Interstellar System: Rise of an Empire

I am so fascinated by this book. It feels like writing a paragraph here and a paragraph there and then putting them together again. I don't know what it is talking about.

Rubbish. There is a system but it is not fully utilized. What's the use? We've already built a Dyson sphere. Are we still afraid of warships that are beyond the current technology?

There are a bit few female leads, can you add a few more?

Can the names of the protagonists be unified? In the first paragraph, it's Aaron, and in the next paragraph, it's Lin Xiaozheng. . . . It looks very tiring😅

I have a few questions. One is that the author of the world view of this world has not explained it well. Why does the United Nations also use equipment such as Viking fighters, siege tanks, and Banshee fighters, but some soldiers have never seen fire chariots, orbital bases, and the like? Also, if the local human beings have the same equipment as the protagonist, what advantage can the protagonist use to save the world? . .

Must subscribe for the sake of faith

Wow, the author is actually a beast

Tried poison, summary: 1. There is a problem with punctuation and sentence segmentation. 2. The expression of emotions is not clear. It is very depressing from beginning to end, even in the passionate scenes. 3. The world line that the author wants to publish is not understandable. It is confusing. 4. The behavior and analysis of the protagonist who is illogical and intellectual.

With all due respect, the star character is the last of the three races.

I find Pighorn, too self-centered. At first I thought he was going to be the emperor, but now I find that he is too unqualified and does not have the appearance of being a torch to lead hope. And isn't he a time traveler? Why does it feel like he doesn't know anything and is just a loser who suddenly has countless money?

I recommend everyone to check it out and take StarCraft with you wherever you go. There are more than 1,600 pictures, written by an old StarCraft player. Very well written.

It's full of water! Even if you don't respect the basic technology settings, you actually completed the construction of the Dyson sphere in order to build the ship? ! How many fleets are this amount of work and resources enough to build?

I know every word, and I can't even tell what you want to say in a paragraph. Talk about it in a roundabout way?

Ahem, let me say a few words. I only saw the second one and didn't want to read it because it was too fake. You mean he has never played StarCraft at all. What exoskeleton powered armor? That is cmc light powered armor, the marauder is cmc200, and the fire bat is cmc600. This is still the most basic knowledge of military types. You still have exoskeletons. Are you from the Undead War? The zerg don't eat. They only rely on trace elements in the carpet for supplementation. They only eat meat for biomass. They get the biomass of any living creature. You can see if the zerg can't touch it. The level of Nefash on the frozen planet in the Heart of the Swarm also indirectly said that the zerg needs You don't understand a large amount of biomass to unlock a new imperial examination. Even the adjutant's report was completely wrong. It should be that a large number of zerg lifeform signals were detected. The planet's surface carpet coverage reached 100%. There are also large lifeform signals under the earth's crust that are drilling out of the surface. I didn't even know you were writing a crappy interstellar novel. You couldn't stand it just in the early stages. StarCraft players don't think highly of you, and ordinary book friends can't even understand you. You wrote a crappy novel.

Really, I feel like the author's writing style has a very weird feel to it. How should I put it? It feels like foreign literature has been machine-translated into Chinese.

I really can't stand it, so I took a look at the comment section. It's really too messy. Since there is an interstellar system that can jump across space, there is no interstellar interest at all after Heavy Factory. It is an interstellar war book selling dog meat in sheep's clothing, and it is also written in a mess.

The writing is terrible, forget about the details, other readers have already pointed them out. The key lies in the big picture. It doesn't even have the ability to tell a clear story about the beginning and the end. The inexplicable start, the inexplicable appearance and supporting roles, inexplicably moved me. It's as if everyone inside is not fighting for the survival of racial opposition, but fighting to impress themselves. In summary, writing with details is a trivial matter. The most important thing is to have the ability to tell stories first. It is recommended that the author first read more white texts and learn how to write a "story" in the simplest way. Eat the food one bite at a time, walk the road step by step, and throw away those inexplicable emotions you have.

Although the book has been discarded, the author's eunuch spirit deserves encouragement. Please recommend it occasionally.

I really can't stand it. The sentences are too confusing. There is no background or scene. The first sentence does not match the next sentence. Does the author just write whatever comes to his mind when he writes?

I admire the author for being so cool. The main character has no sense of innocence. There are so many accessories that make me vomit. It's so obvious. Sima's supporting role is so gaudy.

Where is the main plot? ? Where is the content? ? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

I held my breath and looked at dozens of pictures and couldn't stand it any longer. I'm sorry 🙂

Recommend a new book "StarCraft: The Rise of the Human Race" Come and taste the poison, maybe it won't kill you, but if it kills you, I have an antidote

The general plot is that the protagonist is a time traveler with an interstellar human system, and the system has the memory of the demise of the human race thousands of years later in the current universe. The protagonist breaks the republican system, proclaims himself emperor, and concentrates his power to deal with the Zerg invasion.

Most of Seven Points' novels teach people how to be a virgin and how to be a dog. So strange

Haha, since I was persuaded to quit by the protagonist's name in the character column

Do you want to see what you can write?

The author writes very well, with many typos and omissions

I would like to ask if this novel is from the interstellar age. The weapons and other things do not feel like the interstellar age. The laser weapon is the minimum standard. Since it is the interstellar age, it should look like an interstellar civilization. Hey, I may have read too many scientific and technological articles, so I will pick it up.

Writing about a foreign land, I thought it would be Sin City, Warhammer, Star Wars, etc. The language is not rigorous at the beginning and the pace is slow. If you try some Star Wars mercenary plot, you will probably die of eunuchs.