My Two-Dimensional Game World

I just read the book and would like to share my thoughts: Overall, the writing is good, the writing style is a bit immature, but it's not a big problem. Time travel is very cliché, but the world it travels to is very confusing. The author did not tell the specific world to which it traveled, and the plot of the apartment after the time travel was also very confusing... The womanis very familiar with the male tenant who has just arrived, let alone saying that, but for a person who rarely drinks alcohol, she can't even swallow 71% wine... Even if she could drink it, she would probably have stomach bleeding. That's all. Come on, author! Updates are too slow! Keep writing.