Everyone Is Down

It turns out that the protagonist's plug-in is Mr. Ke's candied haws skewers.

He is not a cute boy, he is so angry┻━┻╰(‵□′)╯┻━┻

An Orion who went to private school for a few days in a feudal society knows about a thousand Chinese characters, even ancient Chinese, and can read simplified Chinese characters and use a computer to understand the world in a few days. He also knows how to watch movies, go to Internet cafes, sell stolen goods, buy guns, and find small hotels that don't require ID cards... What the hell, I have studied English for so many years and read an English novel. I have been raised in China for twenty years and I still don't know how to buy a gun. Why is the seventeen-year-old protagonist so stupid? Speaking of the author, why did you choose the theme of anti-travel... First, there is no sense of substitution, and second, it is difficult to explain that a person at the bottom of feudal society who works every day, has little energy to think, has little time to go out to see the world, and cannot receive much information from the outside world, is so smart that we feel that our brains may not have begun to develop. This feeling is really too awkward. I can't accept it. Say goodbye.

To be honest, author, I didn't read the part about the curse. The reason is very simple. The logic of the protagonist's curse does not make sense. If the world is opened by accident, I would not be surprised to open any world. But when the protagonist can make rational choices, there is not enough reason to open the world of Grudge. When there is a zombie world, there is no need to open a repetitive world, especially the plot of this world is in Japan. The protagonist has a language barrier. At the same time, the world view of the zombie Taoist world is close to that of the protagonist, and it is very likely that there will be a clear inheritance. The Grudge World only shows the ghosts of Kayako's family alone. It neither clearly points out the method of getting rid of the ghosts, nor does it have more information to show that there may be a deeper power system in this world. Just going based on the protagonist's imagination is an unconvincing reason. Perhaps the author's original intention was to use the ghosts in The Grudge to make the protagonist become a formless ghost, so he specially arranged this world, but please don't forget that the protagonist is a normal and rational person who cannot be predicted at the moment. He does not have a God's perspective, so he cannot know that swallowing the ghosts in the curse will be of great benefit to him. With the cautious character of the protagonist, he will not casually enter a world with an unknown future. If you are looking for a way to get rid of ghosts, judging from the situation at that time, it is more likely that the zombie Taoist priest has a way to get rid of ghosts, rather than a strange world. Of course, if the author writes it clearly in advance, the protagonist chooses to enter the cursed world in order to devour ghosts, and the Ghost Map records the method of cultivating ghosts. That's certainly logical. But the author didn't write it. Perhaps I missed some information because I didn't read the Grudge chapter. Everyone is welcome to slap me in the face. But please have a peaceful discussion.

It looks like it's getting better. . . . Then it collapsed! It ended inexplicably within one chapter!

She's so cute, she's so funny, she's so charming, who doesn't love the 17-year-old white stockings JK Shoujiang?

An ancient native from another world traveled to modern times, and within a few days he could operate a computer, read and read 🙂🙂🙂Goodbye

There are many ups and downs in life, so I hope the author can maintain a good attitude and not be too pessimistic.

Does anyone come from the last book like me? Raise a paw

Comments: The writing is not good, it is smooth but can't find the key points. The use of Goldfinger is very silly. The earth, the movie world, and the main world are so stupid that I can't distinguish the priorities. The author should think about it carefully and it is not too late to remedy the situation.

The author's layout is too small. There are so many scenes for a little zombie. Ghosts are originally mysterious things, but they have to be mixed with physical settings. What do you think? And I'm always confused, why don't you think about it yourself, the update is so slow. A large part of the reason why the world-famous Eagle is so popular now is because there are so many updates. And the author also said that he would quit his job and write novels full-time. This is doubly irresponsible to your family and yourself. In my opinion, the so-called mental state problem is just two words: pretentious. Only when a young man is ill will he think of abandoning a stable life.                                                                                                                                                                , I advise you to go out for a walk more often when you're not out and coding, and don't feel too gloomy. There are only two words between the lines in your words, depression. To put it bluntly, if you don't have Haizi's talent, it is Haizi's fate. A little thought, if you have any comments, feel free to comment

I can't complain, but a semi-illiterate person from ancient times traveled to modern times and actually can understand simplified Chinese characters and can use a computer without any problems, let alone cook with a gas stove.

