The Five Dynasties Rivers, Mountains and Winds

Chapter 2 Zhao Shijian, I'm stunned, this is a romance novel, right? You can't hold it back even if you're not good at writing, what do you want in the content? Just mention the woman in one stroke,

It's a bit incredible to be the first. I think this book is well written

(The pictures are just a make-up) (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I quite like the author's style of novels. The overall flow is smooth and the logic is tight; the political struggle is written very delicately, with many details, and is thought-provoking; Youshan's description of the war is the place where he puts the most words and ink, and it is also a highlight. I think this aspect can surpass most authors who write historical articles. (Personal feeling, don't comment if you don't like it) The article also contains a part about describing emotions, which is a bit superficial. If you can improve your writing skills in this area and better integrate it into the writing, that will be another highlight. War can be said to be the main thread of novels, one after another. If some daily life can be interspersed with it (interesting, pretentious, shining with humanity, flirting, etc., You can write it), it will look more comfortable and not too tiring. I just remembered that there are also poems. They are well chosen and match the article better. They are absolutely perfect.

It feels a bit like watching Ten Kingdoms, Thousands of Beauties back then. I'll give you the ticket. Please write quickly.

Zhao Kuangyin has his own ten brothers in the charity society, and it is not easy to get into that circle. After all, the Shi family can be regarded as a direct descendant of the Later Zhou Dynasty. It is difficult to say that Zhao Kuangyin would be trusted if he really voted for him. It's better to support the little emperor, and when the time is right, another wave of yellow robes will come to join him and give Guo Rong a few sons glory and wealth.

The next step should be to attack Qinzhou of Later Shu and Huainan of the Southern Tang Dynasty. I will share a few maps

There are a lot of little nuggets in the front of this book, can't it be revised? 1 The protagonist's mother fled alone to avoid being raped. 2. The protagonist doesn't know Chinese characters. Is it difficult to use traditional Chinese characters? Some people don't know what's normal. 3 Killing the ears is better than killing the head to record merit. Why didn't the Central Plains Dynasty do this? 4 Opening your mouth to call your lord, these five generations are really different.

Come on, come on, let's choose a heroine from historical celebrities (ps: The author has a heroine in mind anyway, and won't change it) 1. Queen Da Fu (Guo Ronglu) 2. Queen Xiao Fu (Guo Rong...) 3. Mrs. Huarui (Meng Changlu) 4. Empress of the Great Zhou Dynasty (Li Yulu) 5. Empress of the Small Zhou Dynasty (Li Yu...) 6. Xiao Zhuo (still young, can only go to Liao Kingdom to rob, Yelu Xianlu) 7. Empress Li (still young, Zhao Erlu) ... Additions welcome

I've only read a dozen chapters, but this little bit of poison 😅 1. Your officer, you stabbed him, but I thought he was a ruthless person? As a result, he went to the battlefield and was submissive. 2. To maintain order at the ferry, you don't want money when others give it. Your argument is a bit persuasive and I can accept it. The common people still stuff things to the soldiers, but I just can't understand. Damn it, in troubled times, I don't have enough to eat, and I don't want money, but I still stuff things to the soldiers. How is it possible? 3. Arrange the funeral arrangements and give the remaining money to the woman. Will she go to the battlefield to protect you from the knife or give you advice? Giving the remaining money to the brothers probably won't be enough. You can use the money to treat the brothers to a nice meal, talk about some good things, and draw some cookies. Isn't he good? That is to say, with this background, having personal soldiers, and working alone, I don't know where my head fell. 4. You save your father's lap, I understand. After that, practice writing and martial arts, and read more military books. Damn it, let me read the comments. They are complete trash. 😅

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How can I put it this way? This novel is readable and pretty good. There are just some logic issues. 1. You said you were going to taint yourself, but in the end you gave all the beauties rewarded by the emperor to your subordinates. Please note that they were rewarded by the emperor. Do you think the emperor is a fool? Will you ignore it after I reward you? The most appropriate thing to do is to keep it. If you don't want it, you can keep it as a vase. When the emperor dies, you can buy it for your subordinates, or you can keep one for yourself and give the rest to your subordinates. It's so obvious that you're trying to win people's hearts, and you've even given it to your subordinates directly. Aren't you blaspheming yourself? You are tantamount to rejecting a beautiful woman in front of the emperor, and trying to win people's hearts in front of the emperor. The emperor must be thinking, are you lying to him? 2. You almost always spend your own money to reward the army, or there is a chapter where you spend your own money to train scouts. My brother, you are too brave. The emperor is still here, how dare you pay for your own training? ? What's the difference between your military training at Yuan Datou's small station? Tell others openly that you are trying to win people's hearts and want to rebel, and do you really think that officials in ancient times were fools? ? Everyone knows that the most important thing in the army is rewards and punishments. You have directly obtained the emperor's right to rewards. How can the emperor not doubt you? 3. There were too many typos in the early stage, but I can still read it. I hope the author will make a big change. I say this because I really hope you can write it well. After all, I have been following it. I hope you can understand.

