Mount and Blade: a New Era of Winds of War

Why does Qiqianwen use Baili Shouyue as the cover? . . Those who don't know think you are writing about King of Glory. .

Visit the grave. . . Raised to death. . . There is one less person to write about riding and slashing. . .

First of all, the first thing that is certain is that the author's subject matter attracted me, because to be honest, novels on the theme of horseback riding and slashing are still rare, and they will definitely attract a certain group of readers. Secondly, I was a little surprised, because I have always felt that this type of subject matter is more difficult to construct into a novel, mainly because the perspective of the characters is difficult to position, but after reading Da Da's work, I felt that it was handled very well. Another thing I think is the most important thing is the fun. The language style of the characters and the setting of the storyline are very interesting. This is a highlight of the novel and I hope to keep it. However, after reading Dada's works, I also discovered some issues that I think are important. I hope Dada will pay attention to them, and I hope Haihan will forgive me for any shortcomings. First of all, as a special literary subject of online novels, the rhythm of the plot is very important, but the early plot of the novel is too slow and lengthy. Secondly, the character materials are not rich enough, the characters are not identifiable, and the shaping techniques are single. Again, the main story line is not clear enough, and the plot lines are not clear enough. Another point is typos, which seriously affects the reading experience. ... I hope the author will pay more attention to the above points. Of course, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and the later stages of the work are in a good state. It is a work worth reading. Come on.

Brother, with your update speed, it will only take you a year and a month to put it on the shelves. . .

Your style is quite out of the ordinary. . .