Even if an ancient person who could read only a thousand characters could recognize the same characters as simplified Chinese, how many days would it take for him to fully accept modern civilization? Just try to figure it out by yourself, that's nonsense...

Personally, I feel that there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style. Even if it is not as good as the master's 90-100 points, it is still at least 80 points or above. I feel that what the author lacks most is his own characteristics. Like the system flow of Get Out, the strongest thing is the writing style and refreshing feeling. The characterization and supporting roles are all worth learning in episodes and chapters. A good chapter can make people want to read it in one breath. Even if the aesthetic fatigue caused by online articles can be selectively read through the episodes. It is a very suitable object for the author to learn from. As for "The Diving Squid" and "The Lord of Mysteries", it relies on its long-term accumulated readership to show off a scary gimmick and write it in such a long and disgusting way. I feel that that kind of writing requires strong logic, characterization and writing style, and most importantly, a super strong readership... I hope the author will make some episodes to strengthen it and speed up the pace. As for the boss who wants to write a super long novel, he can write a trilogy of one million words like several parts, which is almost considered a super long novel. After all, there are too few books with more than 10 million words!

I feel like once the Golden Finger was introduced, there was not much to see. Behind the scenes, a group of tall people also showed up with a weapon spirit. The weapon spirit also has an IQ. It's a very good book, but I feel like it's going to be a waste.

I feel like it was amazing before it was put on the shelves, but it was very routine after it was put on the shelves.

The latest chapter explains that Goldfinger is really trying to persuade you to quit, which is very embarrassing to watch.

The floor is so low, no one should be able to see you eating phlegm and feces quietly 😏

To be honest, the ghost written by the author is quite strange. In my impression, ghost is something that cannot be captured. It is invisible. Killing depends on erasing consciousness or manipulating certain rules. Like some people in Japan, they directly stuff you into the toilet or into the wall. What the author wrote seems to be to pull out the person's consciousness and still wear something on the body. But it seems that the author wants to change the method this time? After all, the protagonist is killed, and other aspects are indeed a bit baffling. For example, some book friends said that they went to the Grudge, for example, to the zombie world, and the protagonists in these two worlds have been training for so long just to practice fighting skills. In fact, it is quite important, but the author wants to lay a good foundation for the protagonist. It is not necessary. It is good to suffer losses, and it looks more interesting. If you practice Qigong, Dacheng's Qigong is also very powerful when added to the physical body. First, learn a method to protect yourself. After reaching a high place, the protagonist feels that he has found an imbalance. The skills of ghost cultivators are still quite weird, and some evil ways cannot be put on the table. Even if the protagonist is not dead this time, he will have to change in a short time, and what about those messy ghosts? I haven't followed the author every day since he wrote about the zombie world. After all, in my opinion, the author did not create the protagonist well, and the resources of the modern world are basically useless. The zombies only practice boxing, and the world is not developed. It is a pity, the world is so big! It's really not good to give you a world that is played like this. The writing is a bit far-sighted and wise. The modern world has opened the door to a new world for him, so don't go in! After all, he has broadened his horizons, and it is impossible for his vision to be so narrow. It is understandable that the author wants to change to a world that others do not write about, but according to the author's writing style, it is okay to write what others have written. After all, he does not follow the plot all the time, which avoids poisonous points. I hope the author will think carefully about this volume! It doesn't mean that you can broaden your horizons when you go to the modern world, and the path of the protagonist is also clear. Fighting and killing are not very popular now. There are so many worlds. It is intoxicating to practice boxing instead of seeking knowledge and enrich yourself. It is more interesting to find a system that can use knowledge to create and transform. If The protagonist enters a Western world and learns from a mage. Later, he can extract the origin of the world and create his own world, or he can enter the Eastern world to learn Qigong and improve on the basis of Qigong. After all, playing with energy is the right way. I am tired of seeing it all the time. You say that the physical body is powerful, what else can you write in a book? Besides fighting and killing, is there anything else? There is a lot written about energy both horizontally and in depth. Transforming creatures, creating your own magic weapons, exploring the universe or alien planes, cultivating the physical body is very difficult, and the same goes for cultivating the gods. I will talk about this later. After all, it is quite high-end. Okay, that's all. If the author thinks it is useful, just treat it as a blind comparison...