Holding Sword

Thoughts after reading: This is a rare time-travel novel, the protagonist's character is the best. Let me give the author a suggestion. In novels that have time connections, such as Jin Yong's books and Gu Long's books, most of the characters in these books are in the same timeline. The protagonist is shaped into a reaper of an era and leaves behind a legend, such as , it is said that at the arrival of each great age, the Blue Frost Sword Master will come out to harvest the heroes of the world. Each of these original novels can be regarded as a great age of that era. This writing is not only in line with the character of the protagonist in the author's writing, but also leaves a legend that runs through the entire timeline. It is left to the plot characters in the book to explore whether the legendary Green Frost Sword Master is the same person or a descendant of the previous sword master. In this way, the operability of the plot will be greatly deepened.

Come on, author, the book is very interesting, please write more and stop being a eunuch.

Whenever I see injustice, I want to learn the sword, but I know it is useless but study instead.

Regarding the concept of swords and sword energy, I have read so many novels: Thirteen Drops of Water (Low Demon World) and Weight Loss Expert Asking the Mirror (High Demon World). They are two novels with systematic descriptions of sword cultivation. What you practice is sword art. Washing, refining, tempering, and nourishing are all different. Sword cultivators live by the sword, die by the sword, and use it to achieve enlightenment. They attach great importance to life and death, and they are both good and evil. They are happy with their grudges. Many deceitful monsters can only be defeated by one sword. If there is no such awareness, how can we talk about the path of sword immortality? For example, the Fairy Gourd and Dao Dao contend, and the protagonist in Weiye's Fairy Trail relies on the power of the sword and only uses it as a murder weapon, but he basically practices the magic of the heavens and uses Qi to achieve Dao. In the mirror, there is a sword cultivator who only pursues the essence and purity. All the laws of the heavens only seek one. One sword repels hundreds of ways and destroys all laws. It is only because the sword energy is extremely refined and pure. The essence and the spirit are combined to transcend the sword intention, thus having supreme power. There is also a sword-shaped form derived from the spring wind and drizzle of all things. They are all sword energy. One sword generates ten thousand dharma, and all dharma returns to one sword. (The talisman system, from simple drawing of talismans to knowing the acupoints to stacking the acupoints to the true meaning) Among the masters of Dang Mo, he practiced sword practice since he was a child. He later learned the Seven Illusions and Nine True Spells, and used them to understand the sword. The essence of all the arts was integrated into the sword. Sword cultivators are all skilled in sword fighting. Sword cultivators are good at fighting, so they are as famous as Taoist Thunder Techniques. Taoist teachings are innate with a little aura, which is the origin of the soul, a talisman, or a thought. For the Fu Lu Sect, it is the Fu Lu, which is also the innate talisman. The so-called teaching means direct teaching to the depths of the soul. Not only is it deeply remembered, but it can also be understood overnight. Low-level demons can hide sword skills in their sleeves, while high-level demons have a huge treasure trove. They can hide flying swords with them or refine swords in their bodies. Each has its own way of raising and refining swords and sheathing them. Refining swords into sword pills, sword disks, flying swords, or swords like those of warriors can be carried in the hand, the sword never leaves the hand, etc. I will not list them all. I just feel that although holding the sword is a low-level magic, the content of the system at that time was a bit dry. It was just the skills in ancient and golden novels. I recommend you to refer to those systematic sword cultivation to make holding the sword better and better. Thank you. The white jade capital in the sky has five cities on the twelfth floor. Immortals caress my head, knotting my hair and receiving immortality. Wandering away from worldly pleasures leads to confusion and confusion. The ninety-six saint kings have empty names in the clouds. The world is a gamble, but the war cannot be forgotten. Try the strategy of overlord, and you will be crowned with glory. The fate of the time is a big mistake, and it is abandoned on the sea. If you learn to translate the sword from the sword, how can you become a writer? A sword cannot be defeated by ten thousand people, but a sword can be heard all over the world. Childish play is trivial, and I left Xijing at five o'clock. When I was about to leave, I burst into tears. I admire you for your generosity and talent, and you are praised as the best among all the heroes. Open a banquet to invite the ancestors to the tent to comfort this distant expedition. The pommel horse is like a floating cloud, sending me to the riding pavilion. The song is not satisfactory, the sun sets in Kunming in the white sky. When I arrived in Youzhou in October, the weather was like a star. The king abandoned the North Sea and swept the land to borrow the long whale. Breathing through hundreds of rivers, swallows can be destroyed.

Spring flowers and autumn have passed, Jiazi has gone in a hurry, and you will never return with your sword in hand

After reading it, I realized that the author's last book was also one that I had been following.

This book is actually more like martial arts. The author should not write too much about fairy tales. It's not because he's afraid that you won't be able to write well, but because he wants a good martial arts book.

Friendly reminder, fake system documentation! Abuse master! Very cool article! Love to pretend to be 13! The power system collapses! Acquired, innate, master, great master, entering the Tao. The protagonist has not yet practiced martial arts, but his peers are already on the verge of entering the Tao. In the early stage, he was a cold swordsman. In the middle stage, he suddenly established a force to dominate the countries. In the later stage, he was directly in the middle.

