Return to Lordaeron

Author, this is a routine you used a few years ago. There are still people practicing Tai Chi today... The moves you use as a monk are more suitable for World of Warcraft than Tai Chi. The whole beyond drama

First of all, not to mention that the seven human kingdoms had just experienced the Black Tide Orc War and narrowly won a bloody battle. In addition, the national system is based on the medieval monarchy, aristocracy and feudal system. Who would value you as an entertainment game producer and a young man with a civilian status~? The identity of the Dalaran mage still has some weight, but it is only a little higher than an ordinary knight, and at most it is on par with a Silver Hand paladin. Let me ask you, as a country bumpkin like you, do you want to enter the king's court in a grand manner and get the treatment of being introduced together with Prince Arthas and Princess Jaina~? Are you dreaming? Furthermore, even if the above issues are ignored, when the kings of the seven kingdoms reached a deadlock in discussing the treatment of orc captives, you, as the protagonist of the prophet, did not dare to speak out about the future, and were unwilling to conform to the king of Thailand. However, what is your answer? You are timid, trembling, without any magnanimity or character, and you don't even think about it. This will make the person who proposes to listen to your protagonist's opinion unable to come to the stage~! Co-author, high-ranking officials and dignitaries gave you a chance to show your face in front of all the kings, but you are so cowardly? You look like you can't hold up the wall, so what qualifications do you have to attend such an important meeting? Even if you are afraid of the bronze dragon, you are afraid of the general trend of history, and dare not state the cause and effect, but you will not act confidently and shout out, "Repay evil with kindness, how to repay kindness?" "A tooth for a tooth, an eye for an eye!" "A murder must be repaid with a life, and a debt must be repaid with money, it is only natural!" With these words, no one can find any fault with you, and you can also show your domineering side, please at least three kings, and gain their favor~! Moreover, this will not interfere with history, but your face and the face of the person who recommended you will be taken into account. Isn't this good? But what does it say in your book? The protagonist's performance made me want to strangle him to death. He is a useless coward, but he is indeed a coward~! The above two alone are enough to give up the book~! The protagonist is so cowardly, his IQ is low, and the plot arrangement is unreasonable, not to mention that there are dramas like Tai Chi in it~! After all, the other party is the prince of Stromgarde, and he doesn't have any magic items or props on him? If you add the elegance of a cat, the agility of a leopard, the strength of a bull, and the patience of a bear, how can you, a little mage without a shield, still give a shit? Have you ever thought about these? Azeroth is a medium-demon plane. Martial arts from low-demon or even non-demon planes like Earth may not be easy to use, especially when the opponent is blessed with various magic BUFFs, or if someone gives you weakness, slowness, or blindness, why do you still use Tai Chi? It's no use even if Baji comes~!

It's pretty cool, why doesn't anyone comment?

I think there is actually no difference between the Earth Travelers and those orcs... I never understand why the writers of Warcraft care about the bronze dragon. If the bronze dragon wants to kill the time traveler, there will be no tribes left long ago.

Chapter 12: Persuasion to Resign: Legally speaking, a game creator can be rated as an outstanding young man in the kingdom, not to mention making games during war years, or logically speaking, a civilian can be rated the same as a prince. I don't think it's logical. This serious sense of violation made me unwilling to read any more, regardless of whether there was any explanation later. Very powerful in persuading people to retreat

Medivh was introduced to everyone by King Menethil at the royal banquet in Lordaeron because he is the son of the Guardian, his father is also the court mage, and he himself is also recognized as a magic genius. The protagonist is just a poor man who invented the card game. There is no mention here of what significant contribution he made in the second Dark Portal War. So why should the King of Lordaeron introduce him at this celebratory state banquet?