The character of Zhao Shijian is a failure. The protagonist is a teacher and a time traveler, but there is no maid who can see the situation clearly? Is the author a feminist? The protagonist in the author's novel is a complete insult to the profession of teacher. Although it is ancient times and although you have traveled through time, you are flirting with a little girl all day long. The content of the letter is completely an insult to the teacher's ethics. If it is so easy for people to misunderstand, the protagonist also feels like a bit of a gangster, which is completely compatible with the teacher. Not to mention, the teacher I know doesn't talk about emotional intelligence, but has a good understanding of literature. The protagonist in the author's novel can't even write... I just want to laugh. This book is a failure. The teacher's template is doing things like a gangster. The heroine's template IQ suppresses the protagonist, a teacher who has lived in two generations. This book is too poisonous.

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I have nothing to say about the writing. Apart from the protagonist, the other characters are also well created. The downfall is that the IQ of the protagonist does not match. The librarian is a teacher. Being a teacher now is very demanding. Many logics do not match the character. It is often repeated that the protagonist is a history teacher. It feels like mouse shit. I had forgotten it, but the author often mentioned this mouse shit. Don't you know that the gap between your teacher character and the protagonist's logical IQ is too big. In summary, the author is either a college student or a recent graduate.

He actually chose to save Zhao Kuangyin to advance the plot. I think I was not the only one disappointed and defeated.

I know why this book is not popular. As a time-traveler, my father is a reckless man. As a protagonist, I don't have to think too much. I rely on others to do everything and then I can get some credit by following. It's not that it's wrong to do this in the early stage. At least there must be a direction. Will Zhao Kuangyin win the world and follow him? Will there be a happy ending? As a time traveler, you don't even have the most basic knowledge. You rely on all kinds of things, not to mention your inventions. If you have a background and a backer, can you make money? Other than joining the army and risking death, I really don't see anything that the author does to survive for his family. This kind of book is nothing but useless and painful. He is a time traveler and explains many major events in advance. Not to mention making achievements, there is no escape route at least. The whole process is all about fighting and dying. If you can't make guns and artillery, you can't make wine, you can't distill wine, and you don't know how to get some craftsmen to tinker with some rare things, right? Spit up, poisoned to death

Why do I feel that so many book friends in front of me are so naive mentally? They are either straight men or misogynistic. That Zhao Shijian is just a little more independent-minded😓The protagonist is willing to coax her and you are not happy😓, and you also ask the author to write her to death. What did she do that is so outrageous and so violent? Are they all potential murderers? Isn't it that each of them has a criminal record in the real world? As a usually chauvinistic person, I think you guys are too much. After reading a free chapter, a bunch of people started to chirp →_→

The male protagonist looks like an indigenous person, but the female protagonist looks like someone from time travel.

The maid in the front was too vicious, so the protagonist asked her to be a licking dog, or marry her directly to the groom and let her pretend. Every time I see her, I don't want to read on.

The protagonist has health problems and has no son. Who will take risks with you? Nt. I always like to write the protagonist as infertile, and then force it to add drama when necessary.

The biggest flaw of this book is that there are too many maid scenes! ! The rest is fine! I suggest cutting off most of the maid scenes! As the language becomes more refined, it can reach the level of the Ten Kingdoms Qianjiao.

Seeing Chapter 7, it's really poisonous 1. The heroine looks like she's trying to get a girl, and the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms are trying to get a girl? Let's make some mutton; 2. The protagonist is a teacher but can't read traditional Chinese characters. Did the protagonist come to China to study? 3. In the military camp, someone actually dared to provoke the general's personal command, and the commander was the general's son. I don't know if you readers dare to provoke your boss's assistant or relative. Anyway, I don't dare.

I can watch other little poisonous characters, but I don't see the setting of teacher + librarian at all in the protagonist. What about the city where people have been born in two lives?

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Poisoned to death, the queen is being licked by thousands of beauties from the Ten Kingdoms. You lick a maid, and they don't appreciate it. Isn't it disgusting?

I gave up after reading dozens of chapters. The protagonist doesn't practice martial arts well and learn to fight with his father. He thinks about getting into the camp every day and is opportunistic.

Traveling through time and not being an emperor? As a licking dog? After reading the chapters and comments, I'm not in the mood to follow.

Does anyone have any recommendations for novels about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms? 😂

I just entered the battlefield earlier, and the several battles were very difficult. The male protagonist himself has little strength. He also emphasized many times that the emperor is a ruthless man, so be careful about the emperor. , But it turns out that when he came back, his father had too much military power and was used as a hostage for the emperor and an official for the male protagonist. He was so proud of himself that he drank and caused trouble and got into trouble. He still had to rely on a little girl to remind him that no matter how knowledgeable she was, she could not have a modern teacher with deep knowledge. The main male protagonist knew what he was good at. If he didn't hurry up and practice kung fu and equestrian skills, he would drink and brag every day. Or maybe he really wants to be a bastard.

I had sex for free several times when I was in school, hahaha. I really like this book. It does have a lot of shortcomings, but the flaws outweigh the advantages.