Liaozhai World Travel Notes

After reading a few chapters, it felt as dry as running water and I couldn't stand it anymore.

I traveled through time, knowing that the French warrior was a big monster, but I couldn't defeat him yet I still rushed over to it. I was really using the protagonist's law of immortality indiscriminately. Originally, when I went to fight the Taoist priest to obtain the skills, I said it was okay to forcefully lower my IQ for the sake of the skills. Every time I use this, it really sucks. Why didn't the author write that the protagonist went to Lanruo Temple to fuck the tree demon and the old Black Mountain demon as soon as he could run? You play with women all day long, and you act vulgar when you meet them, yet you are actually liked by women. Is it because all the women in your family like this kind of person that you think like this?

It can be seen that the author is writing the book carefully, and the background and character introductions are very complete, but you have to know the truth of going too far, and just point out the most important points. Nowadays, most readers are here to read the main plot, and the rest is very well written. The author continues to work hard and will order all the books after it is released.

It is recommended that the author trim the previous narrative story. It is too wordy, smelly and long, deviates from the main plot, seriously affects the sense of reading, and dissuades many readers. The subsequent writing is good, but people left without insisting on reading. So this book got a bad grade.

Strangely, all the reviews I wrote earlier are missing.

When I saw Ye Zhiqiu, I remembered Jacky Cheung's despicable face and how he was almost spoiled by his brother at Zhengqi Villa. The number one scholar who was arrested must be Zhuge Wolong who let his brother go from prison. The Fu sisters are the perfect match for Wang Zuxian and Li Jiaxin.

Ah, here, go.

The self-righteous bitch and foul mouth really disgust me. What a good fantasy novel is now.

The early part of this novel is relatively good, but in the fighting scenes, either he is too weak to kill decisively, or he doesn't know how to use his own Taoism and learns too little Taoism, and his martial arts skills are too poor.

No matter what, it is very rare to be able to write about Liaozhai. You must support it, persevere, and don't give up!

Why don't you write it? It's very good. I guess I'll sign the contract soon.

I don't know why so many authors think that losers in real life will be reincarnated and become social elites after time travel!

Nowadays, many novels are good when the heroine has not appeared. As soon as the heroine is written, it will become unreadable. If you don't know how to describe the heroine, don't add the heroine. If you insist on adding a heroine by force, why are you disgusting readers?

The previous chapters were all very good, but I couldn't stand it when I saw the concubine young lady who was a member of the imperial family.… Hey… I quite like this kind of novel that looks like a fairy tale… But it's a pity that it doesn't suit my taste…

What the hell are you doing here with broken chapters? Is this the original version?