The Courier in the World of Movies

This plot has absolutely nothing to do with delivery services; it's like they're forcing delivery onto the story. Couldn't they use a different system?

The first world is truly toxic. Was it really necessary to go to such lengths to make Steve the captain? I remember there were two vials of the serum in the original story. Couldn't you have asked to share one with Steve? Or could you have given the doctor a heads-up beforehand to hide the other one and give it to Steve after you'd made a significant contribution?

A "Ugh! Who sent me this package?" "Open it and you'll see." "Just a note? What's written on it?" "Please open your phone. Who wrote this? Is it a prank?" "What? I... I... I actually made it to the Three Rivers!" B "Ding! Host mission complete. Acquired: (A truckload of German blades)." "The system is still the same; we can make quite a bit of money selling this truck." C "

I've been here three times, but I couldn't stand watching it any of the time, especially the point of that bio-battery? To control the protagonist? Or something else!

Haha, this is my first tip for you. It's not much, but I hope you'll continue writing the book.

I really like it. Keep up the good work! Although it's already midway through and a bit late, if you want to write science fiction in the future, I can give you some ideas. Here's a strong dose of witty banter. Problems and ideas: 1. Why a courier company and not other services? This is something worth exploring in depth; there are many possible directions. A.

The book's flaw: Perhaps the author intentionally had the protagonist disrupt the original plot to create a story different from the original. However, this deliberate approach is too contrived, making it particularly problematic. For example, in the Captain America universe, someone familiar with the plot should simply wait for Captain America to receive the serum and then hand him the shield to…

I haven't read the book yet, but the synopsis says it's mainly science fiction. I'd like to ask the author how many of the books you listed are science fiction? Do you have some misunderstanding about science fiction?

The first chapter is already poisonous! The plot feels so contrived! Why would you need to carry packages when there are androids? The plot unfolds inexplicably.

I gave up after reading about ten chapters; it was just constant beatings and torture. People read transmigration/system novels for the thrill, not for the abuse.