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The plot of Nangong Nuxia was not handled very well. Lin Caiwei followed the protagonist through the ups and downs along the way, from an ignorant little girl to a heroine who can stand alone, and she has always been accompanied by Guiwei. What I hope to see is that the little girl and Gui Cui support each other, Gui Wei teaches Caiwei to fall in love, Cai Wei takes care of Gui Wei and teaches her, and the apprentice falls in love with the master. Instead of the Nangong heroine who was relieved after being suddenly rescued by Gui Crying, Gui Crying suddenly had an enlightenment and developed feelings for Nangong, whom he had not seen for a long time. This plot made me feel like someone was forcing me to eat the food. Although the taste was just okay, this sudden feeling without a gradual process made people very uncomfortable. The author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, so please read more books and see how other authors handle them. In addition, I still want to thank the author for bringing me this unsatisfactory but impressive plot, thank you!

The fighting style and power system are more realistic. It can almost be regarded as a popular science article on cold weapons and weapon martial arts. It is a very interesting work.

The main elements can actually be summarized as: ghosts, martial arts, adventure, legendary creatures (dragons and phoenixes...), Regional annexation The world view from the more than 500 chapters I have seen so far is: It is divided into four major continents, domestic and overseas, sects and regional owners; the protagonist is from "Nanshan", annexation wars between countries continue, and the contradiction between humans and ghosts intensifies. The protagonist's growth process is to constantly switch between crisis, practice, and adventure. Visual inspection advantages: 1. It creates a bizarre world, the author does not have too many time-travel dramas, and the writing is not easily constrained. 2. The characters have different personalities. The protagonist does not have a harem, there are many realms, and there are not many challenges such as leapfrogging. Visual disadvantages: 1. Too many film and television elements are integrated, and the connection between each story section of the protagonist's adventure is not close enough. The main line is not clear enough. 2. The emotional scenes are too embarrassing. After more than 300 chapters, the "funny style" becomes inconsistent and cannot be well integrated with the previous ghost, cold and cruel style. 3. The character of the protagonist is affected by the supporting characters, but the character of the protagonist is upstaged by the supporting characters, and the character of the supporting characters is not very outstanding. 4. It lacks true human feelings and warmth, and the main character's personality is not positive enough (Ghost Crying is a bit individualistic). All things in the world and all tastes in life are mostly positive. It is recommended that the author read more books ("The First Sequence", "I Want to Return to the World", "Reincarnation Paradise", "The Indescribable Cyberpunk"...); ("Those Things in the Ming Dynasty", "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", Cao Wenxuan Series, Liu Cixin Series). Also: Book friends believe that books are good or bad in different ways, so do not view the author's works subjectively or based on your personal likes and dislikes. If you like it, support it; if you don't like it, delete it. (Of course, some vile and vulgar works should be reported) Brother Hei's book lacks promotion. The next book must be high-profile, otherwise it will be too low-profile again.

It's too early to fight Xingtian, really too early, and it completely exposes the book's biggest flaw, the unclear force value, and can't ignore it. You could have ignored this problem and continued reading, but now that you can fight Xing Tian, ​​who will you fight next? Isn't it unnatural that you can't kill a nameless monster with just one blow?

The author's writing style is very good. This book made me excited. I have subscribed to it. I also hope that the author will support my novel Chuxiong's World. We can cooperate and develop together for mutual benefit (ꈍᴗꈍ), hahahaha... Thank you in advance for your support!

Recommended by Kan Longkong, the trial reading is completed, and the food and grass are being updated. Well, the story is good, but I personally feel there are two shortcomings. 1. The title of the book gives readers the impression of being supernatural. 2. Introduction. The introduction gives readers the impression of traditional martial arts. The problem is that these two categories are niche categories. For example, when I am looking for a book, I first have an impression of the title of the book when browsing the list. I then click on the category I like to see if the introduction is interesting. If there is something interesting, I look at the table of contents to see if I feel like it. Finally, I try to read the beginning of chapters 5-10 to decide whether to follow up. When I first read the title of this book, I thought it was supernatural, so I didn't want to read it; Even when I read it again, when I looked at the introduction, I felt it was Chuanwu, so I didn't want to read it. So now this book relies on word-of-mouth recommendations from readers. This kind of recommendation will not attract traffic unless the edition is slaughtered. ———— The title of the book cannot be changed, so change the introduction decisively.

