The Retired Life of the Demon Cult Leader

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The plot will soon reach its climax at the Lantern Festival banquet on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month, so I would like to post this as a warm-up. First of all, as a harem novel (not), Mei Qianxiao has many flesh-and-blood female characters around her. Among them, some people are receiving lunch, and some are real heroines. The flowers are gradually charming, but it is not clear. In my opinion, there are a total of five candidates who have the ability to hit the position of the heroine. They are: Lin Xiyu, Yuchili (Queen of Loulan), Liu Qingqing, Li Mengyao, and Li Changrong (Yixue). Ranked in order. Unfortunately, the development of the plot is not based on subjective will. The sporadic words in the previous article have already pointed out the general direction of the follow-up. Just sort out the foreshadowing in the previous article, and you are not far from the truth. Lin Xiyu: A golden boy and a beautiful girl, destined but not destined. So far, the biggest conflict and contradiction in the book is this pair of lovers, and the tension of the plot is also vividly reflected here. This is a relationship that is disliked and opposed by everyone, including the two parties involved. Although the book uses the most pen and ink and the most beautiful words to describe Lin Xiyu, it is a pity that even the halo of the protagonist sometimes fails. "Haha, look at his peach-blossom eyes that attract bees and butterflies... His peach blossoms are still there! But the little girl is like a phoenix entering a dragon's nest. I'm afraid this boy is all in vain..." - Chapter 383 "Stubborn Girl, Arrogant Boy" The author has almost sentenced Lin Xiyu to death through the fortune teller. The image and positioning of Lin Xiyu in this book are roughly similar to the junior sister Yue Lingshan in Swordsman and the junior sister Qi Fang in Liancheng Jue. However, there is no perfect path, and there is still room for change, and that is Lin Xiyu's second uncle Lin Qiye. In general, the tone of Meilin and Meilin is tragedy, which is in sharp contrast with the funny language that can be seen everywhere in the book. Yuchili: In the paradise-like Western Region, there is such a paradise-like queen. Yuchili's love for Lord Demon Boy is the purest and most selfless. But it is a pity that Mei Qianxiao's main scope of activities is still the Central Plains. It is difficult for the queen of the Western Regions to wait for Mei Qianxiao in the Central Plains. Compared with the tragic Mei Lin duo, the story between Mei Qianxiao and Yu Chili was very smooth, which also diluted the sad tone of Lin Xiyuxian. Undoubtedly, Mei Qianxiao is lucky because he can return to the Western Regions to find her at any time; while Yuchili is unfortunate because he doesn't know when he can return to the Western Regions to find her. Liu Qingqing: It's really hard to analyze Liu Qingqing, a walking licking dog. If I were to analyze Liu Quietly's gender identity and her sexual orientation, my ability is limited and I really can't understand it; and if I were to analyze Liu Quietly's dog-licking behavior, my energy is limited and I really can't analyze it. I've cut out a few representative paragraphs for you to take a look at. Mei Qianxiao thought that she was quite thick-skinned, so she had to blush and give in a little bit: "I said, I have changed, now I like the 'heroic and righteous' type!" ——Chapter 394 "Intimate Drinking Friend, Invitation from an Acquaintance" The little girl patted the boy's face to prevent him from fooling him: "Brother Xiao's lost look cannot be fooled. The girl who can fascinate Brother Xiao... What kind of girl is she?" The boy paused. Suddenly, I thought of the cute girl with the sweet smell of wine that night, and smiled bitterly: "Maybe she is... A 'chivalrous and righteous' type of girl." "There is actually such a classification... A chivalrous and righteous girl..." The little girl was deeply surprised and remembered it in her heart without leaving any trace. ——Chapter 407 "The Day of Breaking Will Never Come Again" "It's alright. Didn't Qing Qing say that he wanted to be chivalrous and righteous to maintain world peace? Being a royal guard just fulfills your wish." "It's true that Qing Qing wants to be chivalrous and righteous, but if compared with Brother Xiao... It's more important that Brother Xiao doesn't suffer." Although Liu Qingqing lowered his head and his voice was small, his tone was firmer than ever. ——Chapter 75 "Brother Xiao is the Most