Immortal Fate Returns

It's only been a few chapters, the heroine is so miserable, and she doesn't have any golden finger benefits. How can I watch this?

Damn, one person is writing this letter in blood, begging me to abuse Chacha a little more gently, she is your biological daughter! Chacha does the heaviest work, gets the least pay, has fewer golden fingers than Su Moyan, and has to shoulder the responsibility of saving the world at a young age. After all, Su Moyan is your own daughter, right? But come on!

Recently I have read a lot of novels that are too watery and too wordy, but the author's article is like a draft, and it is too omitted; for example, the sword skills obtained, the moves, the training methods, and the three other exercises are not mentioned. What are the differences in the techniques? There are no advantages at all. They are gone once you change cultivation. Many things are brought over in just one sentence. There are also worldviews, which sects are there on the mainland, the ranking of your own sect or how many big bosses there are in the sect. I have read 42 chapters of these so far, and nothing has been said.

I have only seen the chapters before entering V, so I will only comment on these chapters. First of all, it is too simple. After getting the Sword Judgment, what next? The moves and effects of the Sword Jue were passed without any introduction. When I got the exercise called "Three Spirits", I only mentioned a few words about the medieval Kung Fu that is suitable for the three spiritual roots, but what are the characteristics of the exercise? What are the advantages of practicing this technique? For example, there is no one-word description such as higher spiritual power quality or greater quantity. Then the plot is very jumpy. There is no ending or summary (?) At the end of the plot, so it goes directly to the next plot Finally, it is the problem of the female supporting role. There is still a small role for the female supporting role in the early stage, but later on, the female supporting role basically has no role. The supporting role is either the tree spirit or a greasy male supporting role with a strong presence called Gao. Look at the stars, look at the stars, I really want to beat this guy up.

There are big problems with the writing of this book. The description is empty, the twists are blunt, and there is no emotion or atmosphere. The image of the girl has not been seen in more than 20 chapters. She is just a blank slate. She is like a tool, let alone a supporting role. The connection and development of events are just like a running story, with no sense of involvement at all. It has an inexplicable beginning and end. It is really difficult to read**, and I feel tired 💔😅

Why does the author write so many hairbands about the heroine? In every picture, he writes about the heroine's dark green hairband. The dark green hairband floats up to show the heroine's spirit 😰😰

The author's writing is very good. I hope the setting of no CP will not be changed. I also hope that the author can write more than a million words. The novel is really interesting.

It's very well written. I personally think it's better than the one called "The Order to Pick Immortals." Come on! A view from a bookworm