In fact, after reading the beginning, I felt that my IQ was not up to par, so I gave up. I felt that I was so disgusted that I should just vent my complaints. If the author doesn't like it, just delete it. Anyway, I won't come back again. First, in the timeline, the time traveler is talking nonsense, not to mention whether the old King Menethil will listen. Are you sure that the bronze dragon really won't come out and beat the protagonist to death? Major events such as the existence of the Evil Demon King and the appearance of the undead are almost certainly on the bronze dragon's attention list. Second, the position of the protagonist, a civilian? Magic apprentice? A game creator? Which one of these three do you think is enough to make a king listen to your nonsense? Don't forget that a mage's words carry weight, but they are compared to ordinary people and are far from enough for a king. If you want to be a real time traveler and confess who you really are, at least you have the strength to make the other party listen to you and not ignore it as a joke. Third, evidence? The Curse Sect is not considered evidence. If I think about it in another person's shoes, I would only suspect that this is a fanciful attempt directed and performed by the Curse Sect in order to break into the top echelons of the kingdom. So it's really bullshit. The evidence simply doesn't hold up. After seeing this, I can't watch the rest, because I found at least three normal endings. The bronze dragon beat him to death, Menethil hacked to death, was treated as a joke by others, and ended in depression after being ignored. And the protagonist is still alive and still doing things. Please. It's been like this before, but it's still a bitch. Slipping away.

Wow, this is the first time I've seen someone selling themselves off in this kind of start.

Isn't the most contradictory thing about the drama the protagonist's inner arrogance as a time traveler who wants to save everything, but on the other hand he is not strong enough and is passionate, leading to nothing being achieved and being dumped in various ways?

If the protagonist turns into an undead lich, then I will fight with the author...

The protagonist is a good person in various ways, but he still takes it for granted when he is beaten. I think the protagonist was a Japanese in his previous life, and he is so obedient to the superiors. What does it mean to be a prince, general, minister, and Ning? I have no control over my destiny. We are born free and are aloof. The other party is a key figure in the plot, and the protagonist has to protect him and go on all kinds of adventures? Participating in the plot is like this. I always say that it was popular five years ago, but this model cannot survive now. This holy lady cannot accept leaving.

I deleted my first post today and commented directly on it without even reading it. I'm sorry, I don't think you need to talk here. I accept everyone's criticism of me and even appreciate it. I also left a lot of critical comments. But I don't even read that kind of book, and just rely on my own understanding of Warcraft to criticize me. I don't look at Blizzard's settings, and I don't respect the author's settings. All I can say is I'm sorry, it's better for you to write it yourself. Finally, thank you to all my friends in the comment area. I am a newbie and I do have a lot of shortcomings. I am also working hard to learn. Every comment from everyone is support to me. Thank you very much!

This is the best time-travel novel I have ever read. The protagonist is not imprisoned and toyed with his soul. This is considered to be the author's intention. 1

Every time I write something, I write it a day in advance and read it again when I post it the next day. This is considered to give yourself a cooling time and do some proofreading. But as a new writer, I read a lot of things every day, and sometimes it is inevitable that I will be dazzled. And it's not easy to spot problems when you look at your own work. If there are typos that affect reading, please respond together and I will correct them immediately. Or just post a note at the paragraph and I will correct it immediately after seeing it! Thank you very much everyone!

I spent some time reading some at noon, and in general I said: There is no outline, and the plot develops weirdly. One moment, the king is being scorned, the next moment, they are loving each other, the next moment, the teacher is so dangerous, and the next moment, they are playing monkey tricks in front of the teacher. It's weird, really weird.

Chapter 3: A moment of drama, the protagonist is a fool! ! Identification completed!

After reading the recent posts, they all say that the beginning is very bad. In fact, the first three chapters after the revision are much better, and the later chapters are very exciting. I assert that as long as the eunuchs finish the book smoothly, this book will definitely become a classic among Warcraft fans.

The protagonist immediately said "I am a time-traveler" when he came up, which caught me off guard. Everyone gathered and dispersed, so I ran away first.

Seeing the protagonist say that he is a time traveler so quickly, I almost choked on a breath of air_(:3∠)_

The subsequent plot is too depressing, and the author makes the protagonist more and more weak and aboriginal. How should I put it? It's like a small person has entered the big history. Small changes are constant, but no big changes at all. The protagonist is just like a standard aborigine, but with a little more prophetic ability.