A Full-Level Player from Another World

The reason why I never vote for recommendations or monthly votes is that updates are too slow.

Come on, just write according to your own ideas. Pay attention to the problem of the protagonist disconnecting in the early stage and control it later, but don't make it one-size-fits-all. The rest of the writing is very good, and the portraits of the supporting characters are well described. To be honest, I have seen too many otherworld novels from the perspective of the protagonist. It is rare to find such a book! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง I can only recommend 7 pieces a day and support it!

Awesome, NB, I admire you. I am willing to be inferior. It is a fighting story. The protagonist is not online for more than 20 chapters, and he keeps repeating boring fights. You are really NB. The protagonist is not online for two or three chapters. It can be said that you are not online for more than 20 chapters. Who is the protagonist? What's your name? I think you can just write a supporting role. What kind of protagonist should you write? If you want the protagonist to be useful, I am really speechless. This is the first time and the first time I have been persuaded to quit by such a weird thing. It is also the first time I read a novel and saw that the protagonist is not online for more than 20 chapters, and he only appears for a while and then disappears again.

Looking at the whole book, the shortcoming is that the protagonist's pretentiousness is too long, and then when the protagonist is about to show off, it will only make the reader shout: That's it? That's it? Although at the beginning it seemed that the protagonist was too cautious and had few scenes, it was still possible to make the protagonist invincible a few more times, or to have more big scenes where the protagonist pretends to be cool The last update was in June, I don't know if the author has updated it more, but I still want to give some writing suggestions. Judging from your preface, this pit is very deep, and it can even lead to two more novels ( A prequel and a postquel about returning to Earth) Of course, this is not important. The important thing is that "this is a full-level boss torturing the food" is a fun story. Since it wants to be fun, it must be based on the supporting roles. The protagonist has to be so nb, but infinite slaps in the face are not advisable now (one or two times of fun will be enough) Also, the author's writing is very good, I hope to see it

How should I put it? It feels like Punch Man and Bone King, and it is understandable that he uses the technique of suppressing his desire first and pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger! But, it feels like the protagonist is schizophrenic. While saying that he doesn't know if there is anyone in the other world who is better than him and that he should be careful, he will always take the initiative to find trouble and fight with others to show his level. He will always show his ability to kill instantly in front of others! It feels like you are suppressing your excitement first, and then you can't hold it back halfway. You quickly come out and pretend to be 13, which completely ruins the artistic conception of creating a climax! And this situation is getting more and more serious, and it feels like I have given up on treatment while sitting!

. . . It seems that Wei Mao doesn't feel anything at all?

The fight against monsters at the beginning is so long-winded that I wrote more than a dozen chapters.

Speaking of which, the protagonist's presence is really low. On average, within 100 chapters, there are only 5-7 online chapters. The remaining characters are either at a low level, but the supporting characters are just useless (they can't survive three chapters). 😅 Originally, I was waiting to see how the protagonist would pretend to be sexy and pick up girls, and then fight monsters in another world, but in the end, I was disappointed with the supporting characters. (It feels like watching an action romance movie and suddenly the whole screen is covered with white light mosaic after the commercial breaks. It's a mouthful of old blood! 😒)

It's obvious that it can be destroyed with one move, but Luo Liba needs to kill it again with one move. Too pretentious?

I feel like this book reveals traces of Gu Aotian everywhere. Can you go out and write something of your own?

Why is such a beautiful book updated so slowly? I beg the author to update it quickly.

This world is definitely not a joke 🤓

Very well written! Come on! Very pretty! Wait for the update! 12 Votes recommended every day!

The setting is great, thank you.

A battle plot that has nothing to do with the protagonist is just watered down for 7 chapters. . . . . . Farewell

I also invested. I thought the previous chapter was pretty good, but after reading the discussion below, I found it seemed very toxic.

The update is a bit slow, so please apologize to the author for dressing up as a woman.

Author, although I understand your feelings in describing a world, the existence of pig's feet is too low. . . . .

Come on, author~ Besides, no one will see me secretly eating shit here (●°u°●)​"

I have seen more than 90 chapters, let me talk about my feelings. In the first 90 chapters, the 100-level protagonist spent 5 chapters fighting a 30-level trash, and then the daily routine failed for less than 10 chapters, and the rest was disconnected. From the 50th chapter, the auction house failed for more than 10 chapters, and then there was the invasion of Warcraft, until the 90-odd chapters where the protagonist came out and said a few words. Japanese light novels are indeed slow-paced, but you are slower than a snail and you really can't read anymore. The purpose of reading Invincible is to have fun, not to watch the protagonist observe life in another world. Besides, Invincible is really not that exciting, and it's so long and stinky. Whoever wants to watch, I'm leaving

After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist's role is very pitiful, and it can even be avoided for more than ten or twenty chapters. Finally, there are more dialogues than fighting descriptions. The overall feeling is that it is a bit painful to watch, and I can't vent my anger. Even when the protagonist takes action, there is no smooth and refreshing feeling. This is the first time I have seen this kind of invincible novel. Goodbye

It's so poisonous that I can't stand it any longer. I'm so sorry. Invincible writing is called invincible writing. I have to write more than a dozen pieces to defeat low-level monsters at full level. Isn't this a matter of raising my hand? I have to avoid people when killing monsters for fear that others will know. I wonder if you are invincible. You are so scared.

As an old bookworm, after reading a hundred pictures, I was confused. There is no plot. It's cool. Anyway, I didn't understand it. The appraisal of the white text has been completed.

It's very understandable The protagonist has great power, but he is as timid as an ant He was also a coward in the tavern when the monster attacked the city Can't you use your own strength if you don't agree with the world? Three or four chapters have been watered down, and the protagonist has no power but no soul.

Whether the protagonist is dead or something, it has always been a small character fighting scene. Sometimes the protagonist's existence is not visible in chapters 5 to 10. I don't know how good it is. Really, the protagonist has no sense of existence at all. Looking at it, I can't see the role of the protagonist at all. 🥵

Updates are slow, the plot drags, and the protagonist appears too little.

Is this water? This is obviously the sea! For example, when two people fight, the protagonist comes to break up the fight. First, the psychological thoughts of the two people fighting, and then the psychological thoughts of the protagonist. After the protagonist appears, the two have new ideas, and after questioning, the protagonist has new ideas. Then write down the various causes and consequences, and then write how the protagonist solves them. I am really good at this kind of writing. I can only write a few hundred words about an ant being trampled to death! First, I will write about the origin of ants, then I will write about the misery and hard work of the ant race, then I will write about the ants' resentment towards the unfairness of the world, and then I will write about what humans are like. After writing about ants, I will write about human psychology. Write about something that suddenly reminds me of my past experience. I can really write a thousand and eight hundred words on water

Dear author, the novel has no problems except for the low sense of presence of the protagonist. For the sake of the positive discovery of future novels, I must tell the protagonist to stop pretending, stop pretending to be useless, and don't pretend to be blunt. Also, the heroine is a thousand-year-old ancestor. I can only say that the old woman dares to pretend to be a virgin here, bba!! !@Gdgsgfsdgwscsw….

It's okay to update every few months. I looked at the update time of the catalog and found out that whenever I remembered, I would write a chapter or two to deal with it, and when I couldn't remember, I would write it. I guess the author will have forgotten the plot when he updated it, and will have to read his book again and continue to the next paragraph?

The protagonist does not have enough presence, and there are so many secondary characters that it seems that the book has no main line, and the story is messed up.