Ultraman: I Lit up the Kingdom of Light

My day! It's the fault of "Ultra Any Key". Can this hook be restored by itself? It needs to be dropped by killing monsters. It is one-time use and will be gone after use. Oh dear, which Ultraman's energy cannot be restored.

This time, we should be more rigorous in setting the combat power of the defense force. The equipment setting of GUTS in the Legend of Bendiga is not very rigorous. I remember that the most basic extreme Mach speed of Feiyan No. 1 Has been weakened. The TPC organization has gone from being unarmed to temporarily modified to have the ability to kill ordinary wild monsters. The extremely powerful Texas cannon, the Drak cannon with the Max power system will be developed within three years (the story of Tiga TV is set to three years), the exj that surpasses the power of the second machine, don't show up again with this kind of plot, even Melba can't handle it, in the TV ending, exj defeated Zoga.

Alas, Tiga vomited just at the beginning.

I really can't make up for Tiga's future. The more I write in the later part of the novel, the more and more things are wrong. The teacher said that I basically spent money on the previous part about Tiga. But the advantage is that I really like the description of Brother Cheng and Maya. I think. Well, for those who have never been in love, my fantasy about love is this kind of light beauty. But regarding the world of Tiga, you have dug too many holes. There are many conspiracy theories or similar things, which makes me feel very tired. What can I hope you can say? I would like to give you a small suggestion to make the writing a little more relaxed and entertaining. For fans, one or two million words is enough. If you write too much, you have to broaden the world, but I think this is not good for fans.

To be honest, it made me feel sick to my stomach when I watched it. It was crazy about adding strength to the villain, and the decent side was so weak. Moreover, the protagonist had a lot of tricks, and if it hadn't been for the protagonist, he would have died long ago. I've read Ultraman in the past. Because there are four mysterious secrets, everyone knows that the side of justice will never fail. In this book, the four mysterious secrets don't even know where to lay their bodies. It's too dark and sad. It feels better to feel a little more comfortable and not to be immersed in your own creation all the time.

Why don't you let us know in the group when you open a new book?

Is it interesting to rewrite the plot from the perspective of a broken monster? It's disgusting to watch, it has no effect on the plot at all, and it has no impact at all if you delete it. Why do you keep putting things in there?

Too many words that don't make sense.

Oh my gosh, I just discovered this book today. I used to read The Legend of Tiga

After arriving in the world of Gaia, I no longer have the desire to continue reading.

After watching The Legend of Tiga, I noticed that you seem to be getting more and more lazy. The first three chapters are not as attractive as Tiga.

Are small monsters really invincible to humans? Ultra Flying Kick can kill the little monster instantly with only seven or eight tons of force. It's impossible for human mechanical weapons to lack such destructive power.

The background is a bit disappointing.

Has Bendika decided to have it cut off?

It feels like these worlds are too miserable. Except for the Kingdom of Light, are there no Ultraman in other places? I don't see any support either.

It's very strange in the book club circle nowadays. When writing an Ultraman fanfic, you need to have a reason for the protagonist to do good things and do good deeds? Ultraman, even Xiaonai, who is called the darkest, turns into Ultraman and the reason for fighting is to protect. I am really speechless.

It was easy to persuade him to quit at the beginning. Before joining the team, the protagonist relied on heavy firepower and desperate efforts to deal with the dark monsters. The protagonist also complained about cutting down the giant of light to strengthen the defense team. During the Agouti attack, no one except the protagonist and the victory team fought back. They were basically running and waiting for the protagonist to save them. When surrounded by lightning, I went straight to the tram problem and I went straight to the old man on the subway. What kind of diode is this? The elite team stepped out to organize external rescue, and the rest of them stayed behind to defend, right? The following method is also the same. The protagonist rushes to the nest alone to attract the rats, and the others pull the wounded away. What about the problem of random mine siege?

I hope there will be a happy ending after accepting Camilla

Destroying the Kingdom of Light and leaving no one alive is a bit ridiculous. You must know that there are many treasures, Ultra Keys, Ultra Bells, and those powerful black technologies. If you can't catch them, you can run away. Zero can take them with you, and there is also the King of O. It is almost impossible to kill the King of O. Even if there are many people, there is no problem for the King of O to leave. Is there no one to help Ultraman's people? This kind of war cannot be hidden

It's quite good-looking, I came here from passing through Marvel's Knights. Whether it is Ultraman or Kamen Rider, such fan fiction authors are often limited by the fact that the subject matter itself cannot withstand scrutiny and the author's mental age is not mature enough. As a result, the writing style of second-generation novels is often childish and the world view is full of loopholes. For example, Ultraman's own world view cannot withstand scrutiny, but derivative works such as New Ultraman are often more mature and realistic. The author of this book is different from the other two creators. The world he creates is often more real and has fewer loopholes, so readers who read his works can truly believe that they can be substituted into this worldview.

By the way, the beginning of Tiga was badly written, so why not start from the super ancient times. Write how to survive in the hands of the dark giant Tiga, write about the crisis of destruction encountered by the giant of light, witness Tiga become the giant of light, and watch him leave the earth. The protagonist gained the power to protect himself in the super ancient times, and conveniently laid down a bond as a foreshadowing of his future journey to the Tiga TV timeline. I still want to watch the beginning of Warrior's Summit. I am almost tired of watching various TV plots. I hope it can be a little new.

However, I will still express my opinions on this book. The early stage was too stressful, and the protagonist felt that these things were not done well. Transformation also requires absorbing light energy. It is outrageous that humans can still have time to fight for power. Because the doctor's research and development speed simply couldn't keep up with the evolution speed of the monsters, the two major organizations were able to join forces to build a large Ultra Mecha, and after a year, the monsters could almost reach dozens of meters. Under such circumstances, can humans not be pessimistic? Can we not do everything we can to develop armaments? Even if we resort to militarism, we still need to develop science and technology. But I actually don't feel the tension on the human side. Although the atmosphere created is very tense, humans themselves are still very relaxed. Even if the earth is likely to be destroyed in a year, humans can still fight with each other. Furthermore, Ultraman's transformation requires light energy, which seems really poisonous. To fight a monster, you need to calculate whether it is cost-effective. Moreover, the design of the upgrade system is relatively naive and does not look exciting enough. Generally speaking, the early writing was good but not good enough, but among Ultra fans, it is already the best. It would be better if the refreshing feeling can be designed well. In the early stage, it was obvious that I wanted to write about the mobile Ultraman, but the feeling was not written out, which made it very uncomfortable to watch.

Xingsha can actually cut books? How is this possible

I recalled why I had discovered this place before but didn't update it. Based on the chapters I've read so far, human beings are pure lambs waiting to be slaughtered. Is there any time-traveling brother who would be kind enough to tell me if I have always been a mecha? Is the physical object hanging like a fishing lure?

Is it purely Ultraman fighting monsters? Try using a different way of writing.

The protagonist of this book is Zero?

No wonder he is so familiar. As I continued to look, it turned out to be your boy.

All ordered, support the author,,,

The length of each chapter is a little shorter. Is it because of the lack of rhetoric? 🙂

Is there a heroine? If there isn't one now, will there be one later?