Bone King's Universal Grocery Store

The pace of this book is very good, not laggy at all, and each chapter is more or less laying the groundwork for the plot. However, one thing I am not satisfied with is that the child Misha's heart has been a bit too sad so far. Every time I write about her, I always feel that this child is forcing a smile, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I hope the author can make the child really laugh as soon as possible.

It is extremely poisonous. The protagonist's identity as an undead is really useless. When in contact with people, it is very normal. Others don't feel awkward. Moreover, others know that the protagonist is countless times more powerful than him, but they dare to threaten the protagonist. For example, at the beginning, the level 5 brother magician from the Magic Guild actually dares to bargain with the protagonist after knowing the protagonist's strength. Is it normal? It is poisonous all the way, and a woman threatens the protagonist at the auction. The protagonist touches and explains again. Goodbye, he died of poisonous hair and licked the dog.

Looking at the title, I thought it was a fanfic of Overlord. .

First! This is not a Gu Aotian fan! It will be very poisonous at the beginning, so don't watch it if you have low poison resistance

I have quietly started a new book again. The author is still more suitable for writing this type of novel. I like your narrative style very much and will always support it. Come on!

I give a thumbs up to the single heroine, the stallion can't stand it, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, and by the way, what's the heroine's name and how was her role?

Do you ever feel that the protagonist is too nice to the women around you?

The setting that the protagonist is an undead creature feels useless. I feel that the protagonist is a normal person and the plot can completely go on. Of course, it may be related to the undead identity of the protagonist in the later stage. But in the early stage, it felt like it had no special features. Even if the protagonist didn't show his purple soul, I almost forgot that he was an undead, and it felt like a normal person. I don't want to be as evil as the Bone King, but it's better to feel a little more indifferent, and then transition to normal.

The writing is concise and the plot is fast. There are no routines or anything, and there are no IQ problems. It is just too white, and some transitions are a bit stiff...

It's not the world of Bone King, so don't use the name of Bone King

At present, the author has written Chapter 61, and the undead in Death Canyon have begun to appear. The author said that this is the beginning of the main plot, and the main plot should be related to the undead. God is mentioned many times in the front of the book, but the existence of God is denied in the form of self-questions and answers. I guess this point is quite important. Then there is the reshaping of the body, which should be a branch line and play a role in connecting the main line. Finally, there is the most important grocery store. After all, the title of the book is the grocery store. There should be so much important information at the moment.

The protagonist does not have the feeling of being an undead. You can write this novel if you change the species of the protagonist to any other species. It is a complete set of questions, just like having a template.

I couldn't even finish the first chapter.

Uh, I thought it was fan fiction based on the cover, but who knew it wasn't? 🤐🤐🤐

I like Dada's works, and I hope everyone will update more and create better content. I also hope to collect a lot of my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

Is there a river crab mythical beast? If not, forget it.

I followed the author's Naruto fanfic all the way to this book. I am an old bookworm. I have been reading novels since my second year of high school until I graduated from graduate school. After I started working, I don't know why I didn't like to read fantasy and urban novels. Instead, I fell in love with fanfics. I happened to see the author's Naruto fanfic at that time. There is a saying that the book was really poisonous at the beginning. I clicked it and exited it, then exited it again, and finally jumped more than 20 times. I started reading Chapter 1, and then I found that the author's writing ideas are really clear. His books have never had obvious bugs, and there are no obvious mentally retarded plots, so I followed him. Until today, the book was finished in a hurry. To be honest, I was a little disappointed and felt that there were a lot of things unfinished. But it doesn't matter. After all, the author only works part-time and his life is important. As you said, we will see you in August.

I can still read the first few chapters, but the more I read, the worse it gets.