One Piece Divergence

After taking Luffy's path, Luffy went to take a new path. You can be good friends with Luffy who fall in love and kill each other. Like Roger and Garp, they will chase you all their lives and occasionally hold banquets together. It feels like fate.

Also, the Slippery Fruit has not been awakened and can only make your body slippery. Just like Ka Er's Nuo Nuo Fruit, after awakening, the surrounding organic matter can turn into glutinous rice. You used this directly, which is a bit unreasonable. Let's take a look at Brother Ming's thread fruit.

Fans have to write different plots to be fun. Your protagonist replaces Luffy and follows the original plot line, which is not interesting. It would be better to write about Luffy, inherit Akainu's will, and recruit all the original crew into the navy. That would be more novel.

This introduction is about another chat group novel. Luffy joined the chat group as a navy marshal. It was also Akainu who saved Luffy from losing his arm.

Someone really wrote a joke about the red dog saving Luffy and the Marine King Luffy. Hahaha, but I think the male protagonist's ability is a bit weak and he may not be able to reach the new world. Why not be more different? The male protagonist eats the Thunder Fruit and completely becomes Luffy's old enemy. Hahahaha, I was laughing so hard. But Luffy here probably didn't eat the banana fruit, and relied purely on the six-style haki of Taijutsu to fight, right?

I don't like Usopp, and I gave up when I saw Usopp being asked to join. Although Usopp did get up in the later period, I still hate the character of Usopp.

I was really embarrassed to see the protagonist being a mediocre person😓. Do you really think you are the emperor? And is there such a thing as a mediocre person in the world of One Piece?

Can you give me a little more? I've been saving for two weeks and it's still the same amount.

Suddenly I thought of Ultraman's plasma spark tower

I almost missed a good book because of the introduction. The author's idea is novel. If the rhythm is stable and does not collapse in the later stages, there is no doubt that this will be a rare pirate fanfic. I give you a recommendation vote and look forward to the next update 🤭🤭🤭

Just because you have such a poisonous profile, I want to read it.

Zoro killed him by giving him the fruit. Nor does his ambition allow him to eat the fruit.

You've already used that rescue plan, so is Sanji's chief of staff still useful? From this little detail, you have overlooked the feeling of Sanji

I have a question to ask. If Usopp uses too much flour star, and the concentration of flour around the target reaches a certain level, wouldn't it be possible for the protagonist to cause a dust explosion as long as there is a little spark or spark?

To be honest, Cucumber really might be the eunuch. I opened three books at the same time. I will finish one in the second half of the year and start another one. Now the villains are basically not updated. They are all updated randomly. I gave up on them all.

Why is Usopp's bounty smaller than Nami's? It shouldn't be

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It's good to be a boy-to-female, and she's still Roger's daughter.

The Lili Fruit of the protagonist is actually the Plasma Fruit in the One Piece stage play!

I just read Chapter 30, and I just have a question. What type of devil fruit is the protagonist? Shouldn't Ion be a natural type? Why is Chlo still injured and bleeding when fighting? Moreover, even if it is a superman type, it should be full of electricity when fighting. It should be similar to Thor in Thor 3, who will be electrocuted when he gets close.

It always feels like you accepted all the women in the Straw Hats, but you didn't see the evidence behind it. The protagonist himself said that this is a hot-blooded comic, can you please stop doing it like this?

Regarding Oda's classification of Devil Fruit, I feel it is a bit general. After all, the Superman fruit also has Luffy's special physique and Whitebeard's regular ability, so I feel that the names of the animal and superhuman types should be changed. The animal type is called the transformation type, and the superhuman type is divided into two types: the regular type and the material type. There are four types of fruit devil fruits in total: transformation type, regular type, material type, and natural type.

I realized it was a mess before I even finished it. . . I specially ordered the last chapter and read it. I feel that the author's ideas are quite good, but to be honest, if there are too many differences, it feels a bit confusing. When comparing the plot with the original work, it feels a little less interesting. The key point is that the protagonist lacks enough highlights. What I saw is nothing more than using the fruit ability to discharge fire and some common uses of electric fire abilities. There are no impressive moves, the fighting is not attractive enough, and the character seems to be the same. The most impressive thing is that he claims to be a one-man person. . .