
The Legend of Mu Shen, from Dragon Ball
龙珠之牧神传说
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- Completed
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- 1.8M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
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- Qidian
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The strongest people on earth? Impossible, in the Dragon Ball world, it is impossible for people on earth to be the strongest, and it is impossible to be the strongest in this life. The strongest ones are Saiyans, do you know why? Because the Saiyans have the family destruction buff, the clan annihilation buff, and Goku's big failure. What do people on Earth compare to? Genocide? Your Earth God is a Namekian and can be resurrected, so it is impossible to brush up the genocide buff. In the Dragon Ball world, you should be good at cooking good dishes. In the early stage, you will flatter the Saiyans, and in the later stage, you will flatter the God of Destruction. Just cook with peace of mind😹🙆
Protagonist: Even a mere Saiyan is fighting me. I have exceeded the limit of combat power and reached 10,000. How can you fight me with your combat power of 5,000? After saying this, he laughed with a smile on his face. Seriously injured Saiyan: Damn it, now I am seriously injured, let alone his opponent, and can only eat one fairy bean. The seriously injured Saiyan raised his hand with difficulty and ate the fairy bean... Ahhh, what is going on? My combat power has increased by leaps and bounds, reaching 100,000. It feels so powerful! Protagonist:... Fortunately, I hid 190,000 combat power. My 200,000 combat power was more than enough to deal with him. After a while, the Saiyan was seriously injured again! Saiyan: Damn it, I was seriously injured again. I still can't beat him. I can only eat another fairy bean. The Saiyan ate another fairy bean... Saiyan: Ahhhh, what's going on with this energy? It's too powerful. The combat power is 3 million. Ahhhh, it can be improved, continue to improve, improve... Why has his hair turned yellow? It's so powerful, it's too powerful. Is this energy a transformation? The current combat strength is 150 million! Protagonist... I don't want to play anymore 😢😢😢
It feels like you, the author, have been subconsciously suppressing Sun Wukong and the others. You said that Melia and the others are keeping their normal state close to the transformed form, but in fact, I think Sun Wukong and the others have their normal combat power close to their transformed form. As for the fact that they cheat and like to transform in the original work, one may be a problem with Sun Wukong and his habits, and the other is a problem with the author of the original work. After all, transformation is a big feature in Dragon Ball. If Sun Wukong and the others don't transform when fighting, I think everyone will be very distorted. Moreover, in Dragon Ball Super, when Son Goku transforms into a blond Super Saiyan, he usually only looks like a Super One, and doesn't change much to Super 2 or Super 3. After that, he turns into Super Blue. Personally, I feel that for Sun Wukong and others in the later period, the blond Super Saiyan transformation shouldn't have much increase, so the Super Blue's increase is probably more. The subsequent Self-Ultimate Intention Kung Fu can be regarded as a state. You see, Sun Wukong is not turning into Super Blue and using the Self-Use Utmost Intention Kung Fu. It is directly the normal state + the Self-Use Utmost Intention Kung Fu.
The writing is really good, one of the best in the same subject matter, especially the setting of the world view, which connects Dragon Ball's TV, theater, comics, games, etc. Very well. The world view is large and not confusing, readers can see it clearly, and the author also has a framework for what he writes. It seems that the plot of Dragon Ball is almost over. If the author wants to continue writing, can he go to other dimensional worlds?
Did the author think that the Saiyans are too powerful? The point of view that they are not powerful The First Saiyan was exterminated The Second Saiyan only has explosive power and no sustained combat ability The Third Saiyan Although adulthood is long, the life time is still too short The Fourth Saiyan has no ability to fight in the stars and can only be a planetary creature. It is nothing if it leaves a planet with air The Fifth Saiyan They can eat too much and if no one provides them with supplies, Saiyans will automatically perish, especially when they are hungry. They are simply soft-footed shrimps In summary, the shortcomings of the Saiyans mentioned above are too obvious, so the race is not excellent. In reality, Saiyans are more evolved than the people on earth. Their birth strength is stronger than the people on earth According to domestic fantasy novels, innate origin is very important. Some people are born without training. It is better than some people who have been practicing for a lifetime, unless like Broly, whose physique is mutated and determined by innateness Dragon Ball is just that Sun and Vegeta are the protagonists, and the Saiyans have benefited from Sun and Bay. It is just that the plot requires the abilities of these two Saiyans to keep adding to them, but this cannot be said that Saiyans are very strong. Saiyans have much better racial talents. I've read several of your books and it's inseparable from Saiyan and Kamesen-ryu. The plot is basically the original work, especially the protagonist you wrote, which has no characteristics The protagonist you wrote just followed the original work and occupied the opportunity of Sun Wukong. In fact, you still wrote Sun Wukong
I feel like the protagonist can be allowed to reshape the star of the North Kaio. I really like the North Kaioh. After all, he is the master of the protagonist. Goku cannot be helped by a mortal. After all, he has helped you. He has taught the protagonist martial arts and is a member of the Underworld Martial Arts Association. It is all about friendship. If he can reshape the star for the Kaioh, I hope it will be stronger than the original god's power.
When it comes to the Majin Buu chapter, will the protagonist defeat the Great Kaioh? After all, he has not completely absorbed it. Besides, the protagonist and Kaioshin are from the same series of gods, and they are his superiors. It is still necessary to get a reliable Kaioshin for his own body in the seventh universe.
First of all, I finally gained some weight and can vote for recommendations every day. Secondly, there is something wrong with your idea of sealing the ancient Saiyans. For example, Piccolo is old after being sealed, and the same goes for the old Kaioshin. Are these Saiyans sealed for hundreds of thousands of years? ? ? ? It seems that Saiyans can't live for that long, and even Super Saiyan 1 or Super Saiyan 2 are not strong enough to live for hundreds of thousands of years. The unit has suddenly improved too much. This is not hundreds of years. Although you are the author, I still have to point out the unreasonable points. I wish you better and better, and I wish everyone all the best this year.
Could April be Android No. 21? Because in the previous book, it was written that 21 has three boundary cores. I used one, and No. 17-18 Also used one each, which is exactly three boundary cores.
There was once news that Super Four was designed by Akira Toriyama but has not been used and is still being designed. But it was used by Toei, and the prototype of this grass was the Saiyan ultimate transformation into the Golden Electric Super Saiyan designed by Akira Toriyama. However, it was abandoned by Akira Toriyama due to the emergence of Super Four. It took several years to redesign it. Super God, Super Blue, and Comfort. The original design of the Super 3 state would integrate the genes or powers of the giant ape in the body. Super Saiyan power would become normal, and finally become Super 4 (let's call this state Super 4!). Super 4 would further transform into a Gold and Lightning Super Saiyan. This is just a piece of news from the past. I don't know if anyone has seen it.