The Doomsday Mage of the City

Emmm, as of chapter 22. Since it is only 60,000 words long, it is not easy to comment on the plot development here, so I will not mention it for now. Overall, I feel that there is nothing particularly outstanding at the moment. The writing is a bit white. Sometimes the psychological activities of some characters are relatively intensive, and the probability of exclamation marks is high... There is still a certain gap between it and excellence. Keep up the hard work💪 I personally think that the beginning is relatively dull. You can consider using a flashback method. At the beginning, you can write that Ye Chong felt that he had a dream. You can write a longer one as a prologue. Then write the beginning and end of the matter, and explain the origin of the protagonist first, otherwise it will be embarrassing if the protagonist suddenly faints after an introduction... That's all for now, I'll keep it up for a while, author, keep it up 🌹

I read the first chapter and it seemed okay. Keep reading. I support you. I recommend you every day.

Come on, author, I feel ok so far

Come on, author＾0＾~. Although the writing is not great, practice makes perfect. Except for those monsters, most people cannot develop it through hard work step by step. I don't say that the author can become a god with one book, but at least I wish the author good results. Let's set a goal: I hope the author will put it on the shelves and the average order will reach more than 1,000. In addition, seeing the author working so hard, I also made up my mind to write my own book. Although my writing skills are worse than the author's, I will persevere. My goal is to order 400 each and I will be satisfied 😄

The complicated and speechless human emotions made this book a waste of time

Very interesting, saved it! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

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This character creation is really genius. This woman's three-part three-person setting is really genius.