Return of the Immortal Destiny

It's only been a few chapters, and the female lead is already so miserable, with no special advantages or perks whatsoever. How can anyone bear to read this?

Dear author, I'm begging you to go easy on Cha Cha! She's your own daughter! Cha Cha does the hardest work for the lowest pay, has fewer cheat codes than Su Mo Yan, and has to shoulder the responsibility of saving the world at such a young age. After all, Su Mo Yan is your own daughter, right? But please keep it up, author!

Lately, I've been reading a lot of novels that are too padded and verbose, but this author's work feels like a draft, too abbreviated. For example, the acquired sword technique isn't described in terms of moves or cultivation methods. As for the three-elemental cultivation method, it's just a statement that it's suitable for people with three spiritual roots.

I've only read up to the chapters before they become VIP chapters, so I'll only comment on those. First of all, they're too brief. You get the sword technique, and then what? There's not a single word about what moves or effects the technique has.

Why did the author write about the female lead's hairbands so much? Every single chapter mentions her dark green hairband; the way it flutters makes her look energetic, etc. 😰😰

The writing style of this book has major problems. The descriptions are empty, the transitions are abrupt, and there's practically no emotional or atmospheric buildup. The female lead's character is barely mentioned even after twenty-odd chapters; she's just a blank slate, like a mere plot device. The supporting characters are even worse.

It's very well written! I personally think it's better than "The Immortal's Decree." Keep it up! (From a veteran bookworm)

The author writes very well; I hope they don't change the no-romance setting, and I'm really looking forward to the author writing a novel over a million words long—it's truly interesting.