I laughed so hard when I saw the latest chapter. The protagonist pretended too much, and was worshiped as a god. He was also called Chang Geng Xingjun, which means Taibai Jinxing. From now on, please call the protagonist Taibaijin Xinggui😂😂😂😂

It started off amazingly, but then plummeted. The appearance of Caiwei was simply poisonous, the emotions came out of nowhere, and the characters were not likable at all. It was basically a manifestation of the author's literary illness, which severely deducted points. The cold and stern writing style is no longer visible, and the heroic spirit of one man, one horse and one sword is also gone. The humor is extremely boring, there is no main line, and the power system is chaotic. Alas, it is a great pity. Samsung can make do with reading about 100,000 words.

The new book "Chu Xiong's World" is online! You will be given the best equipment and a flying sword at the beginning. You can choose the innocent male protagonist and the tender female director. The plot is exciting. The ending of a loving father and a filial son, harmonious brothers and family reunion will ensure your satisfaction. Please support me!

On the seventh day of the seventh lunar month, the magpies arrived and built a bridge, and the fairies passed by, entering the mortal world and entering the lake. I would like to advise you, pretty cowherd, don't be curious, return home early, mother is at home, looking forward to it. It's not dark yet, my son returns home, he closes the door quickly, steams moon cakes, worships the moon god, and sleeps happily. It was already dark, the son had not returned, the old mother was sad, her face was full of tears, dark clouds came and covered the moon. By the lakeside, corpses were found. The remaining skins and bones of cattle were wrapped into balls and buried together. There is a white robe hanging in the sky. There are gaps in it, but blood and tears fill them up. There are no gaps anymore. It is called the robe of heaven. The widowed mother cried, the queen mother remained silent, took the silver hairpin, tore her clothes, half in the east and half in the west. On the east mountain, there are gods, wearing cloud crowns and cloud boots, coming down the mountain to give money. The mother was wealthy but had no children. She was sitting in her house, wasting away day by day, and was alone on her death bed. Even in the winter, it snowed heavily, the house collapsed, the money was buried, the corpse sat up, and blood and tears flowed. Crows arrive and peck at the carrion. Villagers arrive, burn the bones, take the ashes and scatter them into the lake. Another year, I saw a fairy, with eight hands, deceiving the Cowherd, with a mouthful, and only the bones were left. The cow brays, the fairy laughs, the cow skin is peeled off, the bones and flesh are removed, the belly is round, and the white silk is spit out.

After reading it, the writing is to my liking, but it would be better to pay attention to the missing words and typos.

Who can tell me what the hell is this introduction to the Three Character Classic? It looks like a dark version of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl. Could this be a dark version of the book?

So this Weaver Girl is actually a Spider Girl? This seamless heavenly garment is made of silk.

The most disgusting thing is that when you open a new book, you delete the introduction to the original book.

I think Daoma and Guiwei are quite similar.

Why was the introduction deleted and replaced with an advertisement for the new book? ? ? Isn't it okay to add ads to the introduction? It's like giving birth to a child. If you give birth to a small one, you don't care whether the older one lives or lives? ? ? Irresponsible author! ! ! !

I think it's quite interesting. Maybe it's because readers have read too many novels that use levels to divide realms 😥

After reading the free chapter, the pig's trotters were sent to hell by the evil spirits from hell, and then crawled out of hell and killed the evil people to gain merit, and then they could start a new life. Then a mortal body fights Xing Tian? When it came time to kill General White Wolf, because the merits of killing him were greater than the merits, I didn't kill him. I felt that there was something wrong with the merits and what light should I use. If you are not controlled, then how can you not be controlled by light? The power system has collapsed since the day of killing, and the three major countries in the previous chapter are useless

Wow, this introduction to the Three Character Classic makes me shudder when I think about it carefully.

The author's introduction is really hard to describe in one sentence. If you write this, anyone who came out of a poor family in ten years would not be interested, let alone someone who chooses liberal arts.