Friendly reminder for newcomers! ! ! This book is a systematic text on the surface, but in fact it is still a traditional martial arts novel. There is no interesting setting. The protagonist is tortured to death along the way and the supporting characters are killed. Be careful when entering the trap! ! ! !

It feels a bit pretentious, imitating the writing style of traditional martial arts novels. It's a pity that the plot is not smooth enough and feels a bit mysterious. It is more important to tell a clear story than to write beautifully.

It's good in the early stage, weak in the middle stage, and bleeding in the later stage. The wording and sentence by sentence are quite good, but in the later stage, I felt that it was always trying to make things up. The prerequisite for good writing is to be able to explain the plot clearly. Unfortunately, I was really confused later on.

A common problem among young writers is that there is too little foreshadowing and too much nonsense. The author is moved thousands of times and the readers are left confused.

To put it plainly, this book took a detour from the beginning! I started giving it up from then on! Before, I chased it every day, but then I didn't bother to watch it! The more I watch, the angrier I get. I just watched the ending, and I feel completely no longer happy!

... Why is there no female protagonist who is a eunuch? I feel that if the female protagonist is not worthy of the male protagonist in a novel like this, I would rather it be without a female protagonist I don't think the female protagonist needs to be good-looking or powerful, but to the protagonist, the female protagonist must be the most special one

If you have to write the protagonist as a monster, if you don't do it as a good person, wouldn't you be a swordsman? This book basically has everything worth reading

Personally, I don't read books with less than 2 million words…

Although some people think that the plot is a bit broken now, I actually appreciate the more extreme ruthless and even ruthless Meng Qiushui. Although there are various descriptions of swordsmanship now, there is one characteristic that coexists, and that is purity. But the purer it is, the easier it is to become in-depth and persistent. The so-called drawing a sword is to kill people, and the sword is to achieve the goal. Kendo does not admit hesitation and turning, and the sword has no regrets. Only the most direct and sharp emotions and character can better master the sword in the hand. And the ultimate character, the characteristics that the author wants to give to the protagonist can be seen from the first Jinyiwei world, and is it also a derivative of the swordsman who later became it? The deadline of death has been pressing in the main world from the beginning. Even if it seems to have a golden finger, each small world is struggling to gain strength and life span. After gaining strength, he was still unable to break the situation in the face of the general trend of the world. He was still unable to protect those around him, and his pursuit of power became more and more urgent and extreme. What has become like this now is just the madness and resentment caused by the last softness and support in the heart being torn away. From the middle of the corpse transformation, the author probably wanted Meng Qiushui to become a demon. . . . And now that the protagonist is so strong, if the author follows the previous progress, it will be difficult to develop the plot after returning to the main world. It may be that the writing is out of outline, or that it was planned from the beginning and skipped the plot connection in the middle.

I don't like to kill, but martial arts still like to be intentional, meaningful, joyful and insightful, to write the original story with the emotional settings, communication, euphemism, pain, and love for each character. The protagonists of the martial arts novels written by each master have various shortcomings and arrogance, but they all have a common feature is kindness. Writing the kind of meaning that you can see them in your heart, and see the world, I think it is more comfortable and chivalrous than immortal revenge.

I feel like those who practice swordsman have to cut off love, but in the end, they only cut off the love between men and women. What the hell, friendship, family affection, it's all love. They don't cut off any of these. They only cut off the love between men and women and say they focus on swords. This and that. It's like saying that you are a vegetarian because you don't eat meat, but you still eat ham. I can't understand it.

The protagonist's name is Qiu Shui, and the author's name is Meng Rui Qiu Shui. Hmm. . . . .

The character of the protagonist in these two chapters has collapsed, and the plot has collapsed...

I have been looking forward to it and never thought it would be over so soon. I have a true heart, which can dye the world of mortals and realize the great truth. The so-called three feet of autumn water is spotless. At that time, there were three feet of green frost and three feet of autumn water. Whether to cross or not, holding the sword for a moment will make it clear in your heart. Hold the sword and see you return, the autumn water will let the wind and thunder go!

There is no need for a heroine. There are so many stunning beauties in top brothels in every world that you can play with them until you get tired of them. In this book, after the protagonist kills people, he will find a top brothel to hire him and play with her for ten days and ten nights.

See Chapter 2, using corpses for food, and only 7 people are left after two years of training... This will consume a lot of people, this is a really stupid idea

The author's pretentious way of writing is off-putting, and the way he forcibly advances the plot is even more off-putting.

One person, one sword, one sword, one thought.

The novel can be regarded as a type of immortal martial arts. What is different from ordinary immortal martial arts is that the story is set to travel through low martial arts, medium martial arts, and high martial arts planes to practice swordsmanship. This is why many readers who like it praise it as the Eastern Infinite Style. The level of this book is ups and downs. The parts I personally approve of are the early and middle stages, which are relatively readable. But if you are really interested in this book, Brother Jiu, I would like to remind you that you must be careful about the beginning. The beginning is true. After the beginning, the readability is greatly improved. Otherwise, there will not be so many readers to praise it. Then, there is another book that went downhill again after the start of the Fengyun World copy, and the reading experience became worse again. The above is purely my personal opinion. After all, many readers think it is good from beginning to end and rate it highly. It all depends on personal preference. ---Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!

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In the past, an old friend went away with his sword, cutting off the spring breeze but refusing to return.

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