Death Scourge

Let me complain, the people inside have learned knowledge for such a long time, but their understanding of Invincible Heroes is not as deep as mine →_→ And how do they command the troops?

, It's true, although you are writing the plot very seriously, you can't distinguish the priorities, and describe many battle scenes that should be covered in a few strokes. This is water in another sense. When we read novels, we will not remember the specific information of the characters other than the protagonist. For example, in your chapter, the battle at the Normal College, he is not the protagonist. At most, he will have some scenes in the later stage. Why do you write it in such detail? Who would read it in such detail? Also write down the table tennis formations and even the formations and tactics? I think you must first make it clear that you are writing a novel, a story, not playing a game. You have to calculate and operate every step. You can first introduce the status of the warring parties, and then compare the combat effectiveness. Here you can add some key descriptions of the upcoming appearances, or introduction of the arms that can advance the plot. Shao, then you directly transfer to the large-scale battle between the two sides. For example, the Normal College was defeated and retreated from the opponent, and the fight was still very intense, causing the Normal College to lose a lot of troops. In fact, you only need to roughly describe the battle situation, focus on the foreshadowing of the subsequent plot, and then the result of the battle. As for the intermediate requirements There is no need to lay any foreshadowing. The final result of the battle is naturally for the protagonist to steal the chicken or something similar to the main plot you have conceived. It is a dispensable part for the subsequent plot. Don't spend a long paragraph describing it. I am really optimistic about this idea. When I read the first few chapters, I really thought I gave up, but I didn't catch up on it. I was just attracted by Duke Da Liang, and I haven't read more than a dozen pictures. I quickly flipped through it and insisted on reading it. If I had followed up, I saw a few chapters of this kind of content in one day, so I really gave up. I hope it can be helpful to you. If it causes discomfort, you can come and bite me 😏

Write it well. Invincible Heroes is determined to be a slow-burner. It's good to be able to recall it. It's accumulated slowly.

The creativity is pretty good. But the writing style, if it's ugly, is just like a running account.

Now that I've seen it, I've forgotten who the protagonist Goldfinger is. It would be even better if there was no female protagonist. Because if you have a female protagonist or an ambiguous person, you can write several chapters in one go.

The family members of Ledutuzhibinbing came to give likes before they turned ugly.

This is too much trouble. A normal university has been in trouble for almost ten days. Who is the protagonist? Even if you get the heart of the city, you won't need it. I guess you won't need it until after 500 chapters!

The creativity is good, but the writing style is not to my liking. See next

I have saved the sentence at the end of the introduction.

Come on bro! , I look forward to the day when you become a god, hold on!

In this world... In fact, civilians in the United States, Russia, and Europe take advantage. They don't allow guns. If you bring a gun in the early stage, you can become at least a fourth-level soldier. But at the beginning, I said pig's feet, can't you bring something in? Bringing a gasoline bottle can also be used to shoot fireballs.

Let's discuss it, just say it casually. Where did the army in the book go? A dragon can kill civilians, so what are the troops doing? What about missiles? What about fighter jets? Unless you are an unreasonable person in this world and ban modern weapons, that's fine. Otherwise, a fire-breathing dragon is useless against fighter missiles, unless you are the kind of super dragon that can destroy heaven and earth. To modern society, a dragon that can breathe fire and demolish a few buildings is considered a scumbag, while a dragon that can unleash undead plague or have mental magic is scary.

The author feels that this club is completely useless and is holding us back.

Don't vomit, don't vomit quickly. Originally, I loved reading novels about invincible heroes. I plan to put it on the shelves and support a wave of it. But may I ask what you have been writing about lately. Just forget about all kinds of pig feet. He has also been writing extensively about how powerful his opponents are. Do you want to prove how stubborn you are? Seven or eight chapters in a row were written about this rival academy. Excuse me, am I here to see this new real protagonist? Even the two pictures on the shelves are about new protagonists, right? If you keep writing like this. Sorry. I have no intention of subscribing.

The boss of a listed company is a man. The boss of a listed company is a man, right?

Come on! It's been selling like hotcakes ever since it hit the shelves!

In the auction, soy sauce is still water except water

Water, the sea, it's all water. After playing in the arena for so long, you still haven't leveled up?

The plot of the non-protagonist should preferably end in one chapter or two at most, otherwise you won't be interested in reading anymore.

There are so many genuine books to read, but less than 10 are actually subscribed, not counting the completed ones. You are one of them, but you just don't see enough.

You can go the quality route Update by chance

Chapter 33: When I auctioned the soul crystal, I just said that one million was enough to buy a sixth-level soldier. Then I immediately successfully auctioned ten sixth-level demons for 6.5 Million. ? ? ? Is the devil the disgrace of the sixth-level soldiers?

That's right, he wants to be the boss's male favorite

Because my imagination is too small, I really can't think of any good modified creatures, so please use your imagination and participate actively. For example, the werewolves in the fortress can be transformed into corrosive werewolves or bloodthirsty werewolves. The corrosive werewolf's attack has its own corrosion. The bloodthirsty werewolf's attack power is more prominent, but its defense power is lower! Please follow my template! Creature: Werewolf Finished product: Bloodthirsty Werewolf Effect: Attack power increased by 5 (the attack of the arms will not be shown in the book, but this will be referred to) Price: 500rmb Transformation direction: arms, weapons. Makes the werewolf's power greater and its weapons sharper. Disadvantages: Because it requires a more flexible body, it cannot wear iron armor, so its defense power is low.

Collect various supporting characters, which can be heroes in various realities, or gods-given heroes, whether they are friends or enemies of the protagonist! All water friends are invited to speak enthusiastically!