Me too, regarding the performance of the protagonist Lanruo Temple, he kills immortals, don't tease me, forcibly setting the plot, the force value collapsed, everything happened in seconds, I vomited here

The writing is not fluent enough, but there is a lot of room for growth. Many great authors are getting better and better as they write. Finally, they change their vests and become gods with one book as a newcomer.

The story is set in a chaotic world like the Three Kingdoms. The protagonist, who was trapped into hell by the system, accidentally escaped and time-traveled into the body of a palace guard who had just died in battle, becoming a half-corpse and half-demon monster. After that, the protagonist's predecessors merged into one body in this life. From then on, in order to obtain merit in the previous life and erase the mark of hell, and in order to expel all the injustice in his chest in this life, he slayed demons and conquered the world along the way. This is a typical novel that starts high and goes low. The early stage is really at the level of a fairy tale. Especially the cool worldview created by the cold writing style at the beginning of the novel is simply eye-catching. The tactile delivery of the story makes you immersed in the scene. Generally speaking, the protagonist has an online IQ, is decisive in killing, not a nun, not a dragon, and his actions are fierce but principled. The supporting characters act in line with the story setting, the plot structure is reasonable, the story content is substantial, the battle scenes are exciting, and the emotional scenes are quite satisfactory, not artificial, not boring, as a fantasy book For a cool novel, it is probably enough. In addition, we need to pay attention to the fact that the world structure of this book uses a large number of mythological characters to reset, but readers can easily substitute the images and settings of these mythical characters themselves. This may be due to the author's lack of consideration when writing, so here is a reminder for everyone. ----Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Book Desolation" Come to us for the book desolation!!!

I have read this book back and forth several times. I personally think it is very good. There are no boundaries. You will only know if you have read it or not. Although it ended in a hurry, it is still a very interesting book. When will the author publish a new book? ?

Most of the novels that inexplicably accepted women like this were written by history, and I was immediately persuaded to quit. It was good at first, a cold-faced swordsman, but suddenly he accepted a useless woman. It was really a jerk.

It was okay until I killed the Great Immortal Zhenyuan, especially the power system that does not require regular monster fighting and upgrades is quite amazing. Although there are problems with the writing and the protagonist's personality breaks down from time to time, the flaws are not concealed. After killing the Great Immortal Zhenyuan, it felt like a long series of elementary school student compositions. When I went to Ziyun Mountain, it was even more serious. It took a few supporting characters who would have no role in the future to write a chapter. I can't stand it any longer, so I'll just finish it when I get to the Great Immortal Zhenyuan.

What do you mean? ? Is this an endorsement for Pinduoduo? ?

When I read it, I felt like I was playing a wolf?

Recommended for: Readers who are extremely fond of dark, scary, and desperate novels. Readers with a strong interest in the elements of the Cthulhu mythology (weird, crazy, indescribable). Readers who are tired of traditional fairy tale routines and are looking for extremely anti-routine and subversive settings. Readers who can accept that the protagonist is "inhuman" with strong tragic and anti-heroic qualities. Readers who do not have high requirements for the exquisiteness of writing, but who value the impact and atmosphere of setting more. Not recommended for: Readers who prefer a relaxing, refreshing and positive reading experience. Readers who cannot accept too much blood, violence, and twisted descriptions. Readers who are indifferent to the Cthulhu style or have difficulty understanding the obscure setting. Readers who want to see the protagonist clearly grow, upgrade, and achieve great things. Readers who have high requirements for smoothness and delicacy of writing. All in all, "The First Cut" is a work that bravely challenges readers' comfort zone and has an extremely strong style. It is not a "joyful novel" in the traditional sense, but a dark fable that requires readers to be mentally prepared to immerse themselves in it. Its value lies in its unique setting and atmosphere, but its extreme style is also destined to make it a niche work with divided reviews. If you are interested in the above highlights and can tolerate its dark tone, then it is definitely worth a try; otherwise, proceed with caution.

I didn't want to read it after about 40 chapters. The whole book felt inexplicable to me. So, although the writing was good, it felt a bit confusing and normal writing.