The Legend of the Witch Mercenary in the Legend of Fulun

This book is not like an online article. It's a bit like a novel. .

I hope the author will look back at the novel he wrote in two years. 1. I only read the first two chapters, but I didn't understand it very clearly. It seemed like someone wanted to get married, but he didn't want to, and then he found someone to kidnap him. 2. First of all, I don't know what the story is like, but this description makes me feel really awkward. (Believe me, author, you will feel awkward when you look back in two years. You may not be able to notice it now because you have that scene in your mind. Through your own words and associations, you can restore the corresponding picture in your mind, but it feels awkward for no reason.) 3. There are some words that feel inappropriate. For example, the steward said, "Hey, Steward Feng, you're here!" The waiter led the way diligently and said, "Steward Feng, you haven't been here for a while. Our shopkeeper has been talking about you! No, we have reserved number C for you on the second floor! There is also your favorite steamed sea bass!" 4. I want to say that writing a million words is really awesome. However, the title of the book should also have an intuitive point of view.

Although I respect people who have dreams, the results of this book are too disastrous.

5 Comments, 3 fans and 320,000 words. My interest was piqued even before I read it. How is this done? . .

When I read the introduction, I thought of Magic Wizard

Originally this book was not easy, but some book reviews were harmonized

This book is quite good. . Why is it so popular?

It's interesting to see the introduction. Let's read it first and then talk about it.

The plot appeal of Western Fantasy is already very small. Although the writing is good, I personally think it should be quite niche. In addition, the protagonist is a local and there is no sense of immersion. Thirdly, after reading more than a dozen chapters, I don't know who the protagonist is. These three points combined are not to my taste.

Female protagonist? Then shouldn't you go to a female channel?

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

If you want to write about female protagonists, go to female channels. They are all about male protagonists.

What I'm looking for is a Western fantasy mercenary type book with more adventure and more characterization. Author, do you still plan to write this book? Is it the type I want to read? Sorry, I don't have time to test the poison myself.

The author is so serious and polite, she must be a girl.

Magical novels, I like them very much, brother, I also write fantasy novels, and the results of the book are almost the same as yours... Come on, brother, give me a hug 😭, leave a comment when you have time, and give me a ticket so I can write it down

Did you sign a contract with tens of thousands of words? Normally, if you sign a contract and have recommendations, your results won't be too bad 😰