
Konoha's Random Teacher
木叶之随机老师
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 165k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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77Chapters
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A book without chapter names is soulless, and just writing a few words is fine.
I don't know why, but I can't read the novel chapters without chapter names.
In the original work, Sasuke only learned how to climb trees and was able to kill 4 water clones of Zabuza at the same time. Unexpectedly, he learned to climb trees in advance and also learned to tread water. Naruto plus the protagonist could not defeat even one water clone. He still had to use the method in the original work. I am speechless and became weaker than before after having the protagonist.
Come on, good looking, first place.
Ah! And Will of Fire... Where are the orphanage companions! What about the people who take care of the protagonist at the orphanage? As soon as I was told to live with Naruto, I immediately agreed! And said he would take care of Naruto? Ha? A 5-year-old kid taking care of others? And it's so obvious...!
After reading the first ten chapters, I noticed something wrong. There is no problem with change, but since we have traveled through time, it cannot remain the same. But it seems that I don't even write about the process, but just go through it all in one stroke. It's too light to write it this way. And all the characters feel very one-sided and fake. Lack of realism. I hope that some details can be properly described, otherwise it will be difficult to have a sense of reality. In fact, much of the description is written in passing. For example, some of the interactions with Ino and Naruto, these can obviously be described in more detail, but why are they just mentioned in one sentence. To be honest, I feel like the author wrote the outline directly.
This book is good. This is even more uncomfortable~