Leisurely Life of Cultivating Immortals

I've almost finished reading the book, and to be honest, it's not very good. It's too confusing, the context doesn't match, and the logic doesn't make sense I talked about time travel, but after more than a hundred chapters, I don't know whether I can wear it or not. The title of the book talks about cultivating immortality, but it might as well talk about cultivating fantasy. And the golden finger is useless at all. It is just rubbish. Only the first point is written, and the rest is written in one stroke. Finally, let me say that leisurely cultivation of immortality is not cultivation of immortality at all. It's a bit serious to imitate fantasy literature and other immortality literature.

I'm not a ** author either, I just have some things to tell you. I don't like the big apprentice the most. In my opinion, I don't have to write about her. If I don't write about it, I can still keep reading, but now I can only say goodbye. By the way, the author values ​​the first impression.

The purpose of writing time travel stories is to bring in the thinking mode of the earth's information explosion. Since I have forgotten my past life, is there still any meaning in time travel? Is it interesting to use the title of time travel to sell dog meat?

If there are any mistakes, please correct me.

Go check out the Cultivation Intelligence Bureau! The protagonist hasn't started cultivating immortality yet! It's also cheating! You can refer to the mortal part! Including mortals cultivating immortals and martial arts novels! Nothing else! If you're not inspired, just take a look! If so, leave me alone!

I barely read this book at the beginning. How did I die in the hands of a fox demon when I reached the Dao, and was reincarnated again? The more I read, the more breathless I became. I didn't look like a child who could leisurely cultivate immortality. The immortal-killing gourd was killed without even using it. It was really a garbage man who wrote a garbage book and abandoned it

I found out that Pigfoot has raised a bunch of sons and daughters. If they want advice, they can give them advice. If they want weapons, they can give them to them. In retreat, they can come in at will.

Forget about other things, the protagonist's big apprentice is just too disgusting! If your cultivation level is low, your qualifications are poor, and you don't work hard, you will end up doing random things day by day. Also, can you please not let the heroine influence the protagonist? After reading more than 200 chapters, the most disgusting ones are the heroine and the protagonist's apprentice. If it were you, would you be willing to accept a loser as your disciple? What is going on in your mind, author?

Why do you feel like this book has become more and more off-kilter from the end of the first volume? Isn't this book about leisurely cultivation of immortality? Why does it become like other novels about cultivation of immortality, with all the pretense of revenge?

Shu Huang, I found this book and subscribed after seeing chapter 171. I should be qualified to post a review. The protagonist is really a licking dog. Any woman can agree to any condition. I don't understand it. I pretend to cry and agree to a condition that can be set by others. I only know one or two chapters and I agree to 3 conditions. Fuck, the protagonist asked you to eat shit or not.

Is this book really a bit sadistic? ?

Um, the writing is a bit childish and not handled well.

If I can't write the heroine, I won't write it. It's an uncomfortable stroke.

Don't you mean leisurely? Where is the leisure?

Except for the more than ten chapters at the Taoist temple at the beginning, which are considered leisurely, the later chapters are full of intrigues and plots to torture the master. How leisurely are they? I almost vomited blood before I finished reading the free version, and I really couldn't hold on anymore. Writer of sensational headlines.

After seeing Nine Transformations of Pure Yuan and Chapter 14 of Nine Transformations of Pure Yuan, my impression was very bad. After seeing the conversation between San Gong and Master Jiu in Chapter 15, my impression became even worse. The viewer who has lived for hundreds or thousands of years talks like a running account... I decided to give up. Dear book lovers, see how many chapters you can read before giving up. I am 15 chapters.

