Infinite Martial Arts Legend

Looking at it, I feel like I have no logical thinking. Especially the character of the protagonist, who is reborn at the age of 30. Isn't he funny? The author should shape the protagonist's character well. If the protagonist's character is stable, many poisonous points in your novel will disappear.

In fact, we can write about the Covering the Sky, the Immortal Realm, the Swallowing Starry Sky, and the Perfect World. After all, the cultivation systems of these worlds are relatively close to those of this book.

How should I put it, unless it is urban type now. If other types of points are directly added to winning or losing or martial arts level, it is really hard to watch and has no sense of substitution.

Um, I thought it was Gaowu. I didn't expect it to be infinite

I hope the author can continue writing it well. I feel that the foundation of this book is still good, and the content of the copy should be lengthened, and then the real time should be refined a little. Finally, the early stage of upgrading can be faster, but I hope it can be slower in the mid-term, otherwise you will not be able to succeed unless you get a fantasy level in the later stage. . . .

The recommendation votes will all be yours from now on. I have been reading novels for several years, but I have not voted for many recommendations. I am just too lazy to vote. Your first story is not pretentious or slap in the face. I have not seen the movie, and the writing is not good, but I feel good about it.

You can tell me about the world the protagonist wants to go to, what he wants to do, and some interesting ideas. If you can use them, I will definitely write them in the book.

The novels such as "Dou Po Zhe Tian" are just rubbish short stories, but you still write about him as if he were a masterpiece and traveled through time. You can only imagine how high the author's aesthetic level is. A person who can't even tell whether his clothes are good-looking or ugly, do you expect him to dress well?

Chapter ten made me realize the reality that the author is a loser...

Standing at thirty, the result is the same as a child

The protagonist should not always pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. This kind of plot has long been outdated. I feel that this kind of plot is meaningless. This kind of mentality is not the mentality that a strong person should have. The protagonist keeps pretending to be a pig and eats the tiger and then defeats people who are weaker than him. What's the point of pretending like this? A strong person should rise to the challenge and challenge those who are stronger than him. Are those who bully the weak considered strong? If he has this kind of mentality without a system, he will be a scumbag and will never become a strong person. Although the protagonist is very powerful, he is really a weakling mentally.

Don't worry about trolls, because you will be trolled no matter what you write. We don't criticize people when reading the first edition. If it doesn't look good, we will delete it.

Can I open a harem? Looking for a big harem

A book that is not poisonous is considered a good book in my opinion

I feel like the beginning was not rigorous enough! In the first three chapters, I just traveled through time and didn't understand the background, so I fought with people, which is a bit inconsistent.

After watching the beginning, some people kept saying that the protagonist traveled through time when he was thirty years old, and then he lost his mind. You suddenly arrive in a strange world, you can adapt to it instantly, and you will not be irritable inside, and then it will be better every second.

Actually, my sister and my wife are the ultimate winners. Look, the protagonist is definitely a thug, nanny, and money-giving boy all in one.

Shouldn't Liu Shigang be caught and asked for this information?

The cover is nice. I just wanted to ask if it could be a little bigger.

A good book should read well. The more you read, the better it will be.

What about the body of black iron? Why not strengthen it?

I can't see it without the memory, and it's really annoying to have the system. Systems are everywhere now

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