My Dark Souls System

Mom too! ! ! I thought another undead man was going to spread the fire!

The spoof doesn't fit in at all. Why should something that doesn't belong to the same style be forced into the novel?

What kind of black soul is it if you can't make a fire?

It's boring, why can't you write a non-intelligent system? Do you like these staff-making systems and staff-making protagonists?

Nonsense, it's not an undead person. Black Soul, don't use such a name that makes people think wrong. If you practice martial arts to the point where you need a black magic golden finger, you might as well have an all-round assistant. The style of painting is different.

No wonder it's so crazy, the main character is a psychopath

Brother, do you want to spread the fire? Get out! ! !

Damn, I thought it was a suffering system.

It is undeniable that I am not a novice in terms of writing and plot. It is okay to read, but the pit of the plot is too big, the level of persuasion is MAX, and the most fatal mathematics is not good. The author should be at the second grade level of elementary school. Fifteen 15*500=4500? As for those who think I'm just bastardizing, just watch the plot for yourself. It's equipped with a magic system, and in the end, it's basically all about martial arts. Does your family's magic refine the innate body? Studying martial arts techniques? Is this what a magic-level skill has? The master still can't control it? Still have to beg? The protagonist has never seen a woman in his eight lives? Can you just meet someone who is a stunning beauty? Can't even turn your eyes? Are you still crazy about watching it? What is your setting for the protagonist? Is it someone who has never seen the world or is a ******, an imbecile or a retard? Don't be dissatisfied if you say you're not good at math. I won't say what's wrong with the first few digits. After all, it's a counting unit that few people use. If you make a mistake, few people will look at it. But in the later part of the business, you can still make a mistake. I'm really convinced. Trolls, please read Chapter 75 and then comment after reading it. OK? There are many mistakes and omissions in the previous part, and I am too lazy to point them out to you one by one, lest you make a fool of yourself if you don't understand.

I thought it was spreading fire, but it turned out not to be the case. I left first.

I have only read the first few chapters. Since I took the time to read them, I will leave you my own opinions. How should I put it? When I read novels, I like to put myself in the position of the protagonist and think about it. When I saw the competition in the forest in the first few chapters, I always felt uncomfortable. I felt that the protagonist's behavior was too unqualified. In a dangerous and unfamiliar place, I was still so naive. Well, that's more or less the same. I am an adult after all. Maybe it's because the author couldn't describe the overall form clearly, and I always felt that the protagonist was too out of touch. It would be okay if the protagonist was invincible or not in danger for the time being, but now the protagonist is forced to fight. Then the overall style should be depressing, or at least urgent. As for the exchange between the protagonist and Xiao Hei, it makes me doubt the protagonist's IQ. It would be more comfortable if the author gave the protagonist a damaged soul┗┃■┃┛, or a mentally ill person. Then the protagonist would get better and better, and it would be good to despise the enemy and look down on the enemy everywhere. What I want is that in a somewhat tense atmosphere, the protagonist can be cool and relax, but he can't be cool all the time! ! People who have just arrived in another world have very little sense of security. Some precautions against danger are indispensable. No matter how much you do to increase the chance of survival, you cannot overdo it, but I have not seen this aspect described. Maybe there will be one later, but I don't want to see it, I don't want to ┐ (─__─) ┌ read it! ! ! 🔨🔨🔨

Dark Souls is the talent of the protagonist, not a fan of the game! Anyway, in the end, either you are crazy or I am crazy! 눈_눈 (Look at my eyes, sincere face.) Instructions sticker!

Didn't he say that he wanted to escape from the Black Corner? Why did he only say that in more than a hundred chapters, but there was no plan to escape at all?

Who knows what a dark soul you are.

It's so fake. Who is willing to waste energy talking nonsense and asking for advice? I'm really drunk and poisonous. I feel that this paragraph is not well written. First of all, it is very abnormal for the two human races to have such a good relationship. The protagonist actually still sympathizes with him in his mind. Is this really playing house? There is no sneak attack.

I just arrived and read a few chapters, but I feel like I can't relate to it.

What happened to Chapter Nineteen? Didn't it mean that human souls were all at ten points before, but in chapter nineteen it became thirty points?

I read the first few chapters and found that the protagonist's character is like an obedient child who never needs to think about things. I like to ask the system how and how, which is different from the current trend of Voldemort-style protagonists. Although many readers were discouraged from the beginning, after coming over from obedient children, they found that there were other choices. But I still hope that the author can keep up his efforts. Although persistence may not necessarily be a victory, failure is a damn success.

Mainstream formulaic articles... It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away...

The typical chair back on the cover needs to be carved into a dragon head (funny)

All kinds of irrationality, bugs placesah Don't join the logic party The protagonist is in a place where technology is extremely advanced, and he uses his golden finger unscrupulously. The protagonist was an orphan who didn't understand anything in his previous life, and suddenly he knew it and started to recite the magic spell, haha