Reborn in 1990

If you want to write about a devoted lover or a devoted lover in a harem, then don't write about him having ambiguous relationships with so many women.

I don't know what kind of novel you're trying to write. If it's a wish-fulfillment novel, and everyone else is threatening the protagonist like this, how can the protagonist still point out a way to get rich? I was already following this one of your books, but now I'm not following any of them anymore.

Is this about underworld events or gangsters?

The first chapter is enough to discourage readers; it's an insult to reborn characters.

Don't you deserve an extra chapter after receiving 50,000 points in tips? You're something else! Blocked!

Unlike urban novels, this is a gangster novel. I don't know what the author was trying to write, and the style is too simple. I don't know how to describe it.

Poison

With such poor results, doesn't the author realize there's a problem with his writing?

How big would the protagonist's basket have to be to fit an old-fashioned sewing machine that's 1 meter long and half a meter wide? The sewing machine, table, and foot pedal alone would weigh over 70 pounds. I'd have a hard time lifting that myself, and the protagonist, only 17 years old, can carry it around like that.

He wrote so many ambiguous relationships with girls, but only married one. He seemed affectionate but was actually heartless. Is this the legendary "giving away women"? He wrote a novel with a wish-fulfillment theme but didn't even dare to start a harem.