My 108 Sets of Heavenly Secrets

Is he another protagonist who doesn't dare to reveal any of his trump cards? It feels strange. Only when you reflect your own value can you be taken seriously. I want to know if the protagonist's first secret book of heaven has been exposed.

The pace is too slow... The development of the protagonist Goldfinger is too slow... Too hidden... The protagonist's self-control is too poor... There is no big poisonous point... This is a book that can be read

I got addicted and couldn't stand it. I originally thought it was about martial arts upgrading to fairy tales, but I couldn't stand it. It was a mess. It felt like martial arts plus fantasy. The protagonist had a split personality and the writing style was split. It felt like when I was in school and writing essays. I took half of each of the three essays and mixed them together. Sometimes I was rigorous, sometimes I was funny, sometimes I was a noob, and sometimes my imagination was wide open. This author is in a bottleneck period, and he is in a state of obsession. He sits quietly and watches the crazy god.

The first 5 chapters are quite interesting to watch.

The creativity is good, the writing is terrible, and the plot is cheating. Farewell!

The author's writing style and characterization are okay, but the pace and plot are too slow. I thought it was a cool novel when I read the introduction, but it turned out to be a reverse cheat. The gap is huge. If it was low-level martial arts, it would be okay, but this is obviously a fantasy novel. Many years ago, there was no such novel with 200 chapters of body training, 200 chapters of foundation building, and 100 chapters of ascending to immortality. The protagonist in this novel has no abilities at all, and the reverse golden finger is unreliable. I haven't finished the first level of a cheat code after dozens of chapters. You still have 1 What to do with the 17 cheats? The power level of fantasy novels is high. The protagonist should be more careful in the early stage. It is not the kind of story that relies on the halo of the protagonist to force the plot, and then comes into contact with the secrets of heaven and earth by various coincidences. The early plot is scattered and watery, and most of them cannot hold it in the later stage. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

To put it bluntly, the author should change his job, I'm afraid you will starve...

It is indeed a good book and very comfortable to read 👍👍

The protagonist's golden finger is very special and has the following characteristics. 1. Secrets of Heavenly Way, powerful and great martial arts secrets. 2. [Emphasis added] Every time you awaken from the Heavenly Dao secret book, you can obtain Heavenly Dao energy. What does it do? It just allows the protagonist to be a real man for a second! It is equivalent to allowing the protagonist to experience the power of full level once! After using it, it will return to level zero and you have to slowly upgrade again! Attention, it's a one-time real man! It changes back after using it! 3. The protagonist cannot absorb spiritual energy, but if others use spiritual energy moves, he can get the products of spiritual energy decomposition next to him and upgrade! 4. For various miraculous effects of home travel, including detoxification, dizziness, and hallucinations, please refer to various magical secret treasure golden fingers in other books. To be added;

According to the current development, there are three ways to solve the protagonist's lack of spiritual energy: one is to absorb spiritual energy (mentioned in the book), the other is to kill inhuman weirdos (also written in the book), and the third is to create one's own spiritual martial arts (Bai Xing absorbed the spiritual energy when he enlightened the Barbarian King's technique). The first type of training relies too much on others, and the third type is too difficult. Only the second type of training can be regarded as regular skills by defeating monsters and upgrading. Therefore, I think the protagonist should embark on the path of defeating monsters, upgrading and exploding equipment.

Is it abusing mainstream novels? The protagonist is so weak that he can't even defeat a minion!

Recently, the story about getting the wrong jade pendant has been getting more and more difficult, and I suddenly lost my mind? Why didn't you ask immediately when you saw that you were not a guest? Why did you use the description of how you shamelessly wanted to be a guest? When you found out that you had taken the wrong jade pendant, you didn't go back and explain it immediately. How many words did it take? Where's your brain? And now Xu Qingqing starts to think about it again???? The character's IQ at the beginning is quite online, but it's gone after writing it?

The setting is really contradictory! As far as the protagonist can see the aura, it's okay, but if you inhale the aura and others can't feel it, it's a bit deceptive. If others can't even feel the aura, why not practice like a hammer! I just said that I must not be stubborn and show my worth. Well, someone else saved you, and then you are not even willing to say that you have awakened the martial arts of heaven. You are not willing to give this at least sincerity. How can you expect others to protect you in the future? ? Funny, since I just want to live in peace at this time, why is it that I was pretty good as a time traveler at the beginning of the chapter before I awakened? . Obvious contradiction

The most unbearable novel plot is that the first male protagonist always attracts enemies for no apparent reason, the second male protagonist falls in love with the protagonist's woman for no reason, and the third is unruly and willful and enjoys bullying the male protagonist, but the male protagonist also dotes on the princess sick loli sister. The above routine is extremely poisonous. I don't know if it is included in this article. If you have read it, please tell me! Thank you everyone!

It's true that you pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. But if you pretend to be a pig too much, you will really become a pig. Some little shrimps and the like dare to jump out and talk about the word count. The slow-paced group. Brother, you are not a master. There are not so many people to spoil you.

You are all very good. I won't talk about your many advantages. I will talk about the shortcomings of this book. 1. The plot is a bit protracted. I suggest "It's okay to procrastinate!" But a few more pictures" 2. There are too few updates and it's not satisfying. "Dad, you're so stuck in the plot, it's really annoying!" I still have to go to work the next day and I can't sleep well at night the next day, so I'll be upset." 3. Too few updates. Too few updates, too few updates "Tell important things three times"

The first book is The Eunuch. I will no longer have any expectations for the author. After reading it for a long time, the result is The Eunuch.

It's a pretty good book, that's all. . . .

I have been waiting for more than a month. I thought it was an update. I didn't expect it to be an announcement of a new book. It seems that it is hopeless. It should be removed from the shelves 😅😅😅

My 108 sets of radio gymnastics

Why don't you write it? Is the data brushed?

108 Sets of radio gymnastics The times are calling

The first few chapters I read are quite comfortable, please support the author~(￣▽￣~)~

The first time I rewarded a book with 100 RMB, it was so eunuch, alas.

Why do so many people say that this is not good and that is not good? I think it is enough. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is much better than many other works. It must be ranked in the upper reaches. Except for a few small parts that are better than this one, there are really not many that are better than this one. I can't stand to read it over and over again. I think this book is already well written.

Author, why do you say that the Tianqing Foundation Establishment Technique has no attack ability? It's not true after all. Isn't it enough for you to virtualize your body, penetrate your hand into someone else's body, and then materialize to crush the heart? Many anime have such virtual and real abilities.

The environment inside is not good. I suggest you close this chapter.

They are all talkative 😰. It is normal to open a restaurant, be a guest and practice secrets. Why should there be an inappropriate plot? It's also written like breaking things and yelling at each other

You have to determine the route that the protagonist takes first. I feel that the protagonist is obviously very strong. Why is he still taking the business route? It's time to abandon business. After all, money cannot enhance strength.

Eunuch is a bad thing. Let's not talk about whether it is well written or not. Eunuch means that the new book may also be Eunuch.