After complaining about the emotional drama, I won't complain about other points, and I'm not complaining just for the sake of complaining, that would be boring It's just that when I see a junior sister who will never be betrayed by you for life, I bear the pain and give up decisively. The author deliberately made the protagonist Gao Daquan. Just don't add emotional scenes casually. A good book will lower the level. To be honest, I liked this book very much in the early stage, but I felt bad when I saw the junior sister appeared. Then all kinds of stalking and ambiguity continued, but I tolerated it for the time being, until I saw the part about the princess, which really made me feel a little more uncomfortable. The cliché talk about naked body, and then the so-called compensation and conditions to help her, and then the so-called compensation made conditions, help her, and then fell in love, and then the junior sister came to the door and gave a gift, and the male protagonist fell for it, saying that the junior sister will never be bound to you for life! ! ! These bad storylines are really annoying. Emotional scenes in Xianxia novels are really difficult to write. If you are not careful, it will make people disgusted. Don't write feelings for the sake of writing feelings, it will make people sick. An author writes one kind of protagonist, and millions of readers will read thousands of protagonists I respect the author's hard work and do not agree with this emotional style. Since I am cultivating immortality, what is the point? ? ? It depends on how you cultivate. What is a fairy? Why fix it? What's the point of fixing it? Some people may say that the protagonist should have no emotions! Like a eunuch? Don't they all say that a wealthy couple is a good place, and among them, there are lovers! Why can't the protagonist have a female protagonist? It's not that we don't allow it. From a novel perspective, we just want to see why it should be there and how it will promote or sublimate the role of the plot in the novel. In terms of plot, what theme is your novel about? What is the main theme and what is the selling point? Since everyone chooses to watch and follow the movie, I believe that most people watch it mainly based on the subject matter, rather than looking at the emotional line to enhance the plot or the word count. Since you choose, please be pure. What I see is that you have transcended the world and become Taoist. You insist on adding some bullshit love thing. Not annoying? ! You can make the protagonist good or bad, but don't add romance easily. What I'm watching is to get rid of sexual desires. Being away doesn't mean that there is no desire. It doesn't mean that it becomes the so-called ruthless nature and becomes like a stone puppet. Some things just existed in the beginning, so they have to become non-existent. Since you read it, then write a fairy tale. If we like to read about emotions, just read the novels on the emotional channel. I won't watch emotional dramas like this again. In fact, there are still many things I want to say, but I won't say them anymore. I am a little emotional, so I am offended in some places. I don't force everyone to agree with this point of view. I just want to express it and prove the deepness of love and the deep responsibility. I like it so I don't want it to be bad. The words were a bit impulsive. I don't want to kidnap the author in the name of your own good, and make unnecessary comments. Finally, I have to say come on, author. I hope you can carefully consider the emotional line in the next movie. To be honest, the emotional drama really makes people want to go crazy.,,,,,

Hehe! When did Xuanhuang Qi become so worthless? A person who has just started to practice can refine it. How can it be as easy to practice as Dharma, Heaven, Elephant and Earth?

It feels like the author has tricked you into it with the slogan of leisure + cultivation, and then shows you dozens of chapters of leisure, and then slowly unfolds the poison (abuse). Emmmm, the contrast is huge, it's directly crooked, and it looks very uncomfortable.

The writing is good, but I complained that 70% of Zhou Fan's heavenly eyes are useless and are fake. Basically everyone in Fa Tian Xiang Di can master it. The flower blooms and steals the fruit of humanity from others in an instant, which has a healing effect to this day. It's okay to transform three pure things with one energy, but it's okay to transform one energy into four. The supreme magical power of Taoism should be that one Qi can transform the three pure beings. As long as the strength is increased, the total amount will be four times. The magical power of killing immortals and flying knives is currently useless. The plot of this book is a bit like that of Mang Huang Ji. The protagonist's wife is killed by someone, and there are less sadistic plots. Overall, it's okay, a genius novel. In addition to cultivating the inner world, which uses a lot of heavenly materials and earthly treasures, there are also the four industries of cultivating immortality (alchemy, arrays, and talismans) and other rarely used heavenly materials and earthly treasures. Cultivation basically relies on one's own understanding of the world. The relatives and classmates around me are all normal people, and they don't look for trouble for no reason. Protected by powerful ancestors (masters). It's not like a higher-level strong person will appear for no reason just after leveling up to look for trouble. Those who appear appear because of cause and effect. Not so abrupt. The protagonist is not so much a golden finger, but rather a treasure that has the function of a jade disk of good fortune to help people understand the great path. The upgrade of the plot has somewhat weakened this treasure, both in terms of magical power and level. ,,,,,,,,,, Both the plot concept and the writing are good. Worth recommending.

From Chapter 28 to Chapter 97 of Descending the Mountain, there is no training at all. The protagonist is really relaxing!

After more than a hundred chapters, it looks like the Great Way of the Lord God. After a few chapters, it looks like it covers the sky. Is this my illusion?

The author's writing skills are not strong enough to express that feeling. I don't know if he is talking about hydrology or if he is really at this level.

Haha, I accidentally gave birth to a baby... Hongjun! 😂

It's mediocre and boring. Your novel is too leisurely. It's not a good novel 😁

Looking at your profile, I will pick it up for you. You accidentally opened the sky and split the earth. You accidentally created a person. You accidentally preached a sermon. You accidentally sealed a god. You opened the world.

It doesn't seem like Wudiwen, right? ? ?

I was speechless when I looked at them. They were all cultivating immortals. How could there be so many people chatting in front of me all day long, but they didn't even cultivate? I have been practicing Qi cultivation in the Hedao realm for 6 years. Once you arrive, you have several Taoist masters in these 6 years, and you are not rigorous.

I can't even understand it later!

The first part was quite to my liking, but the second part had such a huge jump in style that I even doubted whether I was reading the same book!