A World Controlled by the System

Author, um, maybe my expression is a little wrong... I don't mean that the protagonist's IQ is very low, I mean that the protagonist's mental age is a bit too low... How old is the protagonist? It was fine before, but when we got to the chapter of Two Realms Tower, for some reason the protagonist's mental age dropped crazily. I don't want the protagonist's IQ to be comparable to Colonel Chu, nor do I want the protagonist's bravery to be comparable to Zheng Zha. It just requires the protagonist to have the mentality he should have at his age. If you insist on making the protagonist's IQ suddenly become as witty as a monster, I don't like it either. In addition, the part where the soldiers suspect that the protagonist is the Two Worlds Tower should be changed. I almost couldn't survive it!

The author should not worry about his grades, he must endure loneliness. Great gods have gradually accumulated popularity. Those who are so-called gods with one book have also accumulated popularity for a period of time Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author of your book... You should be able to feel that this book is too bland, and because the front is very poisonous, this book is probably not going to be popular... If you, the author, want to make money by writing a book, I think it would be more appropriate for you to write another book. Of course, if you, the author, are not short of money and write books just for fun, are not afraid of being scolded, and don't care about the popularity... Then the author, you think I didn't say anything...

Why do I feel that the protagonist is the biggest event... He is not from this world.

Author, did you write the book for fun? You will lose us like this... And what is the book club group?

Mr. Gentleman, give golden cuteness to the boss

The author's writing is really good. He will definitely become the QQ Platinum Master. From now on, it will not be a problem to top the list╮(￣▽￣)╭

I feel like your writing style is a bit too comedic, and the whole book has a cheerful feel. It doesn't feel serious at all. In addition, the author, if you have time, you can read it from the beginning and look at your book as a reader, so that you can find many problems.

Author, I think we need to talk about book club groups and adding you as a friend.

This kind of writing will make you starve to death at the starting point

I really want to complain, your protagonist is too fake. As soon as the front foot fell in love with Li Ran, the back foot completely forgot about Li Ran, as if Li Ran did not exist. But it looks pretty good without these, so I'll support you. 😄😄😄

Messy, abrupt, and unreadable

Let's take a look🙂

I would like to ask weakly, is there a female protagonist?

I almost forgot about your book Oh, by the way I gave you the monthly pass you wanted Your book is full of interesting points.