Ultra World Legend

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

I suggest changing it back to Fengyuan. After all, in terms of classics and recognition, this translation is more suitable.

Come on, author, I believe you will get better and better!

Since the end of Ultraman Senki, it's rare to see serious Ultraman fan fiction. It's really good.

I suggest changing it back to Fengyuan. After all, in terms of classics and recognition, this translation is more suitable.

Since "Repard" has been suspended for a long time, "In the Ultra Era" has been hurriedly completed, and the relatively promising "Messiah", "Jace" and "Mongolian Hepheus" have been discontinued. It can be said that the Orvin fans that I think are worth watching have been almost wiped out. Only "X in Another World" has been updated intermittently, and "Orb's Journey" is being updated continuously. Up to now, this "Ultra World" has made my eyes shine. It has an original Ultraman, which is neatly integrated. The plot of the initial growth and training is also well arranged, and the appearance of the form does not have a sudden blowout. For newcomers, it is already very good. But the test for Owen has just begun. After entering the original work, whether he can reasonably arrange the protagonist's role without being led by the original plot, and insert the original plot in a reasonable place, and appropriately change the original story line, without making the original party feel completely different, and will not feel that following the original work is a fake plot and copying the script. These bits and pieces all depend on the author's writing skills. I hope this work can become a better Owen fanfic. Finally, I recommend that the author can read and refer to the best Owen fan "Reppard" in my opinion. Maybe it can bring you some suggestions. For the protagonist's new power, you can consider the combination of sublimator/ultra capsule or whirling flash/water crystal. Although the plots of the two works are average, the new transformation and power-borrowing settings are still very interesting. Moreover, I hope the author will remember that "invincibility equals meaninglessness", and it is recommended to set the potential of the protagonist Naga to be comparable to the mysterious Four Olympians. It would be meaningless if the protagonist really grew up to surpass King Ou or Noah and defeat invincible opponents in the world. For example, Zero's radiant form, if he activates his radiant form every time he encounters an enemy, there will be no need to fight, and there is no point in writing about it. And Belial, who can single-handedly challenge the Kingdom of Light, has been restricted by the authorities again and again, gained new powers again and again, and was defeated again. The key is that only in this way can there be something to write. I hope the author will consider it carefully.

Since the author has not released any character setting cards for a long time, due to my obsessive-compulsive disorder as a setting party and my affirmation and support for the author's work, I recorded some settings of Naga while reading. Of course it's quite rough. My ideal setting card template is from "Reppard". If the author feels that the content I set is helpful to the creation, that would be great. Character Card Naga (to the end of the real world chapter) Ultraman Naga Human body: Feng Yexin Age: 16 years old Identity: Chunfeng High School student, EUPO Flying Eagle team member Transformer: Purple Star Wing Bracelet (Star Wing Bracelet) Human Body Abilities: Transformation of thoughts, Ultra perception, high-speed movement, Ultra telekinesis, telepathy/Ultra thoughts, light blade cutting, teleportation mask, time and space tunnel, healing ability Transformation abilities: normal form, super speed miracle, strong corona, hope shines Fighting skills: Ultra punch, Ultra kick, Ultra hand knife, Ultra knee kick, Ultra arm Power, Ultra Kick, High Speed Movement, Ultra Whip Kick, Afterimage Sprint, Afterimage Tactics, Strong Corona Attack, Burning Kick, Energy Punch, Ultra Spin Kick Light Skills: Dinactum Beam, Bow Beam, Arc Beam, Light Blade Cutting, Lightsaber Swift Slash, Blazing Powder Beam Defense Skills: Ultra Barrier Special skills: telepathy, power of time and space, teleportation Weapons and equipment: Bracelet·Star Wing Gun/Star Wing Dagger/Star Wing Axe, Ark·Wings of Transcendence PS: The template of the human body in my mind is Hong Kai, the strongest human body in history. In the human body state, he fights the aliens with his bare hands. His palms can emit light bombs, he can fly, and he can even move instantaneously. It is perfect. The third place is Leo's human body Fengyuan (Young), the fourth is the lonely traveler Asuka Shin (Super Galaxy), and then there is Taro's human body Higashi Kotaro and Seven's human body Morohoshidan (Young). The other human bodies are simply vulnerable, and they don't even have any superpowers without transforming. If you include the human body Yuan Xiaoxin, the protagonist in the fine fan "Leppard", he should be second only to Hong Kai.

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This book made me understand that being an orphan is a beautiful thing.

After reading the first four chapters, I couldn't help but post here. What you wrote, author, is really too middle-of-the-road. I wonder if you will want to delete it after reading this book you wrote?

I feel that the Leo chapter in Ultraman Fighting Evolution is particularly well written, and there are some parts in that novel that are particularly touching.

Station B finally bought the copyright of Ultraman. I'm going to read Little Dreams again. My White Moonlight www 🌹🌹🌹

He deserves death for insulting women What did he say He said that men and women are equal

Why ⊙ω⊙ can't I bring in this protagonist! . . . . It always feels weird. . . . .

The author's writing style is not good and needs to be improved.

I like no heroine (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I like no CP (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Great support for the author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The first chapter was dismissed, I felt like it was written by a primary school student. . . The protagonist is still the plaster man. . . Very poor sense of immersion

Absolute darkness

Let me recommend some Owen (Would it be weird to recommend Owen in Owen) No one can find anything good