Zhi Shen's Leisurely Daily Life

Why is a book in which the protagonist uses his body to act recklessly from beginning to end called a book with an obvious legal system? So relaxing?

It's okay to recommend girls, but how many chapters have you written? There is no need to reiterate how beautiful the girl is, it's embarrassing. The big dragon next door also recommends girls when he is dead, but it is very comfortable to watch. Your princess line is well written. The leader in the back is too redundant. The main line is farming and hegemony, so write more, and the leisurely daily life should give a more leisurely feeling. It is really embarrassing for you to have big things going on and have a lust at the same time. Everyone is also optimistic about this book and wrote a long book review. If you ask me to take a bath, kill the guarding elf and escape, it will be a miracle. A beautiful woman who licked her ass. There is still a big hole left unfilled by the orcs in 40 years. How many thousands of words do you plan to start building the territory and recruiting soldiers and horses to fight?

Now there is a sapling above the head. Will there be a forest above the head in the future?

Finally back to daily writing. I have always liked the daily style of anime that I used to be a demon. Although there is no genuine version, I will re-order it when I get the scholarship this year!

After reading more than 20 chapters, the protagonist is too girly. In the previous article, it was written that the protagonist has experienced war and killed many people. Is this kind of indecisive character baptized by going through war and killing people? Are you sure the protagonist is not a deserter?

In the first few chapters, I basically couldn't bear it anymore, and I couldn't bear to complain. What I saw in the first few chapters was not a normal mentality. What I saw was the protagonist's sincere regret. After all you said so much, whether you had plans and actions, you just said it verbally. After all, everyone can talk about it. I also saw the protagonist's unrepentant depravity. When things happened, he didn't want to make progress but wanted to stick to the rules. Even if he had to limit the protagonist's development route, this form seemed poisonous to me. You fed me a mouthful of shit at the beginning and you are still feeding me a mouthful. The protagonist's portrayal was completely different from that of a time traveler. First, he said that he could win only by living, and then during the war. Freeing slaves in time, hell love at first sight is completely impossible. Even if you are lazy, the war will not make the protagonist forget what he is. Not to mention that he is a time traveler with advanced ideas, and you really think that a person who lives among normal people and has no Internet and has lived a boring life for more than ten or twenty years will look like this. He also used his authority to release the slave. It is impossible for a slave to be unsupervised. If you release a slave at a port carrying goods, she can escape if you release her. During the human port war, orcs appeared, and you did not describe the series of help you gave to the orcs. In other words, you just released her. An orc with an obvious slave body. What would ordinary people do when they find an orc with a slave body? When the ship escorting the slave docks, they will directly call the guards and arrest her on the spot. The plot should be more rigorous. The subject matter itself is good, but don't let those big mistakes that seem like you can survive if you endure it, ruin it.

The author has changed his vest and started a new book. Even the eunuch, please say something.

The half-elves are going to kill the pig's trotters, and the pig's trotters are going to surrender and negotiate. Sorry, I can't accept it. If you don't have the ability, forget it. If you have the ability, no matter what your reasons are, if you want to kill me, I will definitely kill you first. The pig's feet are a bit mentally retarded

Author, you should either work faster and update more, or just cut it off. If you leave it here, it will not only be uncomfortable for you, but it will also be uncomfortable for me to follow up.

Damn, I can't stand the last few chapters anymore.

After reading five chapters, I didn't see the daily style I imagined.

Emmmm... After reading more than a hundred chapters in one go, I realized that this book is actually a beast! ! ! ! I'm afraid I won't be able to survive

I didn't see Leisure... I only saw the protagonist's brain-deadness, cheap consumption of daddy's connections, not recognizing his own position, sympathizing with non-humans who deceived his comrades... After regaining a new life, his stance was ambiguous again... First of all, he was passive and sabotaged and could use the time traveler to suffer multiple blows.

Harems are well received. The starting point is either natural eunuchs or promiscuity. There are too few serious harems.

It's well written. Why don't you update it?

How much did the author spend😅

What have you written recently? Was the author stimulated by the couple? All kinds of deceit and abduction to chase women? I also wrote so many chapters. I was doing well in the beginning, but as soon as I got the territory, I immediately turned into a stallion. I also like to watch harems, but you are not starting a harem, it is just a sperm in your head. You are taking in girls just to take in girls. Compared with Angel, I feel like you are not the same author. Has anyone changed?

Halfway through... I found out that it hasn't been updated in two years.

Brother, she's here to kill you because of family matters, and you still think about having sex with her. You're just being stupid.