Harry Potter: the Show and the Wizard

It's finally finished. I think the author's writing is very good 🙂. If I write more in the future, I will definitely give it a try 😜

Alas, I have recently read almost all the fan novels of Douluo Dalu and Harry Potter. There are too few words left and there is a shortage of books. Does the author have any recommendations? 😚. By the way, is it difficult to pass the technical secondary school entrance examination for junior college? 🥺

When will the finale happen? Will the protagonist stay here or return to his own world? I also want to ask if the author is male or female 😏

It won't be over 😅

Although I just realized that someone left a message with this question, I still want to explain that no matter how small a bottle of potion is, it cannot be just one mouthful, so Voldemort drank the potion when he passed through the fire. Wes did not know this. He only knew that Hermione came back because she drank the potion, so he followed the prompts and drank the other half and returned to the previous level. As for those who say, what if Voldemort is released randomly, they can only say, Harry, you died miserably.

I always felt like there was something missing in the book.

Many people think that my writing in the first few chapters was not good. Indeed, I admit that the writing style failed to grasp the details of other characters well. I have slowly changed it later, hoping to make it look better. However, I have indeed thought about Weiss. In the first year, Wes was 11 years old. He learned the profound black magic of Dragon Break in one go. His parents accompanied him in all the worlds he experienced. He had a smooth journey. What reason did he have to not be self-satisfied and think that he was invincible? Moreover, for an 11-year-old boy, the words of his parents are golden rules. His mother once told him that 'the magic here is very low-level', so when he faced the Dark Lord and Immorton, he probably didn't think that much at all. In his mind, the failure of the battle with the former was also due to insufficient information. After all, he held the sword and maintained suppression almost the whole time. For the latter, after he was injured, his first reaction was to get a sword, because he wanted his own swordsmanship to be stronger than that of 'Dragon Break'. After all, 'Dragon Break' had just been learned, and his own swordsmanship started from the moment he touched the sword. This is the year that Weiss has moved towards a clear understanding of herself. The next year, when Weiss was 12 years old, he began to think because of his experience last year. He began to try other methods to face his enemies. During the vacation, he met a girl who would risk her life to come to him. This year, I wrote about family affection and a little bit of love. In the third year, Wes was 13 years old. His enemy, a mouse? No! It was the first time that Weiss understood what it felt like when someone close to him died, and how helpless he felt when his life passed away. At the same time this year, his body began to change, and erosion inevitably began. In the fourth year, Wes was 14 years old. His enemies were the Dark Lord and... Hermione hiding behind the scenes. He began to cherish the people around him, and he wanted to protect his friends. In this year, his body began to mature, he no longer took the initiative to contact his mother, and he began to learn to be independent. But it was very obvious that in the first IQ confrontation between him and Voldemort, he lost. He just followed Voldemort's plan. In the fifth year, when Wes was 15 years old, he became a Death Eater. As an aside, no one has seen the problem that Weiss can stop and delay the release of Dragon Break, and that he can also use other magic while using Dragon Break? Fortunately, I wrote a chapter later where he used the earth element and the fire element at the same time. With just one spell, he lost consciousness. Speaking of which, do some people still think that he has a physique that is 'light element-friendly'? In other words, is the 'light element affinity' real? Why did his family take Weiss to the technology side to find a doctor when they had the best treatment method of 'light element'? The author of my bad taste? Well... It is undeniable that there is a possibility of this... Also, Lina has been here several times before, there must be a reason, right? Pure tourism? Does anyone really believe it? A person who uses magic to make a living. She is in a low magic world, and the natural magic power is so scarce that there is no large-scale magic in this world. She probably feels the same as a fish running to the shore. No one thinks that she cannot use magic just by using a 'Heavy Breaking Slash'. Is this normal? Suppression of the world's will? Haha... That's Lina Imbas, that's the Golden Demon...

Wow, Magic Wizard, it's such an old cartoon, I miss it! Dragon Breaking Slash, Breaking Slash, Sword of Light.

This book has been ghostwritten since the beginning of the Prisoner's Volume. It has added a lot of shortcomings. It is bullying, self-centered, strong-minded, unscrupulous. It has changed from good order to chaotic evil. The change is so sudden that I have to suspect that it has been ghostwritten.

I always feel like there are missing chapters, or that one chapter was changed before it was finished, and the story feels incoherent.

After reading Chapter 9, this is not a show-off mage. It feels like there is no common sense at all. A family of magic has no common sense at all. This is a ** mage.

I have watched the Harry Potter series of movies several times, but I am still unsatisfied I have also read the original works of the Harry Potter series, and I am still unsatisfied Then I searched the entire Internet for Harry Potter-related fan novels, and I have read more than a dozen of them, but I am still unsatisfied My personal opinion on fan novels, I searched for fan novels because I am still unsatisfied. I hope to continue to see the original story, hoping to make up for the shortcomings of the original work, and hope for a smoother reading experience and smoother story development. The most important thing is. Being loyal to the original work is the same as adapting a novel into a movie or TV series. After reading dozens of fanfics and finishing a dozen of them, the best experience is with articles that are true to the original work. I'm really tired of the various magic modifications and expansions by the authors. Even if you copy the book, it is much better than stuffing in all kinds of inexplicable settings. The settings that are especially inserted cannot be smoothly unfolded. Especially many authors have never read the original works. Especially many authors can't write stories by relying on bad Internet memes and love. Love plot chapter Although this book introduces many non-original stories, the plot is also faithful to the original work I still hope to see similar stories in the original work in fan fiction For those who hope to develop non-original works, why do you use Harry Potter or Hogwarts? The stories are all different, why can't we develop our own story world? That would just make me feel really hot.

Author, you should finally write about getting together with the heroine and leaving a perfect ending. How about writing another HP book? There are fewer and fewer good HP articles now.

This book is pretty good, but next time the author writes another book, he won't describe too much dialogue, otherwise it will easily feel like a running account.

I didn't sign a contract. . . You are so strong

Finished? Is this the end? What about the ending? ? ?

Although I haven't watched it, there is a problem. You are generating electricity with love! ?

Show off the wizard? The son of the woman who robbed pirates?

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the comments section, I thought the author was very cute. Unfortunately, I don't know much about HP. I stumbled into it by looking for traditional mage texts. I'll add it to my bookshelf first and read it later when I'm interested.

Um, the timeline for The Mummy Returns is wrong. The Mummy 1 should be around 194

I haven't read it yet, but I read the comments. I don't know why but I just wanted to comment 😠

After reading the comments, the author is really responsible.

Author I'm about to start school, so I'll end it as soon as possible if possible 😢

I would like to give you a suggestion. There is no need to write that preface. You can change the reason or use the power of the magician to show off. If you write about going from high magic to low magic inexplicably like this, it will make people confused, and it is also uninteresting.

1. Follow the plot of the original work and unfold it in different ways 2. The protagonist's IQ and personality are online, there are no bad jokes to fill the air, and there is no inexplicable nonsense about the original settings 3. Appropriate amount of innovation is inserted, and there is some development after the end of the original plot This is a good book HP fanfic The author's postscript at the end is much better than the beginning In this state, creating a fanfic that follows the original plot as much as possible, and then develops innovation after solving the old problems, will be among the top 3 masterpieces of HP fanfics