Important" Li Mengyao: A standard female supporting role. Although he and Mei Qianxiao were ambiguous for nearly four hundred chapters, the author said: If he had known that it would be so long before he could see Li Mengyao again in the future, he would definitely regret it. His last words before saying goodbye were "the hemorrhoids collapsed." ——Chapter 356 "Farewell between life and death, true love is difficult to control" Immediately sentenced to death. It can also be seen from the side of this sentence that in the subsequent plot trend, there will be chaos within the royal family, and the entire court may be reshuffled. Mei Qianxiao and Li Mengyao are in the center of the storm, but they are about to be blown to different corners. And there is another foreshadowing that "Yue" saved Li Mengyao once, and Li Mengyao always remembered it, but "Yue" had no impression of this incident. This incident probably happened when "Yue" entered the palace for the first time. During this period, he also became interested. He wandered in this large garden for an unknown amount of time. Suddenly he heard a small cry for help. He cursed secretly why there was so much trouble in the palace, but he still ran over without control of his feet. This matter is just a small incident, so don't mention it. ——Chapter 173 "Some connection with the Emperor" The things concealed by the author, based on my intuition, should not be a small episode, but a foreshadowing that is closely related to the plot of the following chapters. Li Changrong: Yixue can be said to be the one who has the least connection with Mei Qianxiao among these people, but she has been appointed, and you will be the heroine. For example, the most obvious one: Think about it, Yixue is very rigid in everything she does and doesn't know how to adapt, and she also knows her brother's temper well, so she doesn't keep a close eye on her! Especially when looking for a wife, you must not look for this kind of person, you will definitely not have a good life in the future! [This chapter says: It smells so good! ——Chapter 162 "You are Dazheng, I am Anxie" As well as in the hunting ground and tea merchants' guild, both times it was Red Rakshasa who saved Tingfeng and Yue saved Yixue (we will analyze this part later on the Red Rakshasa part). Similar or even the same plot happened twice in a row. If the author is not obsessed with word count (I believe the author is a good person), then there must be some message to be conveyed. According to the theory of "the gray line of grass and snakes, the pulse runs thousands of miles", Tingfeng and Red Rakshasa, Yi Xue and Yue, these should be the two appointed couples. But Mei Qianxiao, who has such a rigid relationship with the emperor, can actually become the consort, which makes people doubt that in the subsequent plot of the prince usurping the throne, the emperor is likely to die or disappear. The following is a random analysis of some supporting characters (Random analysis? The martingale will be broken for you). Red Rakshasa: As one of the few pieces of information analyzed in this article, the identity of Red Rakshasa has been locked, and that is Jiang Jie. First, let's review what occasions the Red Rakshasa appears on? Hunting grounds, tea merchants' guilds, orphanages. Not counting the orphanage, Jiang Jie and Red Rakshasa happened to not appear at the same time at the hunting ground and tea merchant meeting. The hunting ground was attended by newcomers, and no one knew what Jiang Jie was doing. However, in the tea merchants' association, Jiang Jie appeared just after the red Rakshasa disappeared. But just because the two people are not in the same frame is obviously not enough to prove that Jiang Jie is the Red Rakshasa. But thinking about it this way, other doubts slowly surfaced. For example, when Mei Qianxiao met Jiang Jie for the first time, she found that this was a death squad: "I also find it strange that every time my squad goes on a mission, a lot of people die. For more than seven years, one by one has died. It's really bad luck. As a result, none of the Jinyiwei below dare to be promoted to my squad, and they are planning to go to Litong. There are a few promotions over there. Fortunately, the commander Tongzhi assigned you to me, which is really a big help!" - Chapter 25 "The Team Cared for by the God of Death" Why is it that the team led by Jiang Jie in the Gongwei Division is the death squad? From Mei Qianxiao's perspective, Jiang Jie is a good captain and always takes the lead in every battle. Then a reasonable explanation is that this message is an explanation of