonists in many novels nowadays can only speak normally to the system and cannot communicate with humans at all. After all the praise, it's time to flatter me. Author, please don't think I'm being harsh: -The update time is too unstable. When I look at the catalog, I don't want to follow the book. The most important data at the starting point is to follow the book! -You can take the funny route, but you have to master it well. Learn from the king's life-saving funny style, and don't have chapter names like "What should I call this chapter?" OK? -The punctuation marks are not standardized. It is recommended that you follow what the Chinese teacher teaches you, write... Don't write.... After reading this book review, it will be so standardized. Anyway, that's it. I accidentally wrote a long review. It seems that the author is still a cute girl. Come on, the first book does not ask for data but only for progress.

When will this book be available?

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