Dirty Thunder

Read the previous chapters, fantasy tag? It looks like farming writing to me. First of all, this kind of writing is not friendly to newcomers, because it is difficult to have very passionate and obviously pretentious plots. This kind of literature attracts people firstly by its writing style. I took a look and found that the fluency of your writing is not bad, and it doesn't feel awkward or difficult to connect when reading. Then the setting, the plot is really average, there is nothing particularly eye-catching in the front. (This includes plot settings, suspense, etc.) I don't know if it is a farming novel. . . If so, farming writing requires knowledge reserves. If you want to use electrical engineering knowledge, you must understand it yourself, and you cannot mess with common sense things. If you don't know how, read the information. I can't remember the others. If you have any questions, ask me again and I'll give you my own opinion. Then you need to persevere in writing, and you need to take your time to formulate words and sentences. You can read some online articles that are particularly comfortable to read, sentence by sentence, read a few more books, and it is enough to read dozens of chapters in one book. Others are to read excellent books and think more about it yourself.

Pfft, you are so miserable. Leave a comment after reading it.

When I first saw the introduction, it was indeed about farming, but the introduction was too simple and needed to be changed. This introduction is the same as when someone asks you about a fantasy book and you say that the protagonist tells the story of the protagonist upgrading and fighting monsters.