Jiang Jie's identity, implying that Jiang Jie is not as simple as he appears. For another example, the description is borderline. When Red Rakshasa inexplicably bursts into tears when rescuing Tingfeng, there is also foreshadowing: This Jiang Jie has a really good figure, with well-proportioned and solid muscles, exuding strong male hormones, and every move he makes looks extremely masculine. Mei Qianxiao's muscles are not too abrupt, the lines are relatively slender, and there is nothing stingy about where muscles should be. ——Chapter 27 "Don't pull the red line!" Looking up, the green-faced fang took off his coat, revealing his slender and muscular upper body, with distinct muscle lines, height and long arms, and perfect body proportions that made Tingfeng swallow his saliva instinctively. ——Chapter 218 "Who says women are made of water?" That's right. While writing this, I suddenly realized that the orphanage, the third place where the Red Rakshasa appeared, and the New Jiangji Team, jokingly called the "Gongweisi Brand Nursery" by Mei Qianxiao, also take care of each other? In short, Jiang Jie and Hong Rakshasa look exactly like each other, and this is a full-fledged character image. The Five Hidden Dragon Immortals: These five people hide very deeply, and they also like to use puppets, which makes it more difficult to reveal their true identities. So I can only guess casually. As the name suggests, the Bohu people cherish their lives very much. They only use puppets when cooperating with the other five immortals. When Shen Anxiang died, all clues were cut off. As the castle master of Flying Eagle Castle, Ming Chen also has a deputy castle master as a puppet - I suspect the one next to the prince is the deputy castle master. Li Quan is suspected to have been killed. Menghun has not appeared yet, but her back is everywhere: "It's natural. Lin Xiyu is a treasure. Think about it, today she is the weakness of your Mo family, tomorrow she may be the weakness of the Lin family, the day after tomorrow she will be the weakness of the Sun Moon God Sect, the day after tomorrow she will be the weakness of the imperial court, and the day after tomorrow she will be the weakness of the three sects of the Five Mountains Sword Sect. ... Oh, I'm sorry, the Emei and Hengshan factions may not be able to do anything. How can we do anything to the most beautiful woman in the world? It's too late to hurt her. I will help you realize your wish. Listen, everyone, don't do anything to the eldest lady of the Lin family..." - Chapter 404 "Carefully arranged, whose weakness is it? Why is the deputy master of Flying Eagle Castle and Mingchen's puppet so good at manipulating emotions? Isn't this the exclusive ability of Menghun? In the subsequent development of the plot, Mei Qianxiao was caught in the weakness because of this. She just wanted to stay away from Nanjing and go to the Western Regions, so she hastily killed Shen Anxiang. It can be seen that although Menghun does not appear directly in the article, as the mastermind behind the scenes, he is already vaguely controlling the situation. And the last one, Cang Yan, who is proud of the world of mortals, only has the sentence "Only in the clouds and mist can I find Cang Yan" as a reminder. This sentence really confused me. In the absence of other clues, we can only assume that the mist is true. In one case, Cang Yan lives in seclusion in the mountains, and Yun Shen knows where he is; in the other case, Yun Conglong, Cang Yan is the emperor. Wei Xingchao: Dongchang needs talents like you! As a result, there are not many good people in Dongchang, led by this guy. Wei Xingchao doesn't look like an ordinary supporting character, because he is so bad, and the plot in which he appears is the key rebellion banquet. There is no reason not to suspect that this guy is a big fish. Combined with the fact that he attacked Gongliang Junyi's wife and children, such a ruthless method, maybe Menghun? Maybe a villain? Attachment: In fact, at first I disliked the recent update because there were too many foreshadowing plots. I reread the book out of boredom and found that there are quite a lot of foreshadowings in the book, but they are well-proportioned and reflect each other. After careful analysis, I was amazed that the author had such a profound and wonderful layout under the charming writing style. Therefore, I write this book review in a state of excitement. I hope I can share some ideas with you and exchange stories. This is the first time I write a similar analysis. If there are any mistakes or omissions, please correct me. 2019.12.23

The plot, ambiguity and everything are well written. But the abusive master is really frustrating. Why does the author like ntr so much? Many of the female characters who appear are almost raped? ? ? ? ? I want to drop the book every time I see it. It's okay to arouse emotions, but again and again, I'm not a cuckold anyway. I strongly advise against the author describing this kind of scene. Anyway, to me, it is extremely toxic! !

Nowadays, if it is not a cool novel, who would read this kind of book at the beginning? If the writing is not good, it will only be a niche, complex character relationships, and heart-wrenching plots. The so-called deepening novels and various plot developments of sublimating novels will only become poisonous points in the eyes of many online novel readers. Do you spend money on online novels? Are the top ten online novels not good? How many people care about your connotation? Just feel good. It is difficult to combine connotation and fun. The connotation and the truth in the book cannot be recognized. The result is meaningless. They are all adults. If the works of the Nobel Prize for Literature are to cultivate personality and spirit, aren't they good? How many connotative books can an online novel author with only fifty years of life experience write? You first have to make people believe that the book you write is true and not nonsense. And middle school and high school students who are in the second grade of middle school may buy it, and may get insights from the values ​​brought by the connotation of online novels, and get the impact of their cognitive outlook. Then you may simply look down on it. The various expressions and connotations in your book may be as childish as children. At this time, you tell them the truth in the book, and they tell you the social reality, which is pure nonsense Unless the author is famous, has strong writing skills, and has a large number of readers and fans, like a squid, otherwise, it will only disappear in the strong competitiveness of the starting point author, and there will be no support from people who agree. The so-called Internet novel with connotation It is said that even if it is rootless, even if Fenghuo's sword comes, this book with mostly truths will be criticized as delicate and artificial, and the truths are nonsense. Fortunately, there are many supporters and fans, who are willing to listen to the life principles in Fenghuo's book This is the current situation of Qidian. This book is lukewarm because it lacks its core competitiveness. There are too few points to watch, it cannot stimulate readers' interest in reading, and it does not give readers worth subscribing. Performance, the image left by the characters is also very low. The characteristic of online novels is that readers first think of the characters, not the plot, and the plot will soon be forgotten. Only the characters are deeply rooted in people's hearts. Personally, excellent online novels are selling characters, secondly selling settings, and thirdly selling stories Of course, if you are just writing for yourself, not for readers, and just want to write what you want to write, then the above content is pure fart

I finally understand why this book is not popular. I read the beginning and it was pretty good, but the self-excitement was too serious. . . . Direct bullshit took off. . .

I can barely count myself as an old book friend. I quit the game a long time ago and came back to check it out today. The reason why I quit the game before was, hey, wasn't there a female supporting character in it? The one wearing a mask was very ambiguous with the protagonist. She was a princess or something. She was almost raped (only her belly was left), and then she was rescued by someone else (seeing her naked body), and I liked that Personally, I felt very alienated at that time, so I quit. Now who can tell me the plot behind it... (Actually, it doesn't matter if the author writes this kind of thing, but one thing is, the female supporting character must not have an affair with the protagonist. This is really poisonous. Even if the author didn't mean it, but it was written like this, I really don't like ntr)

Author, let me explain to you why this novel is not popular 1. The early foreshadowing of your article is too long and it can be regarded as a long-term abuse of the main text. Now it is difficult for people to abuse the main article 2. The tension of the writing is not enough, and it does not attract the readers. The emotions and sexual interest are brought to the point you want, and it's too watery 3. The problem with the character setting is that the protagonist calls himself a beggar and dresses sloppily. After the purification, the supporting characters have not changed much about him. It is considered that the protagonist is not attractive enough. 4. Generally speaking, the protagonist is the most handsome, you know what I mean (even if he is not, he will gradually become more handsome later) Everyone feels it, if you disagree, please click <Leave, don't complain.

It's really frustrating to watch. The plot has been depressing. I don't care if I feel good or not. But the protagonist is too miserable. Is this a piece of